||Nafee's Notes|| No one to Someone Pg 16 29/11 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you so much, Amira.
Need your support all the time.
Edited by azfee - 15 years ago
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nice one nafee...very nicely written!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome...😛
Loved the way u explained anurags feelings...
Do write more...
Edited by nspn.92 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely sequel!
very well written......
keep writing!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow! Nafee..I'm speechless 😲...
No need to be nervous
You've put soo much emotion and the way you expressed Anurag's feelings for Taani, the way you explained his realization was terrific.
Hats off to you 👏 Am in love with this! It feels as if this is actually happening! I can feel every feeling the characters feel. I can get an image on every piece of this.
Edited by KaShBaarish..xx - 15 years ago
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@ Kashbaarish: Thank you soo much...😊 I'm glad you liked it. 😊 Your making me speechless now.. 😳

Thanks a lot guys... 😊 I never knew I get these much support from you... 😳
I'll surely come up with many more like this... 😳
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Hi friends, you guys can never imagine how elated I'm to see your comments. 😳 Thanks to all of you who commented on it. 😊 Well, I'm now posting a song fiction again. Regarding this song, I was hearing it just an hour ago and thought why not make a shot on it. 😊 So, here you go. 😳

||True form of God||

Taani's POV:

I lighted the lamp which was blown away by the wind.

My small cozy house shone with love and lights of my happiness. The scene before my eyes brought shy smile to my face. With my cheeks turning red I looked away through the window, waiting for my husband, Anuarag, to come from his office.

I, Taani, who was born in a middle class family and was brought up so much love, fell in love with Anurag, who is my best friend's brother and a rich businessman. After all the opposition from both of our parents, we some how managed to marry each other.

It's been two days since we got married, and today is our first Diwali post marriage.

These two days went like a dream with Anurag and my every moment is being spent with the thoughts of him.

Sajan ghar aana tha

Sajan ghar aaye hai

Now I'm at his house. In his own place. In his protection. The feeling of me being his' made me blush all the time. People say love vanishes after wedding. But my love for him seems to be increasing in a fast pace.

I imagined how it would be if he was at home. He would stare at me all the time. Be it when he is reading a newspaper or watching TV, his eyes gaze my eyes as if he is going to melt me.

Sajan ghar aana tha
Sajan ghar aaye hai
Piya mann bhana tha

Piya mann bhaaye hai

I've seen how much he worked hard to take my hands. I know how much he suffered when my father said 'no' to him and I know how much pain he went through when I cried to him that I don't want to leave him at any cost.

He assured me all the time that he won't lose me whatever happens. He kept his promise. Now all that left to me was, I have to keep him happy. All the time. Even at my death bed.

Har khushi hai ab tumhari

Mujhe de do gam

Jaaneman jaaneman

He had given me all that I needed from him. The love, the affection, the care, the honor, the respect, everything. He never gave me an angry look or he was never rude to me. Though I haven't showed any gratitude for that, later when my friends told me how they are being treated by their rich boy friends, I felt lucky.

I'd also hate to see him sad. When he is sad, the twinkles in his eyes will be gone and the jump in his feet and the whistle in his lips would vanish. I hated that.

I sent out a small prayer to God. 'God, give all my happiness to Anurag. And if he is destined to suffer, please give those sorrows to me. He doesn't deserve to suffer any of that.'

I closed my eyes and rested my head on the window sill, thanking God for the life, he had gifted to me.

Zindagi mein aaye tum chaahaton ke raste

Kaash yeh raste sanam kat jaaye haste haste

The screeching of Anurag's car reached my ears. He'd be at the car park now.

I rushed to our room and checked myself in the mirror carefully to look pretty to his eyes. The copper and black color combination in my salwar assured me that I'll look beautiful to his eyes. After all, it was selected by Anurag himself.

I remembered how I used to wait outside my school campus for him to come from his office. I smiled to myself when the door bell rang. I rushed to get the door.

Sone dildara tere pyar to main vaariyaan

Meri ya duvaawa tainu lag jaave saariyaan

I opened the door to be stared by him and to be engulfed by his tight hug. I blushed furiously and set myself free from his arrest.

When I was about to turn, he pulled me again in his hands and whispered in my ear, "You look gorgeous".

I smiled in response and tried to walk away again. God, why he's starring at me like this and why I'm blushing so much?

He caught me again and asked, "Why are you running away?"

"First, freshen up yourself", I got out of his hand, walked to his back and pushed him to the washroom.

Chaand ho tum chaandani se bheega jaaye mann

Jaaneman jaaneman

The moon light fell on us, when we were at half the way to our room. He strongly twirled me to his front, which resulted in me crashing his chest.

I looked up at him to be totally mesmerized by his eyes that looked dreamy in the moon light.

I remembered how we used to walk alone in the wet streets of December hand in hand. The same moon light filled dreamy eyes topped up my mind.

Khwaabon ke iss ghar ki khair kare o rabba

Duur talai kalash aur bair kare o rabba

I snapped out both of us from being still.

"Go, get ready, Anurag. We need to do the prayers", I ordered him with a shy smile which made him go into the washroom without diverting his eyes from me.

After he went inside, I took in the scent of our bedroom. This room's fragrance created by Anurag's perfume would stay with me giving a feel that Anurag is at home whenever he goes to his office.

I sat on or bed, caressed the mattress and felt how happy we were these two days with so much teasing, smiling, hugging, etc. A small smile crept up to my face.

Naaz se bade maine kari hai tayyariya

Din raat pyar diya nazara utaariya

I rushed to the place where all the prayer stuffs are kept ready. I proudly ignited the incense sticks and inserted it to the sticks holder. When my mother does these prayers in our house, we would be busy dressing and cracking fireworks. But our mother will insist us to do the prayers to make the happiness permanent.

That time, we never understood its importance. But when we want someone to be happy all the time, we automatically do all these stuffs with a fear in the heart. The fear of uncertainty in what God will do to us.

Yeh mohabbat hai ibaadat kabhi ho na kam

Jaaneman jaaneman

I know this love would never lessen in any course of time.

The way he stood by my side, when he showed up during my engagement with Subodh, still lingered before my eyes.

How he held my hands to take me away from that place to his house is still green in my mind. A lump was felt in my throat.

Aaghosh mein meri zulf sanwari teri

Chahat ke rangon se main maang saja du teri

He came from the room wearing a crisp cotton white kurta. He came close to me and stood by my side.

I gestured him to do join his hands and pray. He shook his head like a kid and obeyed my words. He turned to the image of God and sincerely prayed with his eyes closed.

I joined my hands, forgot to look at the God and stared at him.

My lips trembled with some kind of pleasure and my vision slowly blurred due to the tears that was formed in my eyes.

He opened his eyes, when I quickly turned my look away from him. I pretended as if I'm praying without looking at him. I know he'd be watching me now. I don't want him to see me crying. I don't want to be cheeky like a boring girl. But I failed all the time.

We've been in love since 6 months time but I'd never felt this way but why now? I don't want him to witness my tears though it is out because of my happiness.

He turned me to his side holding my shoulder and filled my forehead with the color of his love. That is when a drop fell out.

Maahiya ve aaj mainu aaive kyon ve lagda

Aashiq je sachha hove roop honda rab ka

I lost in trying to hold my tears. He had witnessed it and that made me cry more. My body slowly racked with sobs when he engulfed me completely with his love and pampered me with care.

His maturity in taking care of me declared that our lover is the true form of God. He stood before me like a love god which is with a glow in his face. I starred him like I'm seeing him for the first time. He held my cheeks brought me forward and pressed his lips on my forehead.

Ham yahaan hai tum yahaan ho hone do milan

Jaaneman jaaneman

We slowly moved to the window and were showered by the full moon light. We both glowed like we are blessed with life long happiness. I looked up at his face from his chest and he again looked like a God of love in the magical light.


Yes, as you can guess, the song is from Aryan. Please do let me know how was it and thanks to Google for the English translation again. 😆


Cheers,

Nafee.

Edited by azfee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ohh girll u know what i read laboratory and valentines day i mean like many atimess i didnt knoww i mean didnt concentrated tht u were the writer because as soon as i visited the archieve forum it was ur writings and first thing which i read oover here my goodness hahaha
okk okkk i know i got excited loll now i l surely give a good focus on writers name

okk i l read ur next shot and comment till then see a
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

ohh girll u know what i read laboratory and valentines day i mean like many atimess i didnt knoww i mean didnt concentrated tht u were the writer because as soon as i visited the archieve forum it was ur writings and first thing which i read oover here my goodness hahaha
okk okkk i know i got excited loll now i l surely give a good focus on writers name

okk i l read ur next shot and comment till then see a



Wow, you are too fast. Just now I posted and you read it?
Ha yes, you have to at least see the writer's name. 😆 That sounds really funny.
And sweetheart, you are sometimes too hilarious... 😃
Thank you sooo much for commenting.
😊
Love ya...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome oneshot!
i loved the way you described everything....taani's pov was superb!
really beautiful and innocent.....
keep writing!

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