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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
hey my dear kjo,
another awesome chapter!!!!! u know i kinda like taposh😉 he's too cute to hate 😆😆 i luv ur descriptions yar.... ur a rock star when it comes to writing... update soooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
Oh, oh...
Taposh...
Ok, no probs, however Anu is with her... 😃

Well, seriously a very nice and warm FF that I felt like someone slapped when it ended. Honestly, I was flowing along with it... Hope you continue soon.
And yes, I was not online last 2 days so, I was unable to catch the previous chapters. Sorry, but it was good. 😊

I wanted to tell you something. Please don't get disheartened when you find lack of comments for your job. I wrote a FF in the other forum few months back where I got very less comments and felt bad. With that frustration I stopped writing and I almost lost the touch. 😭 Now I'm again into writing and I feel very great once I post it. 😊 I don't even care if people comment or not. Frankly, what we write is for our satisfaction. Not for comments. So, let your story flow and who knows, there might many silent members longing for your FF! 😃

But I'm telling you, it is really good that you've to continue... I'll be waiting...

Love,
Nafee.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: angelina_angel

arre yaar this taaposh na😡
he'll remain as a kabab mein haddi only
n taani will never stop talking to anu
loved the way u presented it
n not bad u did pm m this time huh😆😉



I am glad you liked it 😃 And yeah, Taposh will be "kebab mein haddi" till the end 🤢 Taani will never stop talking to Anu 😳 I will PM you next time too.. 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24


Thanks a lot 😆 Will want to see more comments from you.. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl

hey my dear kjo,
another awesome chapter!!!!! u know i kinda like taposh😉 he's too cute to hate 😆😆 i luv ur descriptions yar.... ur a rock star when it comes to writing... update soooooooon



Awwww! 😆 Thank you so much. You like Taposh?? 😳 Thank god, he was being very distressed by being hated for being "kebab mein haddi" but yeah he still won't back off.. You like my descriptions? Wow I like you for saying that 😳 Thank you, you are a superstar! ⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: NIMMY

loved it..........

plzzz add me to ur pm list



Sure thing, 😉 And thanks 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: azfee

<div align="center"><font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Oh, oh...</font></font>
<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Taposh...</font></font>
<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Ok, no probs, however Anu is with her... 😃</font></font>

<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Well, seriously a very nice and warm FF that I felt like someone slapped when it ended. Honestly, I was flowing along with it... Hope you continue soon.</font></font>
<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">And yes, I was not online last 2 days so, I was unable to catch the previous chapters. Sorry, but it was good. 😊</font></font>

<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I wanted to tell you something. Please don't get disheartened when you find lack of comments for your job. I wrote a FF in the other forum few months back where I got very less comments and felt bad. With that frustration I stopped writing and I almost lost the touch.😭 Now I'm again into writing and I feel very great once I post it. 😊 I don't even care if people comment or not. Frankly, what we write is for our satisfaction. Not for comments. So, let your story flow and who knows, there might many silent members longing for your FF! 😃</font></font>

<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">But I'm telling you, it is really good that you've to continue... I'll be waiting...</font></font>

<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Love,</font></font>
<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nafee.</font></font>
</div>



Hey!! 😊 I am glad to get a comment from you.. And yes I would so love to read one of your fanfiction! 😃 If you do start, you MUST let me know on it.. and as for comments now it really doesn't matter, at least I have someone reading it 😆 Thank you so much for your comment and I will PM you on the next chapter.. 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: GoldenRose



Hey!! 😊 I am glad to get a comment from you.. And yes I would so love to read one of your fanfiction! 😃 If you do start, you MUST let me know on it.. and as for comments now it really doesn't matter, at least I have someone reading it 😆 Thank you so much for your comment and I will PM you on the next chapter.. 😉



It's my pleasure to comment on your FF... 😊
Yes, I'll be always there to read ur's...
Sure, I hope you do PM me. 😊 Thanks in advance.... 😳

P.S: This is my thread of fan fiction in TL forum. Take a look if you have time. 😊
Nafee's Notes

Edited by azfee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Part 4 - The distressing dream..


The roundabout point of Mirik, West Bengal (2:30pm)

"Taani!" he cried making her drop everything as she swung round to find him there with the shining dagger in his hands.

He approached them slowly as she hung on to him, her eyelids trembling and barely strong enough to be left opened. The white gleaming teeth were gritted as if she was trying to hold them in place but they kept on chattering. The petite soft hands held onto his arm, the nails digging into his coat to prevent her from falling or getting taken away.

But his approach didn't stop and every second her heartbeats increased. She apprehensively raised her eyes when he stood in front of her. He raised the dagger a little, her eyes widening in shock, her body shaking very frequent and noticeably and her mouth open half wide as if she was dying for some air. As the dagger came down, she squeezed her eyes shut feeling the pain as it tore across her soft flesh.

He couldn't do anything! He was helpless and he just stared at the murderer, who had murdered his very own sister. As she fell to the ground, he crouched beside her while two lone tears escaping his eyes while he turned on his heel not giving one regretful look to as what he had done. But Anurag didn't know how he would intake this shock, how he would tolerate this molten lava which felt like piercing a thousand daggers in his skin.

Holding on her pulse, he felt her heartbeat and the rate of pulse stop as her eyes which were trembling came to stop not blinking any more while tears escaped the sides of her eyes. Her body which was trembling uncontrollably was now stationary. He let out a roar and watched his retreating figure while picking up the dagger which was in her skin and throwing it in his direction, hitting exactly in his back...


Her harmonious voice shook him as she laughed at his dripping Kulfi which had turned the rocks on the ground to a white colour. As he held onto the empty stick, he chucked it away in full force startling her.

"Taani..go home..I don't feel well.." he suggested giving her a little push and then turning on his heel and walking away briskly with his shoulders slumped. All this while she wondered what was wrong and then simply walked away to Naina and Jugnu's home.

A hotel of Mirik, West Bengal (10pm)

Laying on the hard bed of the hotel, Anurag stared up at the ceiling, rewinding his mind back to the dream he had saw while he stood with Taani. Could this really happen? Could Taposh really kill his very own sister to get his own way or was he just too stressed out?

Picking up the phone, he dialled the number the number to his home. Waiting impatiently, someone picked after a few rings and immediately he recognized the voice. Sounding very impatient and hard, he mumbled "Hi Nupur. Can you give the phone to Ma please?"

He heard a little sigh as she began to call her but then the hardness in her voice made him recognize that she was very angry with him. But he didn't care, he knew he had done the biggest mistake of his life and now he was paying for it...

Suddenly from the other end of the phone, the voice he wanted to hear spoke "Anu! How are you, Anu? Your Papa's very angry and he is simply against the idea of Taani coming back -"

"Ma. I think I need a break, I am unable to convince Taposh Da. There is a lot of work to be finished and then I will certainly take Taani away. Do you think that is okay?" he asked running his hand through his black silky hair.

"As you wish, Anu. But make sure you let her know about this or she might get wrong ideas.." suggested Neelu as he accepted this and hung up.

Forget talking to Taani, he couldn't put her in any more trouble and he had nothing in store to convince Taposh to let him take Taani. The business meetings which he had cancelled were waiting for him and he had to leave immediately as for Taani, he knew she would understand..

1 month later. In Anurag's cabin, Kolkata, West Bengal (10pm)

He ran his fingers on the glass frame which showed the picture of the one he immensely loved. It had been a month since he had arrived back from Mirik unsuccessful of convincing Taposh to let Taani back home and the distances were killing him.

Rising from his chair, he walked towards the window, wondering what she might be thinking about him. She must be thinking that he left her deserted, he left her company again and separated himself again but he had no option.

Staring at the twilight outside his window, he couldn't see a single star in the sky, the gloominess taking over him as he tried looking for the moon. Everyone had left for home, only the security guards and a few employees who usually stayed until midnight were downstairs on the ground floor while he was all alone on the 10th floor.

The sudden ringing of the phone startled him as he sighed and lifted the receiver. It was the secretary who was just checking on him. He refused any kind of beverage or disturbance and the dismayed secretary kindly hung up.

Exhaling deeply, he felt the urge to call her and ask her how she was. That was exactly what he was going to do, ask her how she was and then assure her, he will be there very soon. Taking the receiver to his ear, he began dialling the number and waited patiently.

"Hello?" came the breaking voice and a lot of noises were heard in the background, more like music and drums.

"Hello! Is Taani there?" he asked uncertainly, unsure if it was the right place he had called while gritting his teeth at the harsh voices.

"Taani? She's not available, it's her wedding in two days!" cried the woman trying to make herself being heard over the singing of the women and the drums. At that time the phone went dead and he let the words sink in himself.

She was getting married in two days. Had she forgotten what she had wanted or was she being forced over it for the advantage of him not being there by TAPOSH!

Edited by GoldenRose - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
hey i didnt expect this from anu😡
😡he did say that hios determination is not so weak n he's not gonna go any where without taani n now he left??😲
wat did he expect that he would suddenly turn up after two years n taani would come running to his arms?? or afterwards he'll just go back on the pretex of a needed break n taani will again wait
no way
way to go taani go ahead with the marriage deal
but i still want taanu only😳😃😆
n yaar such a short update😡

oh by the way um 1st😃

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