FF : Yeh Dooriyaan *SahAn + Veerat* (Updated 10/06) - Page 19

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Mind blowing update dear, can't wait to read more

Thank you!! ❤️

Originally posted by: Dwanstar

Omgggggg......

Teri love story so cuteeeee....and keerat and veer's moment aye haye ....

This was full of super cute moments whether choosing of dresses or grand entry of the ladies..

Super excited to see what so have planned for garry in the next update...

Thank you!! Gary's pot will break in the next to next update! ❤️

Originally posted by: Az07

What an update dear. This part literally made my day. I was blushing & laughing through out the update.

OMG!!! Thank you thank you thank you! You made my day with such a huge response. You have no idea how fun I had reading this! ❤️

So coming to this part I liked you show Keerat’s college. In the show they just say it for the sake of it.

I have full intention of showcasing normal life as much as possible. This Veerat story too after all. 😉

So this Akhilesh guy seems to a bit more interested in our keerat. Looks like veer will have to take boxing classes from his Paaji for this guy 😉.

Akhilesh, well, let's see....😂😂

Poor veer almost got a heart attack when he was addressed as Keerat’s brother 😆. And not to forget keerat did notice his his reaction 😊.

She will notice a lot of things even if she may not admit them 😂!!

But yes keerat is right in local areas luxurious cars and rich people do get noticed soon. And there will be utter bad talks when a girl mingle with a rich guy. But I do get veer too. He is not someone with status mind & because of this it didn’t get stuck in his mind before. But I am really glad he came to pick keerat. Veer is surprised that keerat has friends? And that too a guy? Abhi se possessive? And I liked her reply ‘ aap mere dosth nahi? Toh aap ladki ho kya?’ 🤣 And every more sweet is his reply ‘ but v r different’! oh bhai Saab please explain Kaise? 😆 I loved how he is beliwered by keerat. Wonder what that are planning for Cindy baby.

Abhi tak toh rishtedaari mei sui atki hui hai Veer ki....let's see where he stops 😂 You'll have to wait for those plans to become fruitful.

Sahiba hating the dresses provided to her is understandable (they have a horrible taste btw especially for functions) she is a women filled with simplicity. And that big mouth Prabhjyot can’t shut her mouth. Wonder what’s her real issue? I hope you will explore a bit about this in your story. I am glad the Monga sisters gave a befitting reply. Manbir Gurleen seems to enjoy Keerat’s presence & seeing similarities between both sisters. I loved how Sahiba addressed that they want there bahu to dresses up even if she is a traitor it doesn’t matter she should be a decked up doll. This thing in show has irked me a lot. I am glad Manbir Gurleen asked her to select dresses for them. It might be a small gesture but for a newly wedded bahu that shows acceptance & love. I loved the awesome four (Sahiba keerat Manbir Gurleen) & here after I will address them as awesome four.

Awesome four ~☺️☺️ Sounds great ~ you may have to change the four to five...☺️

I liked the diplomatic Angad especially when he handled Garry. He is observing the Bawejas. Yes better late than never. And how well Angad knew veer that he wouldn’t be able to pretend in front of Garry as veer is always the most straightforward one among the brothers. And the curly hair over smart reporter got a shock when our awesome four makes a grand entry for reception. The awesome four managed to clean blow there men with there beauty and elegance. Charoka alag alag chalraha hai yehan pe 🤣

First our InderMan - Inder is so affected by his classy wife (real classy unlike in show) that he forgot that his jawan beta usse observe kar raha hai 😆 And that shyness & blush on Manbir’s face & her cute reply to Inder 🥰 Angad had the first genuine smile that evening I guess seeing his parents khuleaam flirt karte Huey dekhke 😆 But at the same time I felt so sorry for Angad too. All these was new to him. His parents never shared such things before.

Inder and Manveer spoke through their expressions but yeah, he adored his parents. I tried to showcase that. 🥰

Coming to my comfort couple Gurleen Jaspal I always adored the way this couple carry themselves in show. So mature & poise. Here I liked the way Jaspal was smitten by his beautiful wife & the eye teasing between Manbir Gurleen made it even more natural. No doubt our Keerat pehelwan is always a beauty but when she dressed she just smashed everyone with her beauty. No wonder veer was dumbstruck seeing keerat in a lehenga. Looks like he forgot to breathe for a second after seeing keerat. The eye exchange between the duo was cute. But that become even more cute when Angad caught them. Now this is interesting. I am glad Angad is observing around. It didn’t take a fraction of second for Angad to recognise who is behind the awesome fours getup. Angad is literally stunned by Sahiba. Not only by her beauty but all her magnificent presence. Something which beauty queen Seerat couldn’t do with her dresses and loads of makeup. I like the way he introduced his beautiful wife decked up in black & red saree (show dress for reception was horrible) complimenting him. I am also a bit surprised that Sahiba too liked him for his well dressed looks. They catch the attention in the centre of stage.

Sahiba is observing. She did not like him like that but rather found that this man who is supposed to be a businessman is actually one (not the showpiece businessman we get in the show). She is seeing Angad in his environment for the first time. It's his aura at that moment that draws her eye. 🥰

Veer slowly took keerat away from the limelight but his bad luck Ekam piche piche aayi 🤣
I had to admire Sahiba for keeping an eye on keerat even when she is busy in stage. She is so protective like a mother to keerat. And the small gesture Angad gave to assure her was just ❤️ It’s always small small gestures that helps in a budding relationship I suppose. I liked how he teased women takes time for dressing (so true btw) and Sahiba teased him about there love story was all together another level 😊 it became more beautiful with veers added smile.

Well I don’t understand why the journalist took veer’s name when Angad said someone else in his family have a more exciting love story? Was it because veer was spotted with Keerat😆

Actually yes. This would be covered in the next part. 🥰

Anyways waiting for the Dhamaka exposure of Garry Seerat. I have no mind for the reception to end. I am so in love with the awesome four & there love struck men around them.

The reception has to end for the confrontation to begin after which is a roller coaster ride for Gary-Seerat. But I get your point! 😆

Sorry it became a too long reply! But what to do you have us such wonderful update. Keep writing more dear & update next part soon!

Nah, I am going to be greedy and ask you to write such long replies whenever you can instead! 😆❤️

Originally posted by: EkChudail

Finally it is here. I am so hooked to the story. I like how playful Sahiba and Angad are with each other. Even though the serial version of their interaction was good, I still prefer the lightness of it.

Thank you! I love your story too! ❤️

They interact so so much more in this story. ❤️ ❤️

I am truly looking forward to their romance.

It's going to be a slow burn ❤️ So a long wait.

Even the side characters are so playful and present. Sighs. I prefer this more than the show.

I try to include them as much as I can. ❤️

Originally posted by: kalavathi5

I have been waiting for this update and it’s lovely❤️❤️❤️

loved getting a glance into Keerat at college and especially loved the four ladies spending time together👌❤️❤️❤️

Looking forward to Seerat and Gary’s beat down starting🤣

Thank you! After the reception part is over, there is confrontation! ❤️

Thanks dear for the fantastic update super 👌 👍 😍 🥰

I simply love how Angad uses his brains unlike the TV show! I also love Inder-Manveer. They are serving the purpose of elders guiding the way and bringing new members feel comfortable in the fold of family. This was a great update! Now how do we get you on the TMD writers’ payroll!

Nice update but I was so looking forward to read about Sahiba's first interaction with B family at breakfast table. You totally skipped that. Can we please get some snippets of it in flashback?

also, waiting for Gary's band bajaa ceremony.

This is amazing. I am hooked. More invested in this story then the show honestly 🤩❤

Mirai....I caught up with all the chapters just now and I simply am in love with this storyyyyyyy❤️❤️ I simply adore how it's like so different from the show..super refreshing am.. loving the way you have changed manbeer's arc + her and inder's too!

And ofcourse the highlight - sahiba and angad - loving the way it is unfolding here for them😃

And like really did you have to stop at that last part cliffhanger yaar?? So looking forward to the next part alreadyyyyyy!

Wonderful workkk❤️🤗