FF : Yeh Dooriyaan *SahAn + Veerat* (Updated 10/06) - Page 30

If there is one good reason to come back to the forum, that’s the story writers of this forum. Baaki tho, the show apparently is still a dumpster fire.

Goodness me, the amount of glee I take from Seerat being put in her place is unholy. I just love reading those parts.

Oh to see Sahiba so carefree. She is a young girl and deserve to live like that. I loved every bit of description of her life’s new turn.

Will be waiting for more Mirai and of course would love to read anything else you come up with ❤️

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

YAYYYYYYY!!! One more update!!! You is being updating regularly!!! I loved the chapter. I can already imagine sahiba dressed in jean and a white shirt!! And that bill sh*t🤣🤣!! Bro seerat ne mana kyu nhi kiya ke mujhe kuch bana nhi ata 😂😂 eve bezati karva Li ehne 😂😂. Acha so Jasleen buaji college drop out hai aur bolti hai papa ji aap partially karte ata jata aapko kuch hai nhi aur chale business me kaam karne 😂😂

😂😂😂😂😂😂

This was fun to read! Honestly I find Seerat to be a selfish, self-centered and a very jealous person by nature. She can't stand the fact the Sahiba is preferred over her hence the need to cook even when she can't to one-up her. My Sahiba here is street smart. Jasleen bua alag hi duniya mei jeeti hai 😂😂

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Wow Mirai a new chapter. That's great. I loved the chapter. Sahiba in jeans and white t shirt. Mast dikhegi I am sure

I'm going to imagine her in clothes other than a salwar and kameez with too short kurta!

I loved manveer, sahiba and Indar's conversation. How they are teaming up against angad is hilarious.

Oh yes! Just wait till Santosh sees that. Can you imagine her reaction?

Seerat ki beijjati was awesome. I loved this sahiba Jo seerat ko muh pe honest answer back karati hai. Usake kaand ko maasumiyat and all such stuff nahi bolati

Loved it

Thank you! ❤️

Angad ka kya reaction tha to see sahiba in such cloths. May be u can show flashback of their lunch date. Veer, keet and sahiba angad ka.

I've them planned in the next chapter.

Originally posted by: averma4583

How I wish the actual show would go the way you portray it! Granted we have the snakes to create uproar in Sahan and InderMaan’s utopia, but why can’t we have some normalcy? Loved this update as always!!!! Loving how Sahiba’s relationships with Inder and Maan have changed. The show should also show the same.

Thank you Averma! And yes, snakes are present but they at the moment are without poison. Sahiba's relationships are evolving with each members given a month had passed in the story. Show --- I'm fed up talking about it.

Thank you!! The ego clashing will be less since in my story Sahiba and Angad are sensible and practical people. Sahiba will not be tolerating any of Seerat's drama or antics honestly. If anything she will return her insults and words in kind with twice the force. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: arshisimple

First of a very quick new update was a fantastic surprise 👍🏻🙃

Now about this chapter, it was a treat! I love how they all grew in this story! I love love Sahiba and Manbeer’s relationship! The way you portray them I wish they have shown something like this in the show!! You are showing complete contrast from the show in fact! Your entire story is actually very progressive with characters growing and being very mature and understanding! You took this marriage and crafted into a positive relationship without any forced convictions!!

I wanted to watch something positive with romance in it when I started the show but well.....Books are better in this things. I'll just go read one. Thank you! Just wait for Santosh and Ajeet to watch such bonding between Sahiba and Angad's parents.

I am enjoying this story and would love to read more from your other stories as well! Also I enjoyed Seerat’s insult 😉and Sahiba’s honesty with her 👌👌

I don't have any other story at the moment but I am thinking of writing one, probably a two-shots or three-shots...not so sure yet. I just wanted to know whether anyone would read it what with less activity on the forum at the moment.❤️

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

Please tag me whenever you update

Thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Hey!

The fast update caught me by surprise. I would come back after I re-read it several times.

Heyaaa! Take your time, no hurry!

Originally posted by: mirai07

😂😂😂😂😂😂

This was fun to read! Honestly I find Seerat to be a selfish, self-centered and a very jealous person by nature. She can't stand the fact the Sahiba is preferred over her hence the need to cook even when she can't to one-up her. My Sahiba here is street smart. Jasleen bua alag hi duniya mei jeeti hai 😂😂

Yaar i will have to say imagining her in something else other than those hideous salwar suit is much better. Like Punjab me toh koi itne choti kurti pehnti bhi nhi hai 😂 aur agar pehnti bhi hai toh jeans ke saath Varna nhi 😂 yes much smarter than the show. I left the show long back ago. Fanfictions pe jee rahi hu 😂

So happy to read this, glad that u are continuing the story. Read the last two parts together. Loved it. Looking forward to more♥️