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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DIYA-

Hii to all TLians...here is my 2nd FF on TaAnu ... The story would told in present and it go to past (Flash Back)...So present happenings in the story would in 1st person narration and the Flash back will in third person narration...Hope u all will lyk...



Concept:-
As title indicates its the story of lady whose fortune becomes misery.


TAANI-The narrator:-A psychatrist by profession. She whose; fortune becomes a misery.

Each character will be introduced as the story goes on.

It was drizzling; I could see the first ray of sun's light falling on earth in the dawn. There was time when I enjoyed the heavy shower. But now each droplet seems likes the dark clouds shedding its tears for something which it had lost, when I stepped out of the train through which I traveled all the way from Mumbai to continue my career.


The place Kolkatha is not new to me. My roots are here I was born in a traditional Bengali family still I never thought of coming back to my place because I do only have few good memories. I continued walking on the platform to reach exit.

I came out of the station to get a Riksha which would take to the asylum; yes Asylum where I've to work as psychiatrist. It was a dream to become a Psychiatrist. But when I achieved my dream I lost many priceless things in life.

I put forward my hand to an approaching Riksha .
"Kither jana hain?"-He enquired
"ASHA MENTAL ASYLUM"- I said and got into the Riksha.

I was surprised to see the changes in the place. It was a calm and quite place but today it had become a city which was not so. I have to travel 30 km from station. Now it started raining heavily. The wiper of the Riksha is on as the view is not clear for the driver to drive. He decreased the speed. I was more nearer to asylum when the Riksha took a U turn. I reached my destination and paid him the fare then he left.

I stood at the gate reading the name board ASHA HOME FOR SANITY CHANLLENGE The asylum had a calm and quite ambiance. I could here only the pitter patter sound of rain which had increased its force. Watchman came and opened gate.

"Kise milna hain Madam"-He asked to which I gave
"Mujhe Dr. Gautam se milna hain"-I replied

After saying this I climbed up the stairs which was few feet away from the gate.

"TAANI"-someone called my name when I was walking through the doorway. I turned back and looked.

"Taani right..?"; asked he.
"Yes"- was my reply.
"I'm Dr. Gautam Come with me I'll accompany you" -He said
"Thank you"-I expressed my gratitude.
"Its my pleasure"-He said on a humble note.

He is one I'm searching for; owner of this asylum. A good looking young man not more 30.Very respectable figure; who posses all stature of a Doctor. He is simple in his appearance. His words do tell that he isn't arrogant.


"Good Morning Dr."-The wish that I could give him in this early morning.
"Good Morning'-He wished me in return.

We walked and entered into a room.


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The room was well furnished. A table at the centre with al necessary items liked papers, paper weight, files, pen and pencil in its holders, telephone etc. Three chairs two opposite to the other. All the facilities a psychiatrist's room should posses.

"It's your room"-He said.

I gave him a warm smile.

"I'll take you to your quarters at night"-He told me as he's giving me promise.
"Thank you"-I had nothing else to say.

'''''.********'''''..

Time flew. I went to his room after searching for long time. Also he had called me.

"Have you called me sir..?"-I questioned.

"Yes I just now gone through resume you are from Rajpur.."-He said.

"Yes"-I agreed.

"Then why you need quarters..? - He enquired to which I showed a blank face.

I know it would not take much time to travel from Rajpur to here but still I have my own reasons to stay here. He didn't ask further questions.

"Please take your seat"- He told.

I took my position on to chair. He lent me some file.

"See these are some case file with which you can start"- He told.

"Hmmm"-I said.

I took the files. By the time a nurse came in.

"Doctor voh 101 violent ho rah hain"-She spoke out.
"Mein abhi aaya"-He told me and rushed in a hurry.

I don't where he had gone. By carrying all the files he has given I moved to room.

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I got my position on the chair, took the receiver of the phone. The thought was there in me; that whether I should ring up the number or not. My hand were sweating I could feel my heartbeats still I took up the phone and rang the seven digit number. My all feeling became meaningless when no one attended the phone on other side. Tears roll down from my eyes. I decided myself that I'll never dial the number again. But my heart kept asking repeatedly Will I stern in my decision..? Can I live without knowing anything about him as I had tried to live for the past 1 year..? Don't know. But I'll try to be a new Taani.I must do that otherwise all strive of mine of 1 year would be futile. I wiped my tears and went out to go for a round so that I could see the patients whom the sanity had attacked.

''''''''''''''''..'''''''''''''''

It became night when Dr.Gautam dropped me at my quarters. It was small house, one bed with attached washroom and of course a kitchen. For me it was more than enough. I place my bag in closet and took a shower. I made decision that I must at least meet my mom whom I've punished my not letting to see her daughter.


Precap:

All images in front of me were blurred as the unfallen tears dwell in my eyes. I wished for rain to happen so that my tears will be hidden by the shower. But that wish became unfulfilled. I couldn't speak anything. I could feel the heaviness in my throat. The hug that I went and gave spoke many things to her.


Hope u all enjoyed reading...

waiting for ur valuable comments


CHAPTER 01 Taani's return to Kolkatha 43253689

CHAPTER 02 Taan's meeting with her mom 43519682

CHAPTER 03 Taani meeting Onu has her patient 43519682

CHAPTER 04 Taani take Onu to their childhood 43794163

CHAPTER 05 Anurag pushes Robindo to death 44829368

CHAPTER 06 Anurag set USA on Taani's words 45089228

CHAPTER 07 Anurag news of return 45299605

CHAPTER 08 TaAnu Meeting after years 45461578

CHAPTER 09 Anurag reveals the secret 45900374

CHAPTER 10 Taani's gets hyper for Anurag 47334649

CHAPTER 11 Taani's wedding 48639337

CHAPTER 12 For Eachother 50945978

CHAPTER 13 A firm decision 54460566

CHAPTER 14 Love in air 56836799

CHAPER 15 WEDDING BELL RANG 61678966

CHAPTER 16 The happiness 63027441

dear your style of story telling so so unique.. mean it is shown in a different perspective..i mean yeh ek narartion hoke bhi naration nahi..aap beeti hokar bhi aap beeti nahin..apart from easy visualization..i smell and sense many new directions in story telling world!! good work keep it up hon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DIYA-


here is the nxt chptr...


The rain continued whole night. I was thinking the whole night that what made sky so sad that it is shedding that much tears the whole night. I didn't even get a chance to cry out loudly for my losses. It might be the retribution for my deed of choosing my destiny.

I reached the asylum early so that I could go as I need to meet my mom. Today I need to spend my time on studying the case history of each patient. I was going through almost 8 to 10 file in 4 to 5 hours. I came know I need spent more time each case. Suddenly I saw a case file put me into a dilemma. I did not know what to do. So I decided to go and ask Dr.Gautam. Grabbing that particular file in my hand I rushed to his room

'''. ''''..*********'''''''..

I heard he was busy in talking to someone in the phone. So I stood at the doorstep

"Don't worry but I should know what the reason for his present condition is..?":-He said in his convo.

He saw me

"Get in Taani":-He said and showed gesture to get in.

He was still in his convo. I put the file on the table.

"Take your seat":-He said to me.

He looked at me. Drawing a chair I sat on it. I was waiting him while he was talking.

"What is your full name":-He asked.

I was hesitant to say.

"I asked your full name Taani":-He asked again.

"Taani'Taani Ganguly":-I answered because I have no other option. Tears roll down from my eyes but thinking that do Ganguly exist as my surname. I don't know and this is greatest misery a woman could have. I wiped it quickly with a thought that he was looking at me.

"Yes Taani Ganguly":-He told my name to the person at other end. That made bit scared. Why should he tell my name to that person?

He hung his phone. So he turned towards me.

"I want to talk to you":-He said

"Me too Doctor":-I said.

"So you speak first":-He said.

"Nahi aap boliye":-I requested.

"Taani '.":- In a tone of order as told me to continue.

"Doctor there is noting in this file; iss mein na toh koi naam aur nahi koi address sirf yahi likha hain diagnosis is memory loss due to depression":-I said pointing on to the file which I kept on his table when I came to his room.

"I want to talk you about the same thing":-He said.

I felt some importance in that.

"Yes Doctor":-I told I want him to continue further.

"Yeh mere dosth ke brother in law hain bauhath paisewale hain and this person was once a great business man and his condition is very pathetic now":-He told me in detail.

"Mein samaj gayi Doctor":-I said.

"Lag bug 11 maheena hogaya hoga voh yahan aaye hue":-He said further.

"Hmmm'."-I said.

"Mein tumhe yeh case de raha hoon Taani you should see him and do whatever required":-He gave me responsibility.

"Sure":-I agreed.

"Okk":-He said.

"But what is that person's name?":- I asked.

Before he tells the name I remembered of asking him permission to go out during noon time.

"Doctor mein noon mein bahar ja rahi hoon; Shall I?:- I asked him.

"Of course you can":-He permitted.

"So may I '":- I said as I want to leave.

"Ok":-He said.

I left the room thinking why he asked my surname. Who was at the other end..?The question haunted me.

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It became noon, time for me to go and meet my mom. I know she would waiting for since 1 years. No I should say that I kept her waiting. The cruelty that a daughter can do to mother. For taking such a decision I needed lots of courage.I went ont of my room to report to Dr.Gautam. I find him at my door step.

"Taani":-He called me.

I looked at him.

"Aap bahar jake jaldi aajana..?": He told me.

"Kya hua'?":- I enquired the reason.

"Koi aapko milna chahtha":-He said.

I was surprised to hear. Except my mom nobody knows that I'm here. Now I'm going to meet my mom. So who that person who wants to meet me..?

"Kaun..?!!!":-I asked him in a surprise tone.

"He'll meet you":-He replied.

"Ok mein jaldi aajavoongi":-I agreed.

I started walking to the entrance. I couldn't guess who would that who wants to meet me.

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I got into the bus and took a ticket to Durga Nagar. She would be waiting there in the park.

My eyes searched for her wile I was walking. It was big park so I need to walk more as I didn't get any information that where she would be waiting for me. The paths were slippery and the sluggish. Mt sari's bottom was got drenched in that. Droplet of water from the trees made my body and soul very cold and chill which was not so.. I looked around in each and every benches but I find none whom I want to see.

"Taani":-Someone female voice came I could recognize the person. Mom' I turned to my right side.

Laboni Banerjee:-My mom. I'll say to her almost all things in my life. If I became something my after loosing everything it's only because of her. She cared and loved me as all mother in world does but my mom fulfilled all my dreams even after loosing her husband in an accident when I was only of 14 years of age.

All images in front of me were blurred as the unfallen tears dwell in my eyes. I wished for rain to happen so that my tears will be hidden by the shower. But that wish became unfulfilled. I couldn't speak anything. I could feel the heaviness in my throat. The hug that I went and gave spoke many things to her.

I made myself comfortable.

"Ma":-I called out

"Kaisi hain tu":-She asked.

"Sab teek hain":-I gave and answer just to predent as if I'm happy.

"Poore ek saal Taani;tu ne ithni badi faisla akele kiya" :- She asked me but myself don't know the answer. I just looked her let her spit out all her anger.

"Pyaar mein hum apne aapko kho de they hain lekin tu ne aapni pyaar keliye aapne aapko kho diya":- That voice was familiar to me. Its my brother

Taposh Banerjee:. My brother; who is a well known critique on social issue. He raises his voice against all illegal and anti social activities. A very caring and supportive husband. A child need a mother and father too but I never felt like because he was always there for me when I lost my father in childhood. I had no other option rather than make him sad.

"Dada":-I called out.

He hugged me. I knew he would yell at all my deeds. One way or the other my life was to take hatred of others. I was not ready to confiscate love which not for me from someone's heart. My birth might be on someone's curse otherwise I would be not suffering in my life.

"Aap kaise hain?":-I asked him.

"Teek hain":-He replied.

"Tu kithni pathli hogayi hain Taani.Khana teek se nahi khathi hogi":-Mom said.

I smile.

"Math haso maa hoon mein teri":-She said.

"Aisa kuch nahi hain maa":-I said it smilingly.

"Chaliye vahan baithe hain":-Dada pointed to while which was at few distance. We went and sat there. As soon as we got seated I put my head on maa's lap. The tears fall on my cheek from her eyes.

"Maa Onu kaisa hain":-Finally I got guts to think and talk about him.

"Tu abhi usi ke bare mein soch rahi hain Taani":-Dada asked.

"Voh toh uski bare maang se patha chaltha hain":-Maa said.

I understood that she notice my maang was filled sindoor.I got up from her lap and said nothing.

"Onu kaisa hain":- I repeated the question.

"Patha nahi jab sab kuch hogaya hum Siliguri chaley gaye":-She answered.

"Kya?":- I was shocked because I was unaware that.

"Haan Taani maa teek keh rahi hain":- Dada said.

"Lekin aap logon mujhse yeh chupaya kyun.?:-A questioned.

"Agar mein tumhe batha thi toh kya tum laut aajathe..?":- Maa asked.

Definitely my answer for this question would NO but I said nothing. I just looked at her and then DADA who stood with an angry face which still showered love.

"Maa mujhe jana hoga":-I said.

"Fikr math karo yahan koi uss mash hoor singer Taani ko nahi pehchanega":-Maa said.

I kept mum.

"Mein poochna bhool gayi Mouli kaisi hain":-I Asked about sister in law my friend.

"Teek hain":-Dada said.

"Mein javoon":-I asked permission to leave the place.

Mein chot detha hoon":-Dada said.

"Nahi aap log jayiye":-I said.

I started to walk without looking back because I might stop and run towards them when I turn back. On the way I was thinking I didn't say anything which I want to say them. It happens sometimes to every human now it happened to me.

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I reached at the asylum. I don't want anybody here to know my past. So I restricted DADA to drop me. Now I have of think of the person whom I'm going to meet. I prayed to god that it should be Anurag because I can't even think of meeting him so what would be my condition when it really happen. But my heart says that at least I should meet him once. I'm totally in dilemma. Thinking this I opened the door. A man was sitting facing my chair. His head was on the table so I could not guess who he was.

"Excuse me":-I said

He took his head from the table and looked at me. I was shocked to see him again. His thick hair, wide forehead, Thick eyebrows and small but little big eyes took me where I do not want to go; my past.

Precape:

I lost myself. For sometime I was not in my sense. I neither spoke nor showed any emotions. Someone was screaming out my name but I couldn't respond. He shook me my holding shoulders. I came into sense leaning on the wall I burst into cry in a loud noise. Those who were standing around me were shocked to hear that.

dear aesome naration..you remind me of many great novelistS!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DIYA-

Hi all...

Hw u all...?

here the nxt update...

Yes he had portrayed a great part in my past. It would take me more than a day tell For me whom he was? He had role as same as my DADA.Yet I call him Jeeju.Yes Jeeju in every aspect.

"Jeeju":-I told..

"Rithesh Basu that's my name":- He told in anger.

Rithesh Basu: Born with silver spoon. A lovable husband and very caring father. He is the sole owner of Basu Publications-the 2nd largest publication house in Kolkata. He is more than a son in law in the house , he is the first son there. All admired his capability and truthfulness. A sincere business man. Every parent would pray to get a son like him. Unfortunately his parents died when he was doing his PG.I know him since 14 years of age.

"Aise kyun keh rahe ho aap ?":-I asked him.

"Tum mujhe bathavo mein aise kyun nahi bol saktha..?":- He asked in return.

I eyes fall on the ground. I could not look at him. He came near to me. Patted on my shoulder .I looked him.

"Mujhe patha hain aap mujhse naraaz honge lekin ab sab log bauhath kush honge na.?":- I asked

He gave me vague smile. I couldn't read anything from that.

"Neelu maa,baba,Ananya di,Kuhu sab kaise hain...?":- I asked about each one by giving out their name.

He walked a distance.

"Baba ko attack hogaya tha now he some what ok aur baki sab teek hain":- He said.

He turned and looked at me.

"Tum kisi ko bhool rahe ho Taani":-I told.For which I had answer in the form of tears.

I looked at him.

"Uss shaqz ko tu bhool nahi sakthi hain na..?":- He questioned.

"Poori ek saal yehi koshish kar rahi thi":-I answered. That is a truth ting. It has been 1 year I left this place but I couldn't forget him.

"Acha hain ki tum koshish kar rahi hain Taani":-He said. I didn't get the meaning of what he said.

"Mathlab..?":- I asked.

"Taani tu ne poore ek saal yahan se door'tu ne ek baar bhi nahi socha ek baar usse dekhoon..?":-He asked.

"Nahi'mujhe patha hain voh ab bauhath kush hain":-I answered.

"Sach kaha tu ne":-He said in humble tone.

I looked at him.

"Aap baitiye na ":- I said in pleasant tone to overcome the bad situation.

"Nahi mein yahan kisi ko dekhne aaya tha":- He said.

"Yahan..? Lekin kisko..?":- I asked in confusion.

"Tum bhi jaanthi ho usse":-He replied.

"Kaun Jeeju..?":-Now I came to more confusion.

"Mein ne Dr.Gautam se kehdiya hain tunhe uske paas le chalegne":- He said.

"Teek hain lekin please kisiko math bathana plss":- I yelled.

He went out by nodding his head. I stood there thinking that who would that person. Dr.Gautam came in.

"Chaliye mere saath":-He said.

He started to walk I followed him to know who was that person. My heart beat a bit faster in curiosity. He led me through the corridor which is between the cells of different patients. I don't know where he was leading me. I kept following him. He opened the door of a cell its lock was already opened. I saw 2 nurses were standing inside the cell. I entered inside the cell. Someone apart from those 2 was standing facing to the wall. I can only see his hair. As Dr.Gautam walked near to him I again repeated the same task of following him. My eyes happened to fall on the scribbling on the wall "MISHTI" .This is word is not new to me. I have very deep relation with this word. The thought haunted me why he scribbling only this word on the whole wall? What made him to write this? I do not get answer

We reached near to him.

"Kya aap isse jaathi hain?":-He said.

I went near to him. He was busy scribbling the word. I moved to side to see the side view of him. I was startled seeing him. I just can't tell what I felt when I saw him. I felt something broke within me. I lost myself. For sometime I was not in my sense. I neither spoke nor showed any emotions. Someone was screaming out my name but I couldn't respond. He shook me my holding shoulders. I came into sense leaning on the wall I burst into cry in a loud noise. Those who were standing around me were shocked to hear that.

"Onu'!!":-I shouted.

ANURAG GANGULY:-The genius, the poet, the guitarist, a business tycoon. A little reserved by nature and very close to his family He is bit possessive when come people whom he loves. He makes sure that all are living happily. He is very caring in that case. But my shattered by means behind him. He loves his parents and respects them.

For me he is my best friend, my teacher, my guardian, my'''..n in his words. Because it is unable to tell who was he in my life. Must say he played the role of husband in my very well but I failed play the role of his wife."MERA HAPPY MOTTU"

" Taani":- Dr.Gautam called out seeing my reaction after seeing Onu.

I gathered all strength with me and went near to him. Still he saw busy scribbling on the wall .I was thinking that why he is scribbling this word if he had move on in his life What made him so bewildered that he needs my help? I raised my left hand to touch on his right cheek. But my thoughts stopped me. The thought that now he belongs to some other person and not me. I took my step back. This is my fortune which is a misery. Whom I was dying to see in my whole year is in front of me that's greatest fortune but the misery is that to see him in this condition.

Dr.Gautam gestured to the nurse so they went out.

I turned and looked at Dr.Gautam. I couldn't believe my eyes Anurag in this situation'!!!

"Taani' aap isse janthi hain aur Mishti ko bhi..?":-Dr.Gautham asked.

"Mein hoon Mishti":-I said lowering my head.

"Yeh aapki..?":- He asked.

"Pathi the yeh mere":-I said grief.

"Kya..Pathi the..Mathlab'toh ab yeh '?":- He needed answers for many question and answers of those question were only tears. So I replied nothing

I went near to Onu. I put my hand on his hand which he used for writing. He is a left hand writer. He stopped writing. The charcoal which he used for writing fell from his hand. He turned toward and stared at me. I became happy after all he looked at me. I touched his face but he pushed my hand away.

"Onu'":- I called out.

While looking at me he took a step backwards. He hauled his hair. I was shocked seeing the number on his chest "101"

"Taani..!!":- He yelled which tumbled tears from my eyes. His yelling resounds me of that time when he used to scream when is in need of me.

"Usse uske agey kuch nahi aatha":- Dr.Gautam told.

I looked at Doctor.

"Taani I'm sorry mujhe nahi patha tha ki Anurag aapka pathi'.warna mein aapko kal hi yahan lekar aatha":- He said to me. I just looked at him.

"Mein kuch waqt yah baitoon?":- I asked

"Okk":- He agreed and he went out.

Now myself and Onu were left alone. This should be the happiest moment of my life but his condition draws me to great sorrow. He is sitting on wooden cot which is given for patients in asylum to sleep. He was lost in his thoughts. I went near to him and sat beside him. I ran hands through shoulder and moved towards cheek. He just looked at me as child. He neither did anything nor did he react. I don't know what happen to me at point of time. I hugged forgetting the world around me and burst into cry. I wished that his hand on my back and tell that everything will be all right as he used to do before but instead he pushed me away and drag himself away from me. I was not able to bear so I walked out of his cell.

I rushed to Dr.Gautam's room. He was busy with his work. He saw me at his doorstep; holding the door's handle.

"Please come in" :- He told. He could read the frustration on my face.

"Doctor mein aapse'":-He didn't let me to complete.

"Abhi abhi Rithseh ne mujhe phone kiya tha usse mujhe compulsorly kaha ki yeh case aapko dene keliye":- He told.

"Mein..?!!":- I was astonished.

"Usne kaha aapke alawa Anurag koi nahi jantha.Dekhiye aapko joh help chahiye aap keh sakthi hain ":- He told which is true.

All these years what I suffered was nothing when it is compared to this. Physically and mentally I'm still his wife so how can I treat him and How could I treat him as my first patient here?

"Aap karogey na..?":-He asked to which I nodded my head.


Precap:

Flashback of TaAnu's life. Introduce Little Onu and Liittle Taani.

its nice to know u presented Riteish in a good light!! he is a good actor
i was sad remembering the episode when first time taani sees pagal onu...thanks dear for your beautiful writeup
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshmi_3004

dear am new here and i am loving your writing skill...can you add me to your PM list so that i can enjoy your writing too



dear your style of story telling so so unique.. mean it is shown in a different perspective..i mean yeh ek narartion hoke bhi naration nahi..aap beeti hokar bhi aap beeti nahin..apart from easy visualization..i smell and sense many new directions in story telling world!! good work keep it up hon

dear aesome naration..you remind me of many great novelistS!!

its nice to know u presented Riteish in a good light!! he is a good actor
i was sad remembering the episode when first time taani sees pagal onu...thanks dear for your beautiful writeup


thank u so much fr ur appreciaatn...im nt a gtea novelist hon😃...its jus tat i tied to put out hw TL look in anothr abgle if Onu was real pagal...😊 keep readin n comntin...ur comnts means lot to me😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: taanuMohurPRIYA

Bahut atcha hai ! love it ! waiting for the next !

kepp going Diya !


hi priya...thnx fr comntin😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I like the concept and everything so far...
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Edited by ..Labyrinth.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi all

herez my nxt

C H A P T E R 17

Nurse came to my room.

She said"Dr.Taani aap se milne ek ladki aayi hain"."Kaun" I asked."Voh patient no.101 ki room aapki wait kar rahi hain"The nurse said."Acha mein dekthi thank you"As soon as I said that she left.

AM,PM,Mouli I started to recollected as much as names from my past. But the person whose name I never tough was there in that room.

"Nupur'!" I called out.

She was standing near Onu was stil scribbling the word 'MISHTI'.She ran hugged me as soon as called that that nane

"I'm sorry Taani I couldn't keep my word"She said in tears.

"Mein apne saath pheron ke saathon vachan nahi niba paya tum apni ek vada kaise nibavoge" I replied.

"Par ithni rath ko tu yahan kyun aagaye.Yeh log tumhe ander kaise aane diya ?" I asked

"Mein uss rishte se nahi aayi joh tum mujhe dena chahthi thi" She replied

.As I said before Nupur was one of the reason for our break up.

"Sab kuch tere haathon sop kar gayi thi na mein phir mere Onu iss halath kaise ho gaye"I asked sorrowfully.

"Mein bhi tujhse vahi poochne keliye ayi hain ki aisa kya hua tha joh Onu ab tere reham ka intzaar kar raha hain?" She threw a question for which I was searching answer.

"Iss halath mein mujhe hona chahiye thi na Onu ko kyun.Sab mein hi toh khoya hain"I said and looked her.

PAST...

Anurag entered to his room where Taani reading book

Anurag:Toh madam kar kya rahe hain

He a big bowl filled with sugar syrup.

Anurag:Acha toh tum mere baqar ras gulle kha rahi thi la meri share la

Saying this he stretched his hand.She put bowl on to his hand which only the sugar syrup.

Anurag:Taani ki bachi tu ne sab khali kar di

Taani:Voh dekh mein tere bhale kiya hi toh kiya

Anurag:Iss mein kaunsi bhala hain mera?

She licked her hand.

Taani:Dekh Onu kithni handsome aur dashing lag raha haiin agar yeh sab kha ke phir se mottu hua toh..?

Anurag:Haan ab bahana bana lo ek toh sab kuch kha liya aur uppar justification de rahi hain

Taani started to laugh and took another bowl which was underneath the bed.He quickly grapped the bowl bowl.

Anurag:Vaise mujhe patha meri Taani mujhe bina de kar kuch bhi nahi khayegi hain na.

Taani:Haan bilkul aur iss liye aaj ke khana tum banavoge.

He swollowed one Ras gula without chewing as he heard he was pusposed took the food

Anurag:Baaki log kahan gaye.Aur raath ka khana tu daily banathi hain

Taani:Maa aur baba, di jeeju aur kuhu gaye hain jeeju ke gar voh jeeju maa aur baba ke shrad keliye gaye hain na bhulakat

Anurag:Acha hota agar hum bhi chale jatha toh

Taani:Iski vajah tumhare voh kadoos share broker se jaake pooch

Suddentily his face changed.

Taani:Aaj khana tu banayega

Anurag:Why there a change?

Taani:Because I like changes

Anurag:And I hate you

Taani:Oh really

She came near to him

Taani:Tum mereliye ithna bhi nahi kar sakthe

Anurag:Ofcourse karoonga darling.Par tum mujhe kya doongi

Taani:Kya chahoye tumhe..?

Anurag:MujhE...?

After having last ras gulle he put the bowl aside.He went near to her and showed his cheek.

Anurag:Ek do na

Taani:Onu mein..?

Anurag:Arre jaldi do na

She gave slap to him.He was shocked and looked at her.

Taani:Kya hua tu ne tapad dene keliye toh kaha tha na

Anurag (dramatic tone):Its an advice from me all kabhi apni dosth shaadi math karna warna aapke saath yeh hoga

*********************

An hour later..Taani was standing near window.Anurag came and stood her behind.

Anurag:Ankhe band karo

She turned towards him.

Taani:Kya ?

Anurag:I said close your eyes.

She obeyed.He took her in his arms.

*********************

They came to a launge which was decoraredwith candles and roses and put her down.She opened her eyes.

Taani:Yeh sab kya hain Onu

Anurag:Andi ho kya can't understand it's a romantic date

Taani:Yeh sab tu ne kiya

Anurag:Sirf Tere Liye ab bait aur batha kaisa laga sab kuch

She sat

Taani:Kuch adhoora sa hain tere kavithyen ke bina

Anurag:Tujhe kaise patha ki mein poems likhthi hoon

Taani: Dosth hoon aur tum mujhse kuch chupa nahi saktha khas kar teri diary

Anurag:Tu ne meri diary padli

She smiled at him

Taani:Yes

Anurag:Tum chahath ko mein poora nah karoon aisa kabhi ho saktha hain

He went and came after a few minutes with guitar

Jism Pakh Ankhon Mein Barloon

Saans Saans Mein Shamil Karloon

Is Duniya Mein Jaan Gawa Tujhe Uss Duniya Mein Haasil Karloon

Zindagi Gawa Kar Bhi Joh Zindagi Mile

Har Khushi Gawa Kar Bhi Joh Ek Khusi Mile

Toh Maangloon Tere Liye Tere Liye Tere Liye

She clapped her hands and came and hug him.

Anurag:Sab Tere Liye

She left the hug.

Anurag:Chal ab khana khatha joh Hot Pot ke chef ne bana hain

Taani:Onu..?

Anurag:Aur kya mujhe sirf khana khane aatha hain

Taani:Tu kabhi nahi suderega

Anurag:Thanks

They had the food.

*********************

On the way to their room.

DING DONG:- someone rang the bell.

Anurag:Mein dekhtha hoon

He went and opened the door.It was Nupur at the door step.

Taani:Nupur tab jaake ab rahe ho

Nupur:Kaise nahi athi ghar mein ithni badi function joh hain

Taani:Onu tum Nupur uppar leke javo mein kuch khane leke athi

Anurag took them upsyairs.

*****************

PRESENT...

That was last night I spend with Onu.The unforgettable night which marked twist of my life.Well twist was my own choice.The biggest mistake in my life.

PAST...

In a roomAnurag placed the bags on the floor.

Nupur: I'm sorry Onu

Anurag:Its ok

Nupur:Ab sab kuch hogaya hain na

Anurag:Nahi sab vaisa hi hain jaisa ki pehla thi

Nupur:What you mean?

Anurag:Grief tone):Taani maa banne wali hain

Nupur:Arre toh bauhath acha hain

Anurag:Yahan bhi uski jeeth hua hain Nupur

Nupuar:Sushant ka bacha

He told nothing.

Nupur:Kya aaj tum Taani ke saath apni zindagi mein khush ho

Anurag looked at her.

Nupur:Jawad do Onu.Tu ne Sushant ko Taani se divorce lene keliye majboor kiya tha na dekho ab kya hua

Anurag:Haan mein nehi Sushanth ko majboor kiya tha Taani ko divorce dene keliye

Nupur:Kya ab sab teek hogaya galathi teri hain shayad voh completely teek ho saktha tha

Anurag:Nothing is goin to be alright.Agar mein ne Sushanth ko dekhne se pehle teri mail pad letha toh voh jail jane mein ithni dere nahi ho jatha

Nupur:Usne Taani ko dokha diya

Anurag:Tujhe janna chahthi ho us din kya hua

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Nupur:Haan Onu

Anurag :Jis din Laboni maa ne mujhe yeh bathaya ki Taani meri wajah se dukhi tab mein decide kiya ki mein sab sort out karoonga issliye mein Sushanth ki studio par gayi tab mein jo dekha

FlashBack

Anurag entere.Sushanth was laying his head on lap of girl who had worn short skirts and having whisky

Sushanth:Bechari Taani voh mereliye apni best friend se good bye keh diya Anurag sabse badi business man pagal kahinga voh Taani keliye kuch bhi karega.Agar use patha chal gaya ki uska Nupur mujhe doond raha hain toh mein toh gaya.Taani meri sone ki ande dene wali murgi hain.

Back to Nupur And Anurag

Anurag:Jab mujhe patha chala voh hum sab ko dokha de raha hain

Flash back

Anurag:Sushanth.!!!!

He was shocked to see Anurag.Anurag went slapped Sushanth

Anurag:Tu ne sab ko dokha diya I wont leave you

They both had fight.Anurag pushed him to ground and he was unable get up.

Anurag:Mein tumhe jeene nahi doonga.

Sushanth:Nahi mein use bauhath pyaar karthi hoon

Anurag:Pyar.voh shabd kehne ka haq hi nahi tumhe

He took his phone and dialed.

Anurag:Atul mein Anurag I need your help.

******************

In a room where was just a table and three chairs.Anurag , Atul and Sushanth sitting on the side of the square.

Anurag:Yeh Atul hain ek advocate and he'll complete all formalities for leagal divorce

Atul:Bas aapko yahan sign karna hain Mr.Sushanth

Sushanth:I wont sign

Anurag:Teek hain I'll in my own way.Tu ne bathaya na mein Taani keliye kuch bhi kaaroonga.Agar Taani bachane tujhe maarna bhi pade toh voh karoonga.Aur tum achi tarah se janthe ek pagal ko arrest nahi kar saktha

Sushanth:Are you threatening me

Anurag:Never joh hone ja raha hoon vahi batha raha hoon agar tu ne sign nahi kiya toh

He took his gun out of his pocket.

Anurag:Tere ankhon ke samne moth hain now you have to decide tujhe jeena hain yah marna.and I know that Sushanth ko Taani se zyada apni jaan pyaari hain.right

Sushanth snatched the paper in anger and signed it

Anurag:Ab tum iss shehar ko chotkar javoge forever

Anurag:Teek hain divorce ke badle mein tumhe ek blank cheque doonga .Kya kehthe ho?

Sushanth looked at him

Anurag:I know tum paise ke liye kuch bhi karoge toh

He threw a blank cheque to him.

FlachBack Ends.

Anurag:Aur voh Taani ke zindagi se chali gayi.

Nupur:Toh yeh police arrest sab kuch pehle hona chahiye tha na

Anurag:Jab tu ne mujhe bathaya drug dealer india pohch gaya joh teri rehabilitation center mein bhi drugs bechtha hain aur Sushanth ke milne ke baad jab mein teri mail khola tabhi uska photo dekha and I came to know It was Sushanth itself

Nupur:Then you should have done at that time itself

Anurag:Tab Taani bhi us mein involve hothi.I don't want her to suffer any more

Nupur:Aur mera kya.In sab keliye mujhe hi kyun chuna tu ne.Taani ke liye meri taraf teri narazgi yuhi mit gayi.

Anurag holding her elbow.

Anurag:Mein tumse naraz ho hi nahi sakthi kyun ki tu ne mujhse pyaar kiya hain

Nupur:Lekin tera pyar dosthi kea age jukh gaya hain na.Haan tum mujhse naraz nahi the tum naraz the mere pyaar se kyun ki apni poori zindagi apni dosti ke naam kiya.Each and every time tum usko safe aur secured karna chahtha tha

Anurag:Because usne mujhe yeh layak banaya hain . Pyaar toh

Nupur:Tum iss pyaar kehthe ho..? Toh mere tere dil mein kya tha voh toh dosthi nahi the.Tu ne toh sirf mera isthmaal kiya

Anurag was shocked.

Nupur:Pyaar ka dikhava kiya. Tumhare ander dil hi nahi hain

Anurag:Bas!!!Agar dil nahi hotha dosthi ke liye pyaar ko kurban kartha mein.Lekin tum nahi samajoge ki pyaar zindagi sirf nahi hotha

They heard someone sobbing behind the door

Anurag:Taani?

She ran from there.

Anurag:Arre yeh mein kya kiya.

Precap:

Taani:You've cheated me mein tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karoongi

Anurag:Taani..

Edited by DIYA- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Diya , just good , excellent , fabulous , awesome , brilliant , perfect ! 👏
thx yaar ,🤗 u have done a nice job ! 👍🏼
Proud to be a TaAnu fan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv u a lottt !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh diya...
Fantastic update yaar...
Luved it...excited for next part...
Plz update asap...
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Originally posted by: taanuMohurPRIYA

Diya , just good , excellent , fabulous , awesome , brilliant , perfect ! 👏

thx yaar ,🤗 u have done a nice job ! 👍🏼
Proud to be a TaAnu fan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv u a lottt !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗


thnx fr ur valuable comnts...😊

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