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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: megha01

awesome nivi.................👏

my god...........shreya is in pathetic condition

she is feeling completely cheated at d moment

n our ryan.......he didnt get any chance to explain his point..........feeling bad fr him😭

n those lines u hav used.........amazing............luv u fr dat😊

so our shreya will b gone now.......

n dat truth abt his parents' indifference.........hw lonely he was dat nite wen he lied to her n now no chance to explain further.

ab to curse bhi mil gaya bechare ko😭

i think now shreya will b out of sight fr soe tym......m i rite??????

do continue dear........m waiting

achha haan divya ke exams hain to may b she will read dat later😉



hmm u are right dear...

or phir i hav told u a bit too..

but don't worry...there is still a lot to see..

its our ryan..n he can create magic..in his own way..

😉..may b some1 else come in his life😉

or may b not..may b shreya can get better to him...after all love can bind off anything..

i m xcited to post soon...jst thoda sa wait karo.😊

😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rajatrangini



kya baat hai dear...
aj kal kahan ho tum really..
such a beautiful songs u r posting...lovely..
thanks alottt....u make this ff even more beautiful..
pics ke baare mai to kya kehne...rajat is superb..hatts off to u

ohooo itni taareef meri jaan

arey feb hai na to aaj kal romantic mood me hun main😆😆

thnx a lott fr liking it dear

ya i'll give my best further

its my pleasure to do sumthng fr dis ff😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rajatrangini



hmm u are right dear...

or phir i hav told u a bit too..

but don't worry...there is still a lot to see..

its our ryan..n he can create magic..in his own way..

😉..may b some1 else come in his life😉

or may b not..may b shreya can get better to him...after all love can bind off anything..

i m xcited to post soon...jst thoda sa wait karo.😊

😉

hmmmmm rite our ryan is a natural charmer .......

n haan derz very little hope to c dem together again....:(

ahaan ...some other girl😲..........na re nivi tu confuse kar rahi hai😆......iski possibility kam hai😉

but wanna experience ur imagination........u r much better at it. tune socha hai to mast socha hoga.

na ..........take ur time fr d ud

1st concentrate on ur GD/PI.............den come back peacefully phir karna......we can w8 but dat work is more imp.

chal tk cr

all d very best............give ur best sweetheart

luv uuuuuu

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Posted: 14 years ago

hi nive........

sry yaar...im late...

couldnt read coz of exams...

n finally read all the last 3 parts.......

simply awsum.............

beautifully written......

loved ryan n shreya alot......

thnx for the pm...........

@ megha..............superb job jana................

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nivi how r u..m very very sorry 4 commenting so late.but what to do i was to tied up with my exams & all.u know i had read the last 2 chapters but just couldnt take out time 2 come & comment..i wll tell about both the last chapters..

chapter 18-gosh finally the night ended & they both back to mumbai..i was so happy seeing ryan planning to surprise shreya. but as i was reading somethng was just saying in the back of my mind k hey bhagwan is bechare ka ab sapna toot jayega.he will now face loads of sadness.jitna usse khush dekh rahi thi mann utna hi sochta k why is his happiness gonna be short lived.. gosh i was really wondering what would happen.

chapter 19 toh really gave me a shock of my life. all this while i was thinking abt ryan & his happiness.4 a second i didnt thnk tht how devastated tht shreya might also be feeling.i swear when i saw her trauma & also the pain of ryan i was really choked..why is destiny playing these games with them.. & at the end when you used the lines
is dil pe lagte hain jo woh zakhm dikhte nahi, apne se milte hain jo woh dard mit te nahi.. main paas apne nahi, bas door jab se hai tu

you know something this song is anyways my all time fav song. & u used it.gosh i was totally out of words at tht moment..i myself didnt realise when tears came pouring frm my eyes.i was totally out of words...

main aur qa kahu nivi..this ff is really amazing... even though i have said i love tragic love stories.i really dont know main inhe aur kab tak takleef main dekh paungi..but you keep up your good work.its really going amazing..bye take care

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