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19:30

Near a warehouse

Thapki walked around and finally spotted Dhruv. He was talking to two men. She identified them. They were Mr. Raichand and Mr. Jindal. Bihaan, however, was not there. Seeing Dhruv alone with these two made her feel scared. She immediately called Bihaan to ask him where he was and to come here fast.

Juniors' news

Bihaan's phone was ringing but due to the noise he did not hear it.

Near a warehouse

Thapki tried to call someone else from the family but no one picked up the phone. She then decided to move closer to hear their conversation.

Jindal: I suppose that you did not inform anyone that you are coming here. I don't want any interruptions.

Dhruv: No one knows that I'm here.

Jindal: Good. Where do I have to sign?

Dhruv showed him the papers where his signature was needed. Mr. Jindal signed them.

Jindal: I will keep these papers with me. I'll ask my lawyers to check them.

Dhruv: What about Aditi? You did not bring her with you?

Jindal: Did you think I am this stupid? I'll bring her once your company is mine. This will take some days.

That was totally unexpected for Thapki. Kosi's words proved to be true. Dhruv knew many things and yet he hid those from the family. She wanted to question Dhruv immediately but stayed hidden. She wanted to wait for Mr. Jindal and Mr. Raichand to go but Dhruv went first and Thapki had to remain hidden so that the two men do not see her.

19:50

Juniors' news office

Thapki returned to the office. By now most of the people were eating. She spotted Bihaan and went to him, trying to sound as calm as she could.

Thapki: Did you see Dhruv?

Bihaan: I did not see him for some time. He must be around.

Thapki: We have to talk to him.

Bihaan: What's wrong? You don't seem alright.

Thapki: Can we go home?

Bihaan: We cannot leave this party. Let's go outside and talk.

Outside

Bihaan: What happened?

Thapki told him all that she had heard.

Bihaan: I never thought that Dhruv would hide such a big thing.

Thapki: He knows a lot more. We must talk to him immediately. Being Aditi's husband does not mean that he can hide this from us. I'm her sister. I got the right to know about her.

Bihaan: Calm down. I'm sure that Dhruv had his reasons. I am the one who will talk to him. If he does not return here in 5 minutes, I'll go home. Im sure he will be there if he does not come. You will stay here and take care of everything.

Thapki: What! Let me talk to him first.

Bihaan: No. I will talk to him. You are not in a state to talk to him properly.

20:15

PN

The house was dark with only a few lights on. Bihaan started to have doubts that Dhruv had really returned home. He went to Dhruv's room. He was there, sitting on the bed watching TV. As soon as he saw Bihaan, he turned off the TV.

Dhruv: Bihaan, what are you doing here? You must be at the party.

BIhaan: I came to talk to you. Is there anything that you are hiding from us?

Dhruv: Why will I hide anything? Maa told you this. She is worrying unnecessarily.

Bihaan: I know about Aditi. If you tell me what you know, we will save her. That's not a difficult thing to do. My friends will easily find a way to rescue her.

Dhruv: I don't know what you are talking about.

Bihaan: Hiding anything from us will not help you. Your reaction is showing that Aditi is really alive. Am I right?

Dhruv: What difference does that make to you? Don't get involve in this. You are not aware of difficult it is to live without the one you love.

Bihaan(annoyed): You should have at least thought to whom you are talking. Even my wife was away for many years.

Dhruv(angry): Don't compare yourself with me. You lost your memory and did not feel the pain I am feeling. Also Thapki was happily living her life. You have no idea how Aditi has been treated all these years.

Dhruv switched on the TV and showed Bihaan the video where Aditi was lying on the bed helpless.

Dhruv: Bihaan, please let me handle this. I know what I am doing.

Bihaan: But...

Dhruv: Bihaan, please, don't interfere.

Bihaan(angry and hurt): Fine. I'll let you do whatever you want.

21:00

Juniors' news

Bihaan took Thapki to a corner.

Thapki: Did he tell you about Aditi?

Bihaan told her whatever he knew.

Thapki: Why did Dhruv hide this? And now he is not letting us do anything. We have to save Aditi as soon as possible. She must be in pain. We have to do something.

Bihaan: Like what? We know nothing about where Aditi is.

Thapki: We must find some clues from Dhruv or Mr. Raichand.

Bihaan: I might have an idea of what we can do.

Edited by Toulup - 6 years ago
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Thanks for posting.awesome hope they save aditi
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Nice update
Mujhe 2 updates saath me padhne ko mile

Toh Finally thahaan ki kids news magazine launch Ho gayee

Aur thapki Bihaan k chote chote cute pal bhi they

Thahaan ko Aditi K baare me pata chal gaya ab dono Aditi ko bachane K liye Zarur kuch karenge

I hope Dhruv bhi isme unki help Kare

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Posted: 6 years ago
I am glad that Thapki immediately shared everything with Bihaan.
If Dhruv really thinks that he can fix everything on his own...then he's wrong
Jindal and Raichand cannot be trusted...they can refuse to release Aditi after getting the channel. Hence ThaHaan can tackle them in a better way.

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365 news channel

Dhruv's cabin

Dhruv was doing his work when the telephone rang.

Receptionist: Sir, someone wants to meet you. He said that he has a meeting with you today but there is no meeting scheduled for today.

Dhruv: What is the name?

Receptionist: Viraj Raichand.

Dhruv: Ask him to come.

5 minutes later

A young man entered the cabin.

Dhruv: Who are you?

Man: Raichand Sir asked me to give you a message. That is why I used his name.

Dhruv: What does he want?

Man: He asked for a copy of the file you gave yesterday.

Dhruv: Why?

Man: You can ask him personally. He wanted you to leave it at his house.

Dhruv: His house or at Jindal's house?

Man: arr.. That's where he lives. Actually, he just told me to ask you to come to the house. I don't even know where he lives. It's better if you are the one to drive the car.

In front of Jindal's house

Dhruv stopped the car. Before he got out, the man received a message.

Man: Raichand Sir asked me to bring you to the same place as yesterday. He is currently busy with his boss. He told you to leave the papers with me once we reach there in case he has not arrived yet.

Dhruv started to feel suspicious of the man.

Dhruv: Where did we meet yesterday?

Man: Near the warehouse.

Dhruv: Can I look at the message?

The man handed him his phone. The message was indeed from Raichand Sir.

Warehouse

Mr. Raichand had not yet arrived. Dhruv was still thinking that something was wrong. He did not trust that man. He moved away from the car and phoned Raichand but he did not pick up the phone. Before he could try one more time, the man was already waling to him.

Man: I can keep the papers with me. I don't want to waste more of your time.

Dhruv: No. If Raichand wants the papers, tell him to come and take it from my office.

He took the papers from the car, folded them and left the place.

The man smiled and called someone.

On the road

Dhruv(thinking): Why did I follow this man? I did not even bring my car. Bihaan's office is close. I can borrow his car.

Juniors' news office

The decorations had not yet been removed but the employees had already started to work. Bihaan, Thapki and Saurav were talking when Dhruv came there.

Dhruv: Bihaan, I need your car. Can I ...

Bihaan get him the keys and continued to talk to Thapki and Saurav. Dhruv understood that he was angry for what he told him last night and for not letting him help. He will talk to him later. Right now it was not right to discuss about these things.

Saurav: By Friday we have to print the magazine for next week. Are the articles ready?

Thapki: We have a bank of articles for two weeks. It's just the news for this week that will have to be written.

Saurav: Good. By the way is there something troubling you? Since the morning you are worried. Is everything okay?

Bihaan: It's a personal thing. But I'm sure that very soon, everything will be okay.

Saurav: Okay. If you need my help for anything, don't hesitate to come to me.

10 minutes later

Thapki received some photos from an unknown number. After some seconds, she received a message with an address. She showed the photos to Bihaan.

Bihaan: Dhruv is transferring his company to Jindal! He worked so hard to make this channel work.

Thapki: That was why he was not telling you everything. Raichand wanted to get his company. But why was he asking us to not to launch our magazine? Was he planning to blackmail us before?

Bihaan: Did Jai send you the address?

Thapki: Yes and he asked you to meet him.

At a restaurant

Jai: Hello Mr. Raichand.

Bihaan: Dhruv doubted that you are not working for Mr. Raichand?

Jai: He has some doubts but I guess because of that message you had sent, he is still thinking that I am Raichand's employee. We are lucky that he did not check the number.

Bihaan: Did you bring those papers? Thapki wanted to read them properly.

Jai: No Dhruv took them with him. I took the photos quickly and most of the pictures were blurry. I had sent Thapki the good ones.

Flashback

While Dhruv was trying to call Raichand, Jai quickly took some photos of the papers but did not check if the photos were clear.

Now

Bihaan: Did you find something else?

Jai: Dhruv took me to someone called Jindal's house not to Raichand's house. I think that he is the one blackmailing Dhruv. So, you will have to go there to get some information.

Bihaan: Okay thanks. Here's your money.

Juniors' news

Thapki: We just have to enter the house. Do you remember what that inspector said? He will help us if he can.

Bihaan: Yes. His team will be able to find Aditi.

Police station

Inspector: I cannot search his house without any proof. Are you sure about this? I did some research. Aditi has really died. In fact your own family members were the last ones to see the body.

Bihaan: There is the video that Dhruv showed me. That is a proof.

Inspector: But it is not enough. That does not indicate who the kidnappers are. But we can find some clues from that CD.

Bihaan: I'll ask Thapki to bring the CD. I think that she must have already reached home.

PN

Thapki went to fetch the children from school. That was supposed to divert her mind. On her way home, she got a message. Bihaan asked her to find the CD. Right now everyone was in the living room. It was the perfect time to go and look for that CD.

Dhruv's room

After some minutes of searching, Thapki found a CD. But there was already a CD in the video player. She played it. That CD was the one she was looking for. She should have taken it as fast as possible but she just stared at the screen. That was something that she would have never want to see but it was after years that she was seeing Aditi. Once the screen turned black, she realized that she had to take this CD.

Thahaan's room

Thapki quickly turned on the laptop and made a copy of the CD on a pendrive.

Corridor

As soon as she got out of her room, she saw Dhruv was already home and was heading towards his room. Vasudhara stopped him and offered him a cup of tea. Thapki went in the room again and left the CD there.

Living room

Preeti: Where are you going? You just came home and you did not even come to drink tea with us.

Thapki: I need to go to work again. I forgot to give this pendrive to someone. I'll be back soon.

Preeti: Come fast and bring Bihaan devarji with you.

Police station

Inspector: There is nothing much in this but I can hear some noises. I'll give this video to an expert. By next morning we will find something.

Car

Bihaan: Let's go home now.

Thapki: Can't we check the address Jai gave us?

Bihaan: Let's wait for tomorrow at least. The police will come with us.

Thapki: Maybe you are right. We won't get into trouble this way. But we cannot just wait without doing anything.

Bihaan: We could use other ways to find her but you will not agree with what I will say.

Thapki: If we cannot go to their house, let's search that warehouse where you found Vishal. Maybe they kept Aditi there.

Bihaan: There are goons there. Are you sure you want to go there?

Thapki: We will be quick.

Bihaan: Am I having a bad influence on you?

Thapki: No. I have done such things before.

Bihaan: You're admitting that you are being reckless. That's new.

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17:00

PN- Outside

Bauji: Where have you been? I thought that you were coming home early today.

Thapki: We had some work to do.

Preeti: Work? Bauji called at your office. You were not there. Don't tell me that you went on a romantic long drive. I must tell Ashwin to take me out soon. After the baby will come, I will not be allowed to go out.

Bauji: Even before that you will not be allowed to go. Doctor has told you to take more precautions. Else there will be complications in the delivery.

Preeti: Oh ho Bauji. Now even you will start to scold me. It is like having three mothers-in-law. Forget about me. Thapki and Bihaan devarji did not tell us where were they.

Bihaan: Bauji, did you call at Saurav's office?

Bauji: No.

Bihaan: You should have called there. That is where we were.

Bauji: Or you could keep your phone on. Thapki, do you have Bani's baby photos? The kids are looking at their baby pictures and there is none of Bani's in this house.

Thapki: Yes. I have a copy of them on my laptop.

Bauji: Give me some of them. I'll develop them tomorrow and put them in the album.

Thapki: Okay. Where is everyone else?

Bauji: They are looking at the photos. Look Bihaan and Preeti have already joined them.

Living room

Suman: The wedding photos of Bihaan and Thapki are in this album too.

Preeti: Look at this photo. We were not letting them take a photo.

Vasu: Where was I while you were doing this?

Sanjay: Even I am not there. We must click a new family picture. When Kiran will come to visit us, we must find a photographer.

Thapki: Yes. We must do that when everyone is here.

Bihaan: I agree with you two.

Mr. Jindal's house

Raichand: What happened? Why did you call me?

Jindal: Some hours ago Dhruv came here but he did not come inside. I saw him in a different car with someone. I think that he is having some second thoughts. I think that we must take Aditi somewhere else. Your house is not a safe place to keep her anymore.

Raichand: Okay. I'll shift her elsewhere if you want. But I don't think that this will be necessary. Dhruv has already given us his company. We can let him take Aditi with her.

Jindal: What! You thought that I will let him get his wife. I could use him. Dhruv can do many other things for me.

Raichand: But that's not what we decided.

Jindal: Viraj, just hide his wife somewhere else.

23:00

Thahaan's room

Thapki and Bihaan were already asleep when the phone rang.

Thapki(sleepy): Hello.

The inspector informed her that they were going to search Mr. Jindal's house.

Jindal's house

Inspector: What are you doing here? I don't want any trouble.

Bihaan: But we could help.

Inspector: No. You must go home. Or wait in the car till we finish searching for any other proof.

Bihaan: Are you going to arrest him?

Inspector: No. We still do not have a reliable proof. Already I am conducting this search thanks to Kosi Devi who agreed to give a statement. You guys can understand that this is not enough. I don't want him to know that you are the ones behind this.

Thapki: We'll stay in the car. We won't interfere in your work.

30 minutes later

Bihaan noticed some suspicious people entering the house.

Bihaan: Thapki wait here. I'll just be back.

Before Thapki could say anything, Bihaan got out of the car. She was about to shout after him but she saw someone sneakily getting a car. She was not sure but that person appeared to be Raichand. She better follow him before he gets away.

Unknown house

Raichand went into the house and came out after a few minutes. Thapki waited some minutes after he left and then went inside. It was dark. It seems like no one was there. The floor was quite dusty.

She checked all the rooms but did not find anything suspicious but then she heard some sounds coming from upstairs. She searched the rooms again but did not find anything. Thapki could repeatedly hear some sounds. Once back in the corridor she noticed that there were only three doors and the rooms seemed to be of the same size. There must be a fourth room.

There was indeed another room. Thapki found a door in another room. She noticed that one corner of the room was a trail formed by the dust being wiped off. A door was simply hidden by a curtain. There must be something important in that room.

2:00

Outside Jindal's house

Bihaan: Finally my transport has come. Where did you go?

Thapki: I have found something.

Bihaan: What?

Inspector: Mrs Pandey, I don't think that you must get involved in this. The police are doing their work.

Thapki: But I saw Raichand going somewhere. So, I followed him.

Inspector: What is wrong with you? Mr. Pandey you went inside the house without my permission and your wife is following an unknown man who can be dangerous. We have not yet found anything but that does not mean that we will give up. We will talk in the morning. Right now go home.

The inspector went from there and Bihaan and Thapki also went home.

7:30

PN

Vasu: Dhruv, drop the kids to school. Bihaan is not at home.

Dhruv: Okay.

Vasu: Are you busy this morning? Actually, today it's Sport Day. You could stay there a bit longer. Anu and Veer will like it.

Dhruv: I don't have a lot of work and I need a change of atmosphere.

Vasu: That's great.

Dhruv went to take his breakfast.

10:00

School

Tina was alone. One of her teacher came near.

Teacher: What are you doing here alone?

Tina: Veer went with chachu. Anu and Bani must be around. Their race is over.

Teacher: So you're solving some puzzles meanwhile. That's good but why don't you enjoy with your friends?

Tina: I want to complete the game session in this magazine first.

Principal: Miss. Mehra, I was searching for you. Oh, what are you doing?

The principal took a look at the magazine.

Principal: That's interesting. Can I borrow this for a while?

Tina: Yes Sir.

The principal and teacher went and the other kids came.

Bani: What happened? Why was the principal here?

Anu: Did he scold you?

Tina: No but he took my magazine.

Bani: But why? Were you doing something bad?

Tina: No he just borrowed it.

Veer: Maybe he also likes to see newspaper with drawings. I have never seen him read normal newspapers.

Anu: I have also never seen him read newspapers.

The four kids looked in the direction the principal and teacher went.

Bani(still looking in the same direction): You know that he might be reading the newspaper at home.

Juniors' news office

Bihaan: I'm going to school. It's probably too late but at least I'll pick the kids up.

Thapki: Okay. Let's be normal for the time being. We don't want anyone to be suspicious of us.

Thapki(just when Bihaan was about to go): Sneha(Saurav's wife) is ill. I heard that the doctor has visited her. I'll go to visit her later.

Bihaan: Okay. I'll see you back home then.

Jindal's house

Jindal: Are you sure that Dhruv's wife is well hidden?

Raichand: Yes. No one will find her. She is still where I left her.

Jindal: That Dhruv is creating some trouble. I'm sure that he is the one who is behind the police coming here.

Raichand: Well the police did not find anything. There is no need to worry.

Jindal: But we must still be very cautious.

Edited by Toulup - 6 years ago
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Saurav's house

Thapki rang the doorbell and Sneha welcomed her.

Sneha: You came quite late. The doctor has already come twice today.

Thapki: What did he say?

Sneha: It is better to admit her at the hospital. He also said that she will need the full family support.

Thapki: But we need to keep Aditi in a safe place.

Sneha: Listen Thapki. She is your sister. She needs you. Leaving her with strangers is not good for her.

Thapki: There is no safe hospital. The ones who kidnapped her are powerful. They might easily find her. Hospitals will be the first place they will look for her.

Sneha: Keep her in your house for the time being. There are many persons to look after her. You have a big house. You can definitely allow a nurse to stay there.

Thapki: Those people will know if I take her home.

Sneha: For them it is foolish to keep someone at home. That is why Aditi was not kept in their house. You brought her from another place. That's what you said last night.

Last night

Outside Saurav's house

Thapki rang the bell and after some minutes a sleepy Saurav opened the door. Thapki explained the situation to him and asked him if they could keep Aditi there for some days. After keeping Aditi inside, Thapki left the place and went to Jindal's place where Bihaan and the inspector was. She had to tell them about Aditi.

Present

Thapki: Okay. I'll come here at night. It will be easier to take her without anyone seeing.

Sneha: Just call us before you come.

Thapki: Thanks for your help and sorry for the trouble.

Unknown house

Raichand went to the secret room and found that Aditi was missing. He checked the footage of the surveillance camera.

Thapki was trying to wake up Aditi but she was not responding. Finally with much difficulty she managed to bring her downstairs and take her away.

That was not what he had planned. Bihaan should have also been with her. But the work was done. Soon the police will arrest Mr. Jindal and I will be free from working for him.

Flashback

Outside Jindal's house

Raichand rushed to Jindal's house after the latter told him to come there quickly but when he came there he saw Bihaan and Thapki outside. With Jindal being preoccupied with the police, he could easily make these two know where he had kept Aditi. They had definitely seen him and would follow him to find some clues. He made sure that he did not drive too fast. During the drive he made sure that he was being followed. He just had to enter the house and Bihaan and Thapki would definitely search the house.

Present

Jindal's house

Jindal: Welcome welcome!

Dhruv: Why did you call me here?

Jindal: You have to sign some more papers. Then you will get your wife. After all the mess yesterday, I want things to move quickly.

(Jindal is talking about the police and Dhruv is thinking about the man who made him move around to get the papers.)

Dhruv signed the papers Jindal gave him and left from there.

19:00

PN living room

Dhruv returned home and saw everyone in the living room.

Bauji: Dhruv, we were waiting for you. Bihaan and Thapki have something important to say.

Dhruv tried to signal Bihaan and Thapki not to talk about Aditi. This could ruin things. However, both ignored his signs.

Bihaan: We wanted to talk to you about Aditi.

Dhruv: Bihaan, don't

Bihaan: Bhai, they also need to know the truth.

Vasu: What are you talking about?

Thapki: Aditi is alive but she is not well.

Suman: What is happening? Thapki, Aditi died 7 years ago. How can she be alive?

Bihaan: No bhabhi, she is alive. And we are bringing her home tonight but we must keep this secret.

Dhruv: What do you mean by you are bringing her home?

Bihaan: Thapki found her yesterday. We thought that it was best to keep her elsewhere but according to the doctor she needs her close ones to recover.

Dhruv: What! Why didn't you tell me this?

Vasu: One minute. Can someone explain to us what is happening?

The three told the family what has been happening for the past few days.

The family looked at them in disbelief.

Dhruv: I just signed some papers before coming home. I wish that you said something before.

Bauji: I wish you told us about Aditi. How could you hide this from your family?

Thapki: We did not want to trouble you.

Bauji: We are a family. I think we all have learnt not to hide anything that serious.

Bihaan: Sorry Bauji. This will not happen again.

Bauji: I forgive you. My bahu is coming back. We have to make the arrangements for her return.

Bihaan: But we have to be discreet.

Dhruv: Let's go take her.

Thapki: I think that it is better if you do not come with us and we will go later.

Dhruv: It is my duty to bring her home safely.

22:00

Outside PN

A suspicious man was waiting outside in his car. He noticed Dhruv was about to leave and called Jindal.

Man: Hello, Dhruv is leaving the house.

Jindal: Follow him and tell me where he is going.

Jindal(thinking): I know Dhruv you are up to something. Did you expect that I will do nothing after you sent the police here? I can easily track your location now. I did not call you to sign those papers in the evening. I, in fact, made someone place a GPS tracker on your car. With this and my man keeping an eye on you there is nothing you can do without my knowledge.

Edited by Toulup - 6 years ago

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