Thahaan seperation...iii

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I was so inspired by earlier two version, so I too want to participate in it. As I am not good writer like so many of you, you are welcome to ignore this.

Part 1:

Judayi ka rang:

Vasu plans to seperate thahaans, so she tells Bihaan, Thapki is very good girl and deserves better man for herself, who should be well educated and cultured. And if you value Thapki give divorce soon. Bihaan even though hurt, thinks it true.
Then Vasu fills Thapki's ears, from the moment she entered in Bihaan's life, he is suffering. If you really care for him, just leave this house and never come back. Thapki agrees and ask permission from the family to leave. Both acting as though they were eager to get divorce.
Vasu who does not want to delay, ask Bihaan to go to lawyers office about divorce. Bihaan goes with heavy heart.

Comes the twist:

The lawyer, who is surprised to see him says, what ? You still want divorce? But you should have come at the end of three months? Now eight months passed. So that petition was rejected. You could file a new petition and has to stay with your wife for another three months, before it can be processed. But come on at the end of three months otherwise it too will be rejected.

Bihaan who is so pleased, kisses lawyer on the cheek and comes out calling thapki from mobile asking her to pack up as they have to stay another three months, then only divorce can be done. By now, Thapki does not want divorce and remembering her promise to his mother she refuses to come and stay with him. Bihaan becomes sad.

Role reversal:

When Bihaan informs the latest development to the family, they (except V& S) ask him to go and win her and her family's heart and bring back Thapki. Now the mission starts Win the heart of Thapki. Bihaan with bags reaches Thapki's house and announces he will stay for three months, so he can get divorced. As the KK land always allowed anybody who forces themselves on them, they allowed Bihaan too.

Meantime Thapki learns about Diwakar. When Bihaan warns him, he also wants three months time for divorce. Both Thapki and Bihaan join hands to kick out Divakar and his family. They do so many antics with Divakar. Between Bihaan's beating, Adithi's floppy plans and Thapki's lecture, Divakar feel crushed and leave them signing Divorce paper. Thus Bihaan win the heart of Thapki's family also Adithi too. She falls for Bihaan and propose him.

Break.
As I have two minds about this triangle, will continue later. If any of you read fully, you are welcome to leave your comments and suggestion too. It is really fun to write.

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Fizak thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one. Hope CV learn from our writers and execute it properly.
P.D.Dutta thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its graet to see new writings on Thahaan..keep writing and update soon!
BTW, writing is fun!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dplee

Its graet to see new writings on Thahaan..keep writing and update soon!

BTW, writing is fun!


Awesome😆

Wow didi you encourage every one!
😃 great of u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Actually the way you have written it is so funny! Loved reading it! Had a good laugh! 😊 Don't mistake. I really liked it bcoz of the funny element.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dplee

Its graet to see new writings on Thahaan..keep writing and update soon!

BTW, writing is fun!

Thank you. It is true. I never thought writing can be fun. I request all of you try your own version of future story. It is fun to write as much as to read about others.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARS24


Awesome😆

Wow didi you encourage every one!
😃 great of u

Sorry ARS. The real credit goes to you. I wrote becos I was encouraged by your second version.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fan.matsh

Actually the way you have written it is so funny! Loved reading it! Had a good laugh! 😊 Don't mistake. I really liked it bcoz of the funny element.


Thank you for enjoying it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! So interesting! One thing I'm confused about, who proposes Bihaan? Aditi!? Nahi na?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARS24


Awesome😆

Wow didi you encourage every one!
😃 great of u


Archu..I am a voracious reader..the mor ff, the merrier I am..update all of your FF soon

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