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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome one again Bea!! Don't worry take a break and write when you feel better!! We will wait
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PART TEN


At nine o'clock ,Thapki was tired and wanted to go home.
She had been working for 12 hours straight with just the mandatory comfort breaks .
Above all else however, she was missing Bihaan terribly.
She had only managed a couple of quick phone calls to assure him she was fine.
At that very moment , as if she had conjured him out of thin air, the head of her husband popped through the cabin door.
Dhruv had been too preoccupied looking at Thapki as she collated some data so didn't see Bihaan until it was a bit late.
The first he knew of his presence was from Thapki's reactions.
Her face became suffused with joy and her whole body seemed to zing to life.
Dhruv followed her eyes to see what could have caused such a drastic transformation in Thapki's attitude.
Dhruv's heart sank.
Even at the height of their romance Thapki had never looked at him like that.
Bihaan was apologetic,
"Sorry Bhai, I know you two are busy but I went by the house and Suman Bhabhi informed me you probably wouldn't have eaten so she gave me these."
He held up two tiffins.
"One for you and one for Thapki aur..."
"Aur..."
"Thapki and me."
The way they were looking at each other irked the hell out of him.
"Look I'll share my tiffin with Thapki. You don't like spicy food so your tiffin is bound to contain milder spice but we all know Thapki, like me, loves spicy food. "Dhruv interjected.
"Oh everything is spicy. You can't imagine what one will learn to love when in love "
Bihaan put one tiffin on Dhruv's desk then walked to Thapki, grabbing the visitors' chair from the front of Dhruv's desk and setting it by Thapki's desk.
"Bhai, please excuse us, couple in love alert. We may do disgustingly couply things, don't mind us"
Dhruv minded but decided to act all nonchalant to mask his vexation.
Oh, what couply things they did.
It was sickening to watch.
She tore pieces of roti and fed him with her two hands.
He licked sauce from her fingers.
The final straw for Dhruv was when Bihaan leaned over the desk to kiss away a bit of yoghurt smeared at the corner of Thapki's mouth.
"Oh Thapki ,enough for the day. Bihaan take your wife home please. We can continue working on this tomorrow
"By the way I forgot to say, Shradda and l got divorced today. "
He looked mostly at Thapki hoping to see her jumping up and down with joy but all that happened was a sad look that she exchanged with Bihaan.
It was Bihaan who answered for both of them.
"We are sad to hear that Bhai. It couldn't have been easy for you. "
Thapki nodded in agreement.
What?
That's all he was gonna get.
For what should be such momentous news for Thapki and him?
He picked up his briefcase to leave,
"Ok goodnight. Thapki lock up after yourselves won't you you know where everything is I am sure. "
Dhruv exited the building and headed to his car.
The thought of going home filled him with dread.
He gave a cursory glance at his watch.
By now, there would probably be noone at home.
His family had been invited to the roka ceremony of the only son of a close business associate of Bauji's.
Dhruv had not wanted to go because he despised his father's business..
Now he settled into his car and drove to the quietness of home.
As he drove, he noticed a set of headlights following closely behind but thought nothing of it.
The headlights followed him all the way home but his mind was too busy occupied with thoughts of Thapki and what his next moves would be.
He had come to a firm decision by the time he reached home.
He would pretend an urgent out of town trip, maybe to Mumbai or Shimla or somewhere like that for three or four days then he would insist on Thapki accompanying him.
Yes, good idea.
He got out the car in his front courtyard so pleased with his decision he never saw the blow to his head coming.



Edited by Bea1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bea, I wish the Shraddha from the show is as smart as yours and ThaHaan are as open as yours in their romance!😆

The story is coming out fine... So DS will be in hospital now?😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kill Ds! 🥳
Update soon plz!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...dinner romance for thahhan infront of ds...too good..i liked ds himself went to home after irked to see them together...
What shradhha has done to ds?? I m all ok to take anything between shruv...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow wonderful... I seriously wish Shraddha could give Dhruv one blow in the show
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PART ELEVEN


The first thing he became conscious of was the pounding of the mother of all headaches.
Somebody splashed a bucket of water on his face, probably to awaken him.
He opened his eyes to the bright glare of a naked light bulb angled right into his eyes so he closed his eyes again.
He wanted to wipe the water away from his face and eyes and tried to lift his hands and arms then realised at that moment they were firmly trussed to the chair he was sitting on.
Slowly he opened his eyes again only to be met by the dishevelled, manic face of his ex-wife.
"Ah, sleeping beauty awakens at last. "
Dhruv tried to blink the water away from his eyes but couldn't get enough of it away.
He tried to look at his surroundings and recognised one of the store rooms in Pandey Nivaas.
A tablet had been set up in front of him recording everything.
There was a strong and overpowering smell that at first he couldn't put a name to and when he did, made him sit up straighter alarmed.
What he thought of as water was actually kerosene.
Shradda had drenched him in kerosene and even now was going about splashing the rest of the room with the same.
"Shradda what the hell are you doing? Are you crazy? "
Shradda cackled with laughter.
" Yeah, I have been called that before. "
She laughed again and continued splashing the walls.
" I hear voices in my head so I must be crazy. "
This last part of the sentence was said in a sing - song voice.
She put down the now empty 50 litre bottle that had contained the kerosene
"The psychiatrist said I am crazy, prescribed pills but guess what I haven't been taking them. They make me 'crazy'." She lifted her fingers to put quotation marks on the last 'crazy'.
She began to laugh hysterically.
" They stop me from hearing my good voices. Today though I am listening to my voices and they are telling me ' kill Dhruv, kill Dhruv , kill Dhruv "
Dhruv's fear increased manifold.
"Did you really think you would get away with it? Break this Shradda's heart without facing any consequences? Tsk tsk tsk tsk Mr Dhruv Pandey
"I have been watching you. You are after that Tha - Tha -Thapki again. Chasing after your own sister in law. Shame on you. What more you recruited your mother to help you in your dastardly deeds. Don't think I don't know? I know everything
"Bechara Bihaan aur Thapki. They don't know their beloved mother is out to break them apart courtesy of you.
"Let me apprise them of that little reality."
"How do you know..."
She cut him of without him completing his statement.
"You mean how do I know about you and your mother? You did check for prying ears didn't you? Well you didn't check hard enough. I had already set up my hidden recording equipment by then. So I recorded everything about your little meeting with your mother. "
Shradda smiled and took out her mobile and scrolled through it.
" Here it is. Let me send it to Thapki. "
Dhruv watched helplessly as the message was sent.
The smile vanished from her lips.
"I truly loved you, but you couldn't even give me the time of day. I have got your full attention now haven't I."
Shradda walked over to one corner of the room and opened a tool box there taking out a hand held sledgehammer.
" I am gonna make you suffer a lot of pain before I actually kill you. As much pain as you made me suffer in the duration of our marriage.
Dhruv began to plead," Please Shradda, I will do anything. We can get married again and start afresh"
Her response was to take the hammer and smash it fully on the splayed fingers of his hand.
The pain was excruciating.
Dhruv screamed long and hard.
"That's for making such a stupid suggestion"
She brought down the hammer again.
"That's for marrying me in the first place knowing you were in love with someone else. "
She smashed the hammer on his other hand
"That's on behalf of Thapki, for trying to entice your devrani. Chi. You are a morally reprehensible person. Besharam. "
She brought down the hammer again and again each time citing a reason for the blow.
Finally, when his hands were a bloody mess of broken bones and raw flesh and he was about to pass out from the pain she grabbed his hair and lifted his head.
"Don't pass out now Dhruv Pandey. There's more to come. You have to meet death with open eyes. "
Edited by Bea1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my god that was awesome! Loved it! The message was sent so ThaHaan will know the truth, good! And DS in pain? Hmm nice😉 Even though Shraddha is 'psycho' here, I can't agree with her more. She's saying the truth. Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!! U hv captured the psycho Shraddha beautiffully!!!😛
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Oh my god that was awesome! Loved it! The message was sent so ThaHaan will know the truth, good! And DS in pain? Hmm nice😉 Even though Shraddha is 'psycho' here, I can't agree with her more. She's saying the truth. Update soon!

As of now I can make unlimited posts. Yay!!! So can finally respond to everyone.
I was a bit doubtful as to how much pain to inflict. Can't even think of ways to inflict pain.
For me Dhruv is a waste of space and a pollutant on our planet. Totally deserves to die. So I am killing him off.

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