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Posted: 8 years ago
Heys guys gone a write my 50 th episode. Those who felt that my ff was good and nice. Do drop down your comments and share your views. Plz its my request. Usually i never forced anyone to drop comments, but this is my golden jubilee episode so I just want all my readers to write your comments. Even if it is boring give me your adivices, I will take it as suggestions and try not to do in my upcoming episodes. As this story line was going to finish , Iam planning to end within 4 or 5 episodes. If you all want me to write more, I will surely give you all a new track by continuing the story.
By sosan.
And thank u all for liking my ff everytime I post.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Your writings are amazing. Please do continue with new ideas. Eagerly waiting for the 50th part. Hope it will be long and interesting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 50A revelation .
Guys this is gonna a be a long update so I divided into two sections
Kunj and twinkle were enjoying with each other.
They both were so close to each other wanted each other more and more.
Ku.. Twinkle Mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.
Tw... Sh... Kunj bohth bolrehe ho tum. Mujhe kuch nehi sunna.
Mujhe bus tume kona hai.
Before he could talk she locked her lips with his. The kiss was more passionate with love and care. Kunj too reciprocated. He sucked her lips and bit her more. , both wanted to enjoy this moment. After a few minutes they unlocked
Ku.. Twinkle aab toh sunlo.
Twinkle was not listening she keep on kissing his face and shutting his mouth by giving him pecks.
Kunj had enough tortures, he held her hand, pinned her to the nearby pillar
Ku.. Twinkle agar tum ek bar bhi agai bhadaiy na toh mein control nehi kar paonga. Plz mujhe bolne de..
Tw.. Kon bolrahai tujhe control karnekeliye.
Ku.. Lekin mein tujhe ek sach batana chata hoon. Tum iss sach sunneke bath joh Karna hai teri marzi.
Tw.. Tk baba bolo(guys water showers turned off so that there romantic moment came to an end)
Ku.. Tu jaana chati haina, mein kya hoon, kesa kaam karahoon.
Twinkle smiled and said... Nehi toh, mujhe na teri harkat se problem hai, tere kam se nehi, tum jiss tara mujhe kabhi bhi kahi bhi akele chodke chale jate hoo usse problem hai, mujhe tumpar vishwas hai, lekin teri harkat se nehi. Abhi joh tum harkete karaha haina, jiss tara iss pal ko karabh karahi ho na usse problem hai. Mujhe pal pal tum tadapa rahe ho na usse problem hai.
Ku.. Kyu tum mujhse itna pyar karti ho. Kyu. Mein teri pyar ki kabil nehi hoon.
Tw.. Meri pyar ki kabilse zyada kahi zyada ache ho tum issiliye mein tumse itna pyar karti hoon, varna twinkle taneja... (Kunj looked) .. Mera matlab hai ki twinkle taneja sarna ko patana itna aasan nehi hai samje. (Her eyes twinkled)
Kunj smiled.
Tw.. Lekin na mujhe ek shikayat hai tune abhi tab mujhe I LU...
BEEFORE she could say Kunj phone ringed.
Tw.. Iss phone ko na mein abhi tikaana lagati hoon, humesha humari romantic mode ko karabh kardeta hai.
Ku.. Hello.
Person... Sir sab tyar hai. Aap ko yahan ane hai bus.
Kunj looked towards twinkle.
Ku.. Tk mein aata hoon.
Ku pov.
Sorry twinkle mujhe toh bus teri bday ko spl banana hai. Per iss bday mein... Mein tujhe voh batane jaraho joh meri zindagi ki sabsi badi sach hai. Mere sachai sunneke bath, mere baremein mein jaaneke bathi hum iss relationship ko aage lejane ke baremein sochege. Mein tujhse aur jooth nehi bol sakta.
Kunj kept the phone and turned.
Kunj held her hand.
Tw.. Kahan lejari ho mujhe.
He gave her a dress and asked her wear it and come. She wore it and came ,Kunj too changed his dress and he took her hands.and came out
Tw.. Kunj hum kahaan jare hain.
Ku.. Batahoon.
Tw... There was a helicopter waiting for them.
A Person saluted him and said.. Take ur seat sir. Kunj nodded and sat with twinkle.
Tw.. Wow ...hum hawah mein ghumege. Vah Kunj sarna mujhe toh pat nehi ta ki tum itne romantic ho.
Kunj didn't speak anything. Kunj looking towards the person.
Ku.. James where is my dress.
Jam.. Sir it is under ur seat sir.
Kunj took his dress and wore it.
Ku.. Twinkle tu isse pehnegi.
Tw.. Mein abhi kese pehen sakti hoon.
Ku.. Tu isse apni dress ke upar pehna. Iss dress ko hum bullet prrof kehte hain.
Tw.. Lekin bullet proof humereliye kyu.. Humne thodi kisike jaan li... She looked boggled
Ku.. Mera place aagayi Helicopter landed in a roof top of building. They both came out.
Kunj entwined his hands in her and took her down.
There was a pitch dark inside.
Tw.. Kunj mujhe bohth darr lagra hai.
Ku.. Main hoon na twinkle tujhe kuch nehi hone donga. Tu bus mere hath pakad le. Twinkle gripped his hands tightly.
He made his way through a door. And again climbed down. He made his way to a room there there was light when they entered it looked like a conference hall. There was a group of people standing there and saluted kunj.
Kunj introduced them to twinkle.
Ku.. Twinkle yeh officer ashna, lara rhagav, dev, arnav, virat and jaanvi. Yeh log meri team mates hai.
Twinkle was confused and gently nodded her head.
Ku.. Guys tq for all being here. Humere task ko shuru karne ka samey aagaya hai.
Everyone.. S sir.
As... Twinkle mam aap plz bet jaye.
Twinkle seated.
Kunj took a deep breath and started. Everyone seated around twinkle.
Ku.. Twinkle I know tumari undar bohth sawl uttre honge. Mein uss sab ka jawab deta hoon.
Virat gave a pen and Kunj showed it to her.
Ku.. Tujhe pata hai twinkle iss pen se tumari koi rishta judi hui hai.
Tw.. Konsi rishta hai.
Ku.. Iss pen se hum iss puri duniya ko idharki udhar karsakte hain.
Twinkle looked puzzled.
Ku.. Mein achse samjata hoon. Iss pen joh voh cheese jisse dekhar tu itna haran hojaigi.
He opened the pen and showed. Iss pen hume bataskti hain ki puri duniya mein kahan kahan katra hain, hum isse pata chal jata hai ki kab humme bachna hai aur kab sab ko control mein rakna hai.
Tw.. Agar yeh milgayi toh life itna aasan hojay ga.
Ku.. Abb iss pen kham nehi karahihai.
Tw.. Kyu.
Ku.. Kyunki iss pen mein paasword hai.joh sirf do log ki paas hai
Tw.. yeh sab tu mujhse kyu batarahe ho.aur voh log kon hai.
Ku.. Uss do log mein ek tum ho.
Tw.. What.
Ash.. Haan Mam iss pen se aapki unknown connnection hai.
Virat.. Aur aapki vajese hi yeh pen phir kam karega.
Tw.. Na mein iss pen ko janti hoon, na mein iss pen ko create ki. Toh aap sablog kyu aese bath kareho. Iss pen ko kisne banayata... Tk manliti hoon iska ek paasword mere pass hai dusra kiske pass hai.
Ku... RAVINDAR TANEJA ke pass.
Twinkle was numb and shocked. .. Kya.. Kya bola
Ku.. Teri papa ki pass hai. Unone yeh pen banayta.
Twinkle was shocked. Tumari papa suicide nehi kiyete unne murder karne ka pan kiya ta.
Tw.. Matlab kya hai tumara.(in a trembling voice) kunj held her hand tightly
Ku.. Teri papne iss anmol cheese ko banyataa Twinkle . Iss pen pehle papa ki hath se phir uske bath teri hatosei kholegi.
Tw.. Agar meri papa hi nehi hai toh iss pen ko kese use karenge hum.
Kunj closed his eyes and tightened his grip on her and blurted out... TERI PAPA ZINDA HAI TWINKLE.


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Posted: 8 years ago
Yaaar suspense mem chod diya...
this is not fair
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow...what a twist. . 👏 👏
Ur story is amazing. ..I love it..
their romance in the previous part was fab...loooved it
Waiting for the revelation. ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Well...The update was great...
And I never thought the twist would be like this...

Only 4 or 5 episodes left...😭

I feel like reading 100 episodes of this😳...

And still the mystery continues...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyyy sosan...
I m a new reader nd trust me i read all d 50 parts in one go...it took me 2hrs to read it whole...nd u left me speechless...
Goshh my dear u r superb at writing...yaar u write so welll...
Plzz post soon nd yeah i loved ur each nd every episode...
Post soon nd plzz pm me if u post next part
Love uh..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Seesha

Heyyy sosan...

I m a new reader nd trust me i read all d 50 parts in one go...it took me 2hrs to read it whole...nd u left me speechless...
Goshh my dear u r superb at writing...yaar u write so welll...
Plzz post soon nd yeah i loved ur each nd every episode...
Post soon nd plzz pm me if u post next part
Love uh..

Tq for taking time in reading my ff. You r so sweet. I will post the next soon. Do comment and share your ideas. Do tell my if my twists are worth.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Promo
Hey guys I promise to update a part but I couldn't so here with a promo.
Fb
An office is shown. There was a secret passage.
Some people back were shown. Now the face of the head or the chief officer is shown.
Cheif officer ... Officer Kunj sarna.
Ku.. Yes sir. He marched and stood before co(chief officer)
Co... Gus meet our young officer Mr kunj sarna. He is the youngest and most intelligent officer hai humera. So I made him join in DIA(defence intelligence agency) one of special agents and spy. Everyone clapped.
Co... Kunj mujhe pata hai tumere umar sirf 19 hai per tune hume heran kardi. Toh isiliye mein here secret agents group mein te join kararahi hoon.
Ku.. Sir kyaein jaan sakti hoon yeh kesa kaam hai.
Co.. You will get to know your work soon officer kunj sarna. Meet my team mates. Officer arnav, officer virat and officer dev. He said hello to everyone.
Co.. Officer Arnav I have a small work you just expalin the work to kunj.
Ar.. SIR.
ar.. Kunj you are a secret agent ,so there are certain rules to be followed
Kunj nodded
Ar.. rule no 1you should not reveal your identity to anyone.
rule no 2 you should be truthful to your work
Rule no 3 you should never betray your team
Rule no 4 you should be true SOLDIER to your country and people.



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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyy sosan it was amazing..
So suspenseful..
Post soon yaar

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