Ending(Updated last chapter on Pg 30)(25.07.19) - Page 20

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: saakshiii12

So finally Dhruv ko Aditi K baare me pata chal gaya aur ab Jindal ne saari kahani bhi batai aur shayad kuch chupaya bhi

Mujhe pehle ch me thapki ka dilouge
Thapki: He knows. He also knows to what extent I can go but not your father.
Bahut accha laga

Dhruv akela gaya hai kisi ko bhi bina bataye toh kahi kisi problem me na fas jaye

Kosi in sab me kaise involve thi ab clear Ho gaya

Aur next update me tum Thahaan scene dene wali Ho toh now waiting waiting

Please update soon

Let Dhruv suffer a bit more. Then he will be back with Aditi.


Originally posted by: Fariha2908

This ff is going so well.hope thahaan get success

Now all their problems have been solved. Let's see if their magazine will be sold or not.
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Posted: 6 years ago
The flashback is very interesting and very well-written 👏
let's see what will be Dhruv's next move
looking forward to the next update 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: dynamic_doll

The flashback is very interesting and very well-written 👏

let's see what will be Dhruv's next move
looking forward to the next update 😊

Thanks. I thought I had not written this well.
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Posted: 6 years ago

23:00

Thahaan's room

Thapki was ironing their clothes for tomorrow so that they would not be late tomorrow.

Bihaan: You are wearing a saree tomorrow. You will take a lot of time to get ready then. Why don't you wear something simpler?

Thapki placed the saree on the bed.

Thapki: I am not the one who takes a lot of time to get ready.

Bihaan: Yes yes. It's me who take more time. Now keep this saree elsewhere. I want to sleep.

Thapki: Two minutes. I'll iron your shirt, and then keep them on the sofa.

Dhruv's room

Dhruv was watching the video again. Aditi looked in so much pain. He had not ever thought to see her in this state. She could not even move out of the bed. Dhruv feared that she was being drugged. Else, the Aditi he knew would not stay like this. She would have tried to escape. Some days more and all her sufferings will be over.

23:30

Balcony

Thapki came there and saw Bihaan standing there alone and lost in his thoughts.

Thapki: You're not asleep yet. Want some tea?

Bihaan: There is only one mug. It's okay, you can drink it.

Thapki: If I knew you were awake I would have make one cup for you. You can take some sips from mine.

Thapki handed the mug to him.

Bihaan: Thank you.

Bihaan took a sip.

Bihaan: You did not put sugar in it.

Thapki: There was hardly any sugar left after making the kids' milk. I thought I will open a new packet in the morning.

Bihaan: Take it. I want something sweeter.

He smiled naughtily at Thapki.

Thapki: Don't look at me like this. You won't get anything from me.

Bihaan: I am your poor husband, tired, nervous and worried about tomorrow but my wife is not doing anything for me. That's not fair.

Thapki: What are you talking about? You don't look that worried. And being nervous is normal. Even I am. My husband is also not doing anything for me.

Bihaan kept looking at Thapki cutely while she was finishing her tea. Thapki started to go from there when Bihaan stopped her.

Bihaan: You won't give it.

Thapki smiled and gave him a deep kiss on his cheek. She tried to go from there again but Bihaan stopped her again by pulling her and giving her a back hug. Only they know how long they stayed there.

Morning

PN

Dhruv was about to leave when Bihaan called him from behind.

Bihaan: Dhr...

Dhruv: Don't worry. I'll be on time but right now I have some urgent work to do.

He then left from there.

Preeti: Where is Dhruv devarji going. It's still 7 o'clock.

Preeti(looking at Bihaan): You're already ready. Where are you going?

Bihaan: Office. We still have to check some things.

Preeti: Don't become like your brother. Or you will also not be seen at home.

Bihaan: He is busy these days. Else he would also be there.

Preeti: Did you see Ashwin? He said that he had to talk to you.

Bihaan: No. I'll meet him before leaving.

Bihaan searched for Ashwin and found him in the garden with Sanjay.

Ashwin: Here he is. Come Bihaan. Before you went, we wanted to give you something.

Ashwin gave him a small Ganesh.

Ashwin: Place it somewhere in your Juniors' news.

Bihaan: You bought this.

Ashwin: Yeah. Actually it's Dadima who told us to buy and give this to you. Indirectly that is her gift to you. Don't tell her that we told you this.

Bihaan: Okay I won't say anything to her. Okay, bye. We'll meet in the evening.

Bihaan went from there.

Sanjay: I had never imagined Bihaan will be this eager for this business.

Ashwin: No one could have thought something like this will happen.

8:15

Unknown building

Saurav: Why are you so late? We had planned to come at eight o'clock. This publisher is very strict about the timing.

Thapki: We reached before 8:30.

Saurav: Let's not wait our time. Dad is already upstairs talking to the one in charge of the launch.

Saurav: By the way, thanks. After yesterday Dad is talking normally to me. Your plan indirectly helped me too. But I know him. He might not say sorry even if he wants to. Please, if possible behave normally towards him as if nothing has happened.

Hall

Mr. Gupta: You two are looking really good. This is the first time I'm seeing you like this. Saree and suit.

Mr. Gupta(seeing them nervous): It's always like this for the first time. There is nothing to worry about. I still remember when the first time Saurav had taken the responsibility of handling the work of a client. He was so nervous. Now look how confident he is.

Man responsible for the launch: So, I'm finally meeting the persons behind this magazine. Got to say that you have put a lot effort in that. I'm pretty sure that it will not take long before the magazine becomes famous. Let's start a new journey. Best luck.

Dhruv's office

Lawyer: Do you mind if I ask you something?

Dhruv: What?

Lawyer: Why do you want to transfer this channel to someone else? You have never mentioned about doing this before. What happened suddenly that you are doing this?

Dhruv: Errr... I got an offer that I cannot refuse. Don't worry. Only the ownership will change. The rest will stay the same.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Love thahaan scene.such a cute
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Posted: 6 years ago
Cute thahaan Romance loved it
Aur ab magzin bhi launch hone wali hai bs sab kuch acche se ho jaye

Aur Dhruv Apna ch Jindal aur Raichand ko de raha hai but I don't think k woh itne pr bhi Aditi ko chhorenge

Nice update
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Posted: 6 years ago
loved ThaHaan's sweet romance 😳
urgh somebody please stop Dhruv...or I hope he has some plan up his sleeve
excited for junior news launch...can't wait for the next update 😊

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10:00

Juniors' news

Thapki: Uff. I'm tired. But everything went smoothly.

Bihaan: I have never answered so many questions. Mr Pandey, why did you use green colour the most? Why did he ask this? These people make me feel angry.

Thapki: Forget that person. He wanted to pester us. The others were behaving normally and were very supportive, knowing we are new to this.

Bihaan: The others are quite confident that the magazine will be sold. The publisher was saying that in some weeks we must print more magazines.

Thapki: It depends on the demand. He is quite positive that many people will like the magazine.

Their talks were interrupted by an employee.

Employee: Someone came to deliver some sweets.

Thapki: Ask him to keep them on that side table. We'll be right there.

Main room

Bihaan: Hmm. The laddoo looks good. Let me taste one.

Thapki: Don't touch these. These are not for you.

Bihaan: Then we have to taste them. What if they are not good? We cannot give bad laddoos to our guests.

While saying this, he ate a laddoo.

Thapki: In this case, you have to taste all the sweets.

Bihaan: Of course.

19:00

All the family members had already arrived. Some had not yet visited the place. This was definitely a proud moment for the family. After some time, some guests and employees came.

The publisher was talking to Bihaan, Thapki and Saurav.

Publisher: Before coming here, I checked the sales number. Nearly 15% of the magazines have already been sold. That is less than what I had expected but I will wait for some days before reaching a conclusion.

Saurav: 15% is not bad. Usually it is on the second and third day that the maximum is sold. I believe that 45-50% will be sold in the next two day. The remaining...

A bit further, Vasu was talking to Dhruv after finding him disturbed.

Vasu: Is everything alright? Why do you look so tensed? You can share your problems with me.

Dhruv: There is no need to worry. I'm just thinking about work.

Vasu: I've been noticing that something is bothering you. But think about your kids too. They already lost their mother and now you are not giving them enough time. They feel all alone at times. Take out some time for them.

Dhruv: Don't worry maa. I'm making everything alright. Look how they are enjoying themselves with Tina and Bani. You are unnecessarily worrying.

Vasu: I can see that you are hiding something. I won't force you to tell me everything immediately. Take your time.

Meanwhile someone entered the office and looked around. Both Bihaan and Dhruv noticed him. Bihaan took him outside.

Bihaan: What are you doing here?

Mr. Raichand: I came to congratulate you.

Mr.Raichand(showing him a magazine): Look I bought a copy too. I'm happy that you were successful. Not many persons have been able to say no to my boss. There must be more people like you.

He then left from there. Whatever message he had to give already reached the person concerned.

Unlike Bihaan, Dhruv had noticed that Mr. Raichand had dropped a crumpled paper. He picked it up and went outside to read it. It contained an address. He wanted to leave immediately but then decided to go after some time because Vasu was still keeping an eye on him.

After some minutes he saw that Vasu was busy talking to someone. So, he left from there after throwing the note.

In his haste, he did not realize that the note did not fall in the dustbin. Bani saw that note on the floor. She picked it up. After seeing an address, she thought that Thapki or Bihaan had noted that. She looked around and saw Thapki. She gave Thapki the note.

Bani: I saw this on the floor.

Thapki: That might belong to a guest. Where did you found this?

Bani: There. Near the dustbin.

Thapki: Maybe someone threw it.

Veer: Yes. Papa threw that and went. Maybe he went to meet that uncle too.

Thapki: Which uncle?

Veer: The one Bihaan chachu was talking to outside.

The disappearance of both Bihaan and Dhruv made Thapki think that there might be some problem. She went outside but saw none of them. She looked at the address. This place was not far from here. She can go and see if they are there.

Meanwhile Bihaan came out of the washroom. He was busy talking to some of his friends and did not notice that Thapki and Dhruv were missing.

Edited by Toulup - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks for giving this ff.very interesting post nxt part sn
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Posted: 6 years ago
Finally they launched it 😃 I hope ThaHaan's hard work pays off and the magazine becomes an instant hit
And now Thapki will get to know Aditi's truth...I am looking forward to ThaHaanRuv's mission #RescueAditi 😉

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