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Upasna

@Toulup

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

13:00

Small village in forest

Grandma(seeing Ramesh worried): Kya baat hai? (What's the matter?)

Ramesh: Kuch nahi. Kya naam batayi thi aapne? Haan, Bihaan. Vo uth gaya aur mujhe aise goor raha tha jaise vo mujhe jaanta hai ya maine kuch galat kiya. (Nothing. What is the naam? Yes, Bihaan. He was staring at me as if he knew me and I have done something wrong.)

Raja: Acha, vo uth gaya. Mujhe usey kuch poochna hai. (He got up. I have to ask him something.)
Saying this Raja went to see Bihaan.

Grandma( noticing Ramesh was still worried): Arey beta, fikar mat kar. Use koi galat phahamee hogi. Tum 15 saalon se humare saath reh rahe ho. Jab tum shehar mein the tum bahut chote the. Aur pehle kabhi bhi yahan par nahi aaya. To vo tumhe kaise jaan sakta hai?( Don't worry. He must be having some misunderstandings. You have been staying here for 15 years. When you were living in the town, you were a child. And he has never come here before. So how will he know you?)

Ramesh: Kash kabhi aata hi nahi. Darta hoon kahin police yahan par na aaye. (I wish he did not come. I fear that the police will come here.)

Grandma: Vo yahan pe aaya tha ya tum log lekar laaye the. Rahi baat police ki, weh 2 hafton se nahi aaye, tih kya ab aayenge.( Did he come here or you brought him here? About the police, they did not come here since 2 weeks, will they now come here.)

Kal Vimal aa raha hai. Bihaan se uska pata poochna hai. Kam se kam uske ghar wale ko uska haal ka pata ho.( Tomorrow Vimal is coming. We must ask Bihaan his address. At least his family will know how he is.)

Ramesh: App hi pooch lijiye (You ask him.)

Inside the hut
Raju: Kumbhkaran vale chacha, kya saj mein phone se photo khichi ja sakti hai?( Uncle who keeps sleeping, can we really take photos using a phone?)
Bihaan: Haan. (Yes)
Raju: Par kaise? ( But how?)
Bihaan: Agar mera phone yahan pe hota to main tumhe dikha sakta tha. (If my phone was here, I could have shown you.)
Raju started to ask more questions. Bihaan smiled, temporarily forgetting his worries. He was a curious child who wanted to know more about the outside world.

Then Grandma entered the room, bringing with her some more soup.

Grandma: Tum kahan rehte ho? Tumhare ghar wale bahut pareshaan hongey. (Where do you live? Your family members must be worried about you.)
'Pandey Nivas,' he blurted out.

Edited by Toulup - 8 years ago

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Upasna

@Toulup

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Finally, I have written a whole episode at one go.

11:00

Thahaan's room

Thapki: 'Paan bhaiya!'

Paan: 'Humne sunna ki Bihaan...' (I heard that Bihaan...)

Thapki interrupted him.

Thapki: Kuch nahi hua hai usey. Bas vo bhi laapata hai. (Nothing has happened to him. It's just that he has also disappeared.)

Paan: Vo bhi matlab? Akhir hua kya tha? ( What do you mean by also? Afterall what has happened?)

Thapki narrated how Amma tried to force Bani to marry Prince and shot Bihaan and Bani left PN.

Thapki: Bhaiya, main aapse baad mein baat karungi. Abhi Bani ko dhoodne jaa rahi hoon. (I'll talk to you later. I am going to search for Bani.)

Paan: Theek hai. Agar humare madat ki zaroorat ho, to bata dena. (Okay. If you need my help, then tell me.)

Thapki hurried downstairs. She was about to leave the house when Vasu stopped her.

Vasu: Tum Bohipur nahi jaa sakte ho. Dhruv ko phone aaya tha. Vo ilaka bahut khatarnak hai. Aur aaj raat ko vahan pe curfew hoga. (You cannot go to Bohipur. Dhruv had called. That area is dangerous. And today at night, there will be a curfew.)

Thapki: Agar mere liye khatarnak hai to Bani ki liye bhi hoga. Main agar abhi jaaon to raat hone se pehle pahench jaoongi aur Bani ko lekar vapas aaoongi. (If it is dangerous for me, it will be the same for Bani. If I go now, then before night I will be back with Bani.)

Vasu: Hum sab chahetey hai ki Bani humare saath ho, sirf tum nahi. Kal tum Dhruv ke saath chale jaana. (We all want that Bani will be back with us, not only you. Tomorrow you'll go with Dhruv.)

Dhruv (entering the house): Vaise bhi vahan se jaane ka rasta blocked hai. Dusre rasta se jaaogi, toh raat ho jayega. Aur maine police inspector se baat ki hai. Usne vapan ke sabse paas police station ko phone kiya hai aur Bani ki photo ko mail kar diya hai. (The road to go there is blocked. If you will go by the other road, you will reach there at night. I have talked to the police inspector. I has called the nearest police station to Bohipur and he has e-mailed Bani's photo.)

Vasu: Acha hua Dhruv tum aaye. Thapki, tum aaram karo. Kal tumhari Bani laut aayegi. (It's good you came, Dhruv. Thapki, go and rest. Tomorrow your Bani will be with you.)

There was nothing Thapki could do. She could at least go and check if Bihaan has been admitted to a hospital. The only problem was that what excuse she would give. She has been saying that she went to hospitals to check if Bani had been brought there. The truth was that Thapki had more hopes of Bihaan being admitted rather than Bani as Bihaan had been shot and if anyone brought Bani to a hospital, he would have surely take her to the police station later. But today it was clear that Bani was not in Noida. Vasu would not let her go. She will think that she is going to Bohipur.

Vasu (on seeing Thapki thinking): Jao! (Go!)

Thapki relunctantly left for her room. After climbing the stairs, Thapki peeked downstairs. Vasu was talking to Dhruv. That meant she could use the stairs besides the house and no one will see her. That's exactly what she did, but she was caught.

13:05

Small hut in small village in forest

Bihaan (upon realising what he said): Nahi nahi. Vahan hum pehle rehta tha. Ab kahin aur rehta hoon. (No, no. I used to live there. Now I live somewhere else.)

Grandma: Kahan? (Where?)

Bihaan: Er... Hum... Er... Bawan Road

Grandma (while handing to him to bowl of soup): Theek hai. Abhi tum ye lo. Jaldi se isey khatam karo. (Okay. Now take this. Finish this quickly.)

Bihaan: Hume Munna se baat karna hai. (I have to talk to Munna.)

Grandma: Kaun Munna? (Who is Munna?)

Bihaan: Vo aadmi jo subah humse milne aaya tha. (That man who came to meet me in the morning.)

Grandma: Subah to sirf Jaidev aur Ramesh aaye the. Main donoon ko bulaati hoon. (In the morning only Jaidev and Ramesh came. I'll call both.)
She knew that Bihaan wanted to see Ramesh but she had to clear his misunderstandings. There was no Munna here. She left the hut and Raju accompanied her. Ramesh and Jaidev were talking.

Grandma: Ramesh! Ek baar Bihaan se milo aur usey samjao ki tum Munna nahi ho. Jaidev, tum bhi uske saath jao. (Ramesh! Meet Bihaan once and make him understand that you are not Munna. Jaidev, go with him.)

Ramesh: Phir se Munna. Mujhe bhi jaanna hai ki aakhir Munna kaun hai. (Again Munna. Now I want to know who this Munna is.)

Raju: Munna toh Tisha ka pati. (Munna is Tina's husband.)

Ramesh: Ab ye Tisha kaun hai? (Now, who is this Tisha?)

Raju: Tisha Munna ki patni hai aur Meera ki beti. (Tisha is Munna's wife and Meera's daughter.)

Ramesh was becoming more and more confused. In addition, Jaidev was now laughing.

Jaidev (seeing Ramesh confused): Ye sab log mere kahaani se hai. (All these people are from my story)

Chalo! (Let's go!)

11:05

Outside PN

Tina: Maa, aap kahan jaa rehe ho? Dadi ne kaha ki aap kal Bani ko lene jayenge.(Mom, where are you going? Grandmother said that you will go and take Bani tomorrow.)

Thapki: Haan. Abhi mein tumhare papa ko dhoodne jaa rahi hoon. Kisi se ye mat kehna. (Yes. Now I am going to search for your father. Don't tell this to anyone.)

Saying this Thapki left. She took an auto rickshaw and headed towards the closest hospital.

13:13

Inside the hut in small village
Jaidev: Bihaan. Main Jaidev hoon aur ye Ramesh hai. (Bihaan. I'm Jaidev and this is Ramesh.)

Bihaan was looking suspiciously at Ramesh.

Jaidev: Kal Vimal aa raha hai. Vo ek doctor hai. Vo khaas apke liye yahan aa raaha hai. Nahi toh Vimal mahine mein sirf ek baar aata hai. Humare saath rehene mein ajeeb lag raha hai na? Jaldi se apne pariwaar se miloge. (Tomorrow Vimal is coming. He is a doctor. He is coming here especially for you. Else, he come here only once a month. You must be feeling strange living among us. Soon, you will meet yout family.)

Bihaan (sadly, looking at Ramesh): 15 saal ke baad kaun mere intezaar kar raha hai? Tumhe toh pata hai na ghar pe koi aur ne humara jagah le liya hai. (After 15 years who is waiting for me? You must be knowing someone took my place.)

Ramesh: Matlab? (What do you mean?)

Bihaan: Matlab jab main yahan 15 saalon se so raha hoon, tab tumara bhai ne humari jagah le liya. (I mean that while I was here for 15 years, your brother took my place)

Ramesh left the hut angrily. He did not like the way Bihaan was talking. Moreover, what he was saying was making no sense.

Jaidev (hurriedly): Ek minute mein aata hoon. (I'll be back in a minute.)

He then followed Ramesh.

Outside the hut

Grandma: Kya hua? (What happened?)

Jaidev: Bahut ajeeb baatein bol raha hai vo. Aur Munna, er.. matlab Ramesh ko gussa aaya. (He was saying weird things. And Munna, I mean Ramesh got angry.)

Grandma: Main khud usey baat karungi. (I'll talk to him.)

14:00

In PN

Dhruv: Maa, mujhe aap sab se baat karna hai.

They called everyone, except the children. Only Thapki was missing. Suman went to call her but then found that she is missing.

Suman(After searching for Thapki): Badi saasuma, Thapki ghar par nahi hai. (Mother-in-law, Thapki is not at home.)

Dhruv: Main phone kar leta hoon. (I'll phone her.)

Thapki picked up the phone.

Dhruv: Tum kahan ho? Police ko pata chal gaya hai Bani kiske saath reh rahi hai. (Where are you? The police has found with whom Bani is staying.)

Thapki: Kiske saath? (With whom she is?)

Dhruv: Kosi Devi!

After hearing this, everyone was shocked.

Edited by Toulup - 8 years ago

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pooja2109

@pooja2109

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Thank you upasna for the long update😊

Now curiosity is increasing😉

But bihaan's words are confusing me😕

Pls update soon if possible😊

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Upasna

@Toulup

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

14:45

Thapki entered the house. Everyone was still in the living room.

Vasu(annoyed): Kahan gayi thi tum? Maine kaha tha na apne kamre jao aur aaram karo. (Where did you go? I told you to go to your room and rest.)

Bauji: Arey, ab vo aagayi hai. App gussa kyun ho rahi ho? Thapki bitiya Dhruv tumhara intezaar kar raha tha. Tum dono abhi police station jao. Baad mein baat karte hai. (Now she is back. Why are you getting angry? Thapki, Dhruv was waiting for you. Now you two go to the police station. We will talk later.)

Thapki nodded. Dhruv and Thapki left for the police station.

13:20

Small hut in small village in forest

Bihaan was trying to stand up but could only do so for some seconds. He did not have enough strengh. Just then Grandma entered the hut. She helped him to stand. Bihaan gave a faint smile. He was grateful to Grandma for everything she was doing for him. Suddenly, she let go of Bihaan's arm. Bihaan fell on the cot. He became confused while Grandma gave him a stern look.

Grandma: Kya hua tha tumhare saath? Tumhe goli kaisi lagi? (What has happened to you? Why were you shot?)

Bihaan: Kisiko bachaate huey laga tha. (I got shot while saving someone.)

Grandma: Kisko? (Whom?)

Bihaan: Thapki, meri patni. (My wife.)

Grandma: Munna kaun hai? (Who is Munna?)

Bihaan: Aapko nahi pata? (You don't know?)

Grandma: Nahi. Aur ye mat khena ki Ramesh Munna hai. Vo bachpan se mere saath reh raha hai aur maine usey kabhi Munna nahi bulaya. (No. And don't tell me that Ramesh is Munna. Since childhood he is living with me and I have never called him Munna.)

Bihaan (whispering): Ek aur humsakal. (One more lookalike.)

Grandma: Kya kaha? (What did you say?)

Bihaan: Kuch nahi. Humse galti ho gayi. (Nothing. I made a mistake.)

17:20

Vasu: Suman bahu khaana lagado. Abhi tak na Thapki na Dhruv ne phone ki. Aise baithney se kuch nahi hoga. Aur bachon ko bhook lagi hogi. (Suman serve the dinner. Neither Thapki nor Dhruv has called. By sitting nothing will happen. The children must be hungry.)

Triiinggg triiinggg
Vasu picked up the phone and talked to the person on the other side.

Vasu to Bauji and Suman: Kal Preeti aur Ashwin vapas aa rahe hain. (Tomorrow Preeti and Ashwin are returning.)

Bauji: Aur Sanjay? (What about Sanjay?)

Vasu: Pata nahi. Uske baare mein Preeti bahu ne kuch nahi kaha. Kya pata maaji ko lekar aayega. (I don't know. Preeti did not say anything about him. He might return with mother.)

Suman: Chaliye khaana khaate hai. Bachon ko bula ke aati hoon. (Let's eat. I'll go call the children.)

18:00

In Dhruv's car

Thapki was thinking about what the sub inspector had said. He kept blabbering about unnecessary information. That must be why they had to wait for nearly 1 hour before meeting him. He was the complete opposite of the police inspector. Thapki summarised the facts.

Kosi Devi took Bani to an unknown village.
Unfortunately for her, a goon gang has created some commotion there and more policemen have been sent there. Since the past 2 days, the villagers have been asked to remain indoors as the village could be a very dangerous place at night.
One of policeman who is from Noida and has recently been transferred there recognised Kosi while the identity of the girl with her was unknown.
They have arrested her and at the police station the girl was identified as Bani. According to the sub inspector, tomorrow morning Bani will be brought back.
She was still in her deep thoughts when Dhruv spoke.
Dhruv: Thapki, hum ghar aa gaye. (Thapki, we have reached home.)

Dhruv shared whatever the sub inspector had said to the family.

Vasu: Ek baat mein samaj nahi rahi hoon. Kosi ko Bani kahan mili? (I don't understand one thing. Where did Kosi find Bani?)

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saakshiii12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Nice update kaash k tpk k creative bhi kuch aisa hi karte toh show ki halat itni khrab n hoti thanks for update

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Upasna

@Toulup

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

I added some details like the time.

Also, Bihaan has been sleeping on a cot instead of a bed. The village is quite a backward one. I could not remember the word previously.

Btw, is it okay if I write in English only? I find my sentences in Hindi do not have a good structure.

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saakshiii12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Toulup
I added some details like the time.
Also, Bihaan has been sleeping on a cot instead of a bed. The village is quite a backward one. I could not remember the word previously.

Btw, is it okay if I write in English only? I find my sentences in Hindi do not have a good structure.

Ha joh tum chaho tum english me likhna chahti ho toh bahut acchi baat joh tumhe thik lage

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Just read the last 2 updates now...and i 'think' i have figured out the leap thing

this story is actually after Bihaan got shot while saving Thapki and fell down the cliff...but Bihaan has a misunderstanding that 15 years have passed and Munna's brother Aryan has replaced him...because in his unconscious state...he has heard the story which Jaidev was narrating to the children

I really hope my guess is right

btw both updates were superb 👏

can't wait to read the next part