Introspection : Sahiba (Drabble) - Page 2

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Beautifully written dear ❤️ ♥️ 👏

Thank you ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: averma4583

A beautiful take on Sahiba’s inner turmoil

Thank you ❤️❤️

ITV had portrayed things such sensitive things very thoughtlessly. I am glad I managed to portray things as realistically as possible. Although it makes me shudder to think of such things happening to anyone - male or female.

Originally posted by: Allyson

This was so beautifully penned! You describe Sahiba’s experience and fear so well. No one could endure what she did and walk away unscathed. You described it so well, that she is in a cage now, but she had always been a free bird.

Again, this was a wonderful read 👏

No indeed. The topic portrayed was a sensitive and serious topic. Even a person with immense willpower would succumb down. I am happy to have penned something that resonated with all of you!

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Beautifully written

Thank you ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome Drabble!

Thank you ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

beautifully written. the fear she must be feeling i cannot even imagine

But ITV can never broach such uncomfortable subjects. They will brush it under the carpet. even when Angad 'turns' good, he will never truly apologize or repent and ITV sahiba will conveniently forget this when she will see his 'good' side

Thank you ❤️❤️ As far as I am concerned, one can never turn 'good' after such happenings. Honestly the current trend in ITV to show things that are disturbing is very sad.

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress

This post if nothing soothed my mind that we are all on the same page, I was so disheartened for the past few days on how the story is building up, I thought I will lose my sanity!

We are on the same page. Any sane person will be disheartened by all that is been shown. To think audiences likes such things is quiet disturbing of the kind of mentality people have nowadays. 🤔

I mean okay, you want to show extremity, be my guest but kuch sense to ho naa bhyii... The show feels like it is being stretched on the cruelty towards Sahiba!

Yup, agreed. Sahiba has become the 'scapegoat' in their plot.

Marvellous work, Mirai! More than drabble, I would call it a heartfelt musing! I felt it in my heart... sachhi!

Thank you! It's good seeing you comment after long. I've felt the absence of your comments! ❤️

Originally posted by: whimsical

Brilliantly written! I read and lived it several times.

Thank you! ❤️

Two lines in particular touched me deeply.

"The seizing grip... the weight of something much larger, much stronger than her feeble self." - This was haunting, because in just a few simple words, you managed to convey that horrible feeling of helplessness that people in such a situation would feel. Shudder!

"It hid the fragility within with a proficiency that a girl her age shouldn't have." - Simply heartbreaking, and so true to our understanding of Sahiba. I fervently hope that the show adopts a similar approach as they unfold her character further.

When I wrote these lines, trust me when I say I had tears in my eyes. To think a girl having to go through such experiences is heart breaking. It wasn't easy to write about the mindset of a traumatized person but I am glad I managed to connect with all of you.

I will make sure to take time out and share my thoughts on your posts... 💖

Itna pyaar dogi to bhaag bhaag ke aaungi Naa 🙈🤗

PS. I actually missed you all too... And reading your posts always makes me smile 🤗

Originally posted by: mirai07