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Aishu before I say anything regarding this OS I must admit you have a fantastic capability of creating the scenes in the reader's mind,especially the climate,the weather,the description of characters,the environment.👏
The following lines.....
It was October 4, 2008, and anuraag and Taani were taking a walk in the local park, gazing at the sunburnt leaves that were gently floating down to the cool ground.
I could literally fel that weather sitting here...Awsome allegory and choice of words.
The second best thing is your positive approach.I am so glad you chose to potray Subodh as Anurag's best friend.I can relate to it better as compared to the serial.
As I have told you earlier I love tragedy,this one was another icing in the cake.These were some bits that were really breath-taking......Wonder how you manage to pour in so much of tragedy.....and still make it seem lovable...👏.

Once anuraag heard tha car's engine turn over and heard it drive away, anuraag looked the the thing that was holding his attention: The headstone with the words:
taani
June 22, 1989-December 24, 2010
A loving daughter, sister, friend, and fiancee.
anuraag could feel the hot tears beginning to form behind he aquamarine eyes as he focused on one word. Fiancee.

"So, go ahead, tell me. But I bet that it won't be as good as mine." Daniel smiled, a twinkle in his aquamarine eyes.

And yeah who is Daniel....you have mentioned it twice and I am sure it was accidental....Is it??😊

anuraag was still staring at Taani's headstone and was thinking about the ending of Romeo and Juliet. When he was reading the play in high school, the ending had always fascinated him. He thought that it was romantic and sweet that Juliet had killed herself because her on true love, Romeo, had died. Tragic, yes, but still sweet and romantic. But anuraag had never told anyone that. Except for Taani.

And now, he was considering what Juliet had done. Killing himself so that he could be with his own one true love. But, how would he do it? Hang himself? Shoot himself in the head? OD?

So beautifully explained the meaning of true love.....I think you present tragedy in a way that makes the reader crave for more.....its a rare trait you have.Keep up the excellent work 👏and never quit writing....😉

Originally posted by: Keanufan

Aishu before I say anything regarding this OS I must admit you have a fantastic capability of creating the scenes in the reader's mind,especially the climate,the weather,the description of characters,the environment.👏hey thanks u know u should read some mills and boons u know tht books help a lot in creating this kind of things u get to know so much from them
The following lines.....
It was October 4, 2008, and anuraag and Taani were taking a walk in the local park, gazing at the sunburnt leaves that were gently floating down to the cool ground.
I could literally fel that weather sitting here...Awsome allegory and choice of words.
The second best thing is your positive approach.I am so glad you chose to potray Subodh as Anurag's best friend.I can relate to it better as compared to the serial.
As I have told you earlier I love tragedy,this one was another icing in the cake.These were some bits that were really breath-taking......Wonder how you manage to pour in so much of tragedy.....and still make it seem lovable...👏.dont feel the weather so much u l catch cold aachiii
yup i hthought who should i appoint his friends and it clicked as subodh ahahah actually i like tht kid thats whyy i too love tragdies like u and the words and scene and framing of the story mostlyy from few bits and piecess so it all merges upp we have a good taste of tragedy ahahh

Once anuraag heard tha car's engine turn over and heard it drive away, anuraag looked the the thing that was holding his attention: The headstone with the words:
taani
June 22, 1989-December 24, 2010
A loving daughter, sister, friend, and fiancee.
anuraag could feel the hot tears beginning to form behind he aquamarine eyes as he focused on one word. Fiancee.

"So, go ahead, tell me. But I bet that it won't be as good as mine." Daniel smiled, a twinkle in his aquamarine eyes.

And yeah who is Daniel....you have mentioned it twice and I am sure it was accidental....Is it??😊ohh man i proof checked then also actually m a writer on booksie so they dont understand this hindi names and all so i have written this os for there and i postd it here also as anuraag so i thnk daniel came up as m a hard core fan of dniel redcliff hahaha

anuraag was still staring at Taani's headstone and was thinking about the ending of Romeo and Juliet. When he was reading the play in high school, the ending had always fascinated him. He thought that it was romantic and sweet that Juliet had killed herself because her on true love, Romeo, had died. Tragic, yes, but still sweet and romantic. But anuraag had never told anyone that. Except for Taani.

And now, he was considering what Juliet had done. Killing himself so that he could be with his own one true love. But, how would he do it? Hang himself? Shoot himself in the head? OD?

So beautifully explained the meaning of true love.....I think you present tragedy in a way that makes the reader crave for more.....its a rare trait you have.Keep up the excellent work 👏and never quit writing....😉

m glad u like dearr thankss huh it seems like i am up with only two reader baaki of my frnds r sleeping somewhere they r gonna get killed by me?//

Originally posted by: azfee

Wow, I just saw the confusion happened in here... And Simi (keanufan), you thought Aishwarya is me? Well, that happens when ppl have different IDs... 😆
So, we are all here like a friendship triangle? that was so sweet sounding...
Love you guys... Muah! (To both Simi and Aishu 😳)

Originally posted by: azfee

That was tragic, Aishu. 😭oh nafee darling dont cryy next time promise mme nd simi will get side lined and write a roantic not tragedy for u 😛
I was always scared to watch tragic movies just because I'd cry at the end!
Like I did now... *weeps*ohh u need a tissuee 😆
The sentences of the headstone just made my heart slam the rib. 😲now i thnk u need a doctor😳
The climate description was wonderful as if we are living in that.huh m coldd nowww
She died on my b'day's eve?really u were born on christmas eve hihi u know m born just a month bf4 christmas 25 nov
That was tragic enough...😭
To the whole, wonderful idea... 👏thnkuu poocchhii pooo
Love,
Nafee.

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

hih nafee u too saw thtt lolll simii is so confused with both the devils like uss
hihi tht happens when ppl hv same idss ndd here be charii has gone .... ith twi diff idss dosti ki shuruwaat hi aisi hii aage aage dekh hota hi kyaa
luvv yaa to u nd simii we guyss rockk

Originally posted by: Keanufan

U know what Aishu i was going to type Aishu but before that I had read a PM from Nafee...and the same thing was on my mind...so I accidentally typed her name...😛😛😛 So sorry to both of you....my little Diamonds Nafee n Aishu....

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

ahha u dont need to explain me this because4 i have also done the same thing
i was chatting with a firend calle dmeeshti and i was quoting something of saba and i mentioned saba as meeshti and she wa slike m saba u stop doing meshti meeshti hahahaha
u dont need to be sorry hahaha plzzz
and diamonds god m flattered ahaha okk u saying diamonds parr mann mein to devils keh rhai hogi i know tht 😉