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Posted: 8 years ago
Guys IAM sorry i dont know that my next post is updated. Actually when i posted there was a net connection so I thought my post is not updated. But when logged i saw my post is updated. So I AM REALLY SORRY for that. Kindly accept my apology .😔. I know people here are very lovely. But still Iam guilty for not sending you pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
45!?!?!??😲
Omg...ok.. screenshot is not possible... 😆
Sosan...I'm impressed with your patience...
I'll read it some day...hihi...
March 7 se may be... Holidays😳
But keep updating...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sosan

Guys IAM sorry i dont know that my next post is updated. Actually when i posted there was a net connection so I thought my post is not updated. But when logged i saw my post is updated. So I AM REALLY SORRY for that. Kindly accept my apology .😔. I know people here are very lovely. But still Iam guilty for not sending you pm.

Sosan it's absolutely fine..There's no need to feel sorry or guilty for not sending pm.
Chill dear...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Guys I wrote a post but somehow I messed it. I will post an another one in two or three days. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 46
All the family bid farewell to our beloved twinj
At the airport:
Tw.. Pata hai kunj mujhe na bohth acha lagra hai.
Ku. Kyu
Tw.. Kyunki hum dono ka shadi ke bath pehla tour hai.
Ku... Voh toh hai. She hugged him tight. He too hugged her back.
The announcement have been made
At plane..
Ku.. Toh MRS sarna kya plan hai apka.
Tw.. Mere toh koi bhi plan nehi hai kunj.
Kunj just smiled. After sometime twinkle shift her head rested it over kunj. They both inerlaced their fingers and
Kunj was just caressing her hair. Soon sleep took place over tem.
Next day
London.
Tw.. Kunj hum london mein hai, mujhe believe nehi hora hai.
Pata hai, mujhe bachpan se na London dekne ka na bohth mann karta ta. Aab jab ayi gayi toh mein bohth gumungi aur bohth saari masti karoongi. Aur kunj tum mujhe saari places dikaoge samje.
Ku... Twinkle mein apni kaam mein busy rehonga toh mein kese..
Tw... Opps mein toh boligyai ki humne tere koi kaam keliye aye hai. Sry kunj. Hum jab Nxt time ayenge na tab dekhlenge.
Ku.. Haan twinkle hum nxt time zaroor karege sab kuch.
Tw.. Tk.. (In sad tone)
In taxi.
Tw.. Kunj dekho na aaj London mein koi festival hai. Dekhona vahan bohth beautiful hainna decorations.
Tw.. Vahan dekho kunj unn dono lovers ko.. Aww iss that cute na.
They were watching everything while travelling towards the hotel.
Hotel.
Receptionist .. Welcome to this hotel mam
Hope you had comfortable flight.
Tw.. Yes.. Tq. But tell me one thing ,Is there any festival today in london.
Rece... Actually mam, today is vale..
Twinkle didn't payed much attention so she didn't hear what the receptionist is saying
Ku... Can we have our keys please.
Rec.. Ohh yes sir here it is. Have a comfortable room sir and mam.
Tw.. Tq.
In room.
Tw... Wow kitna pretty room haina kunj.
Ku.. Lekin mere biwiki dil se zyada iss duniya mein koi bhi jaga beautiful nehi.
Twinkle just blushed. Kunj pulled her and her hands are on his chest.
Tw.. Kunj.
Ku.. Bolo twinkle
She came towards his ears and said gharwaloko inform kardo ki hum tk se London ponch gyai. Saying this she pushed him and left to bathroom.
Kunj called bebe
Ku.. Bebe hum tk se ponch gyae
Be.. Changa hai puttr.Twinkle ko kuch pata toh nehi chali.
Ku.. Nehi bebe ab tak toh nehi.
Ku.. Tq bebe..
Be.. Hmm tu pehla tq vangu chod aur meri nu ke sath thoda vaqt bitha samje.
Ku.. Ji bebe.
Fb
Ku.. Bebe aap ko mereliye kuch k karna hai.
Be.. Batao kya karna hai mujhe
Ku.. Voh kya haina perso valentine's day hai aur uski bath uski bday. Toh mein uski b day iss baar london mein karna chati hoon... Aap ko pata hai twinkle ko london dekna uski holiday destiny hai toh kya mein usse le chalo.
Be.. Yeh bhi puchne vali bath.. Ab bata mujhe kya karna hai.
Ku.. Bebe mein uski samne yeh pretend karoongi mujhe koi kam hai london mein.. Aur aapko mere aur twinkle ka london ki flight tickets lakhe dena hai bus.. Itnahi karna hai aapko.
Be.. Vah mere sher, mere lad vah.. Aaj tune sabit kardiya hai ki tu mere beta hai. Aab sam araha hai ki tu twinkle keliye suprise plan karaha hai.
Ku.. Haan bebe. Aur ek bath ka dyan rakhiye ki yeh bath twinkle ko na pata chale.
Be.. Tu chinta chod, mein sab kuch sambaloongi.. Ab bus mere nu ki sath koob masti kar.
Guys you all remember the call which came on the night of twinj romance. (Part 44).
The caller.. Sir aap ka kam hogyai. Aap bus Madam ko leke london ajaye.
Ku.. Ji tk...(in mind) isse toh abhi call karna ta. Apni biwi ke sath romance miss hogai. Aab mujhe twinkle ko batana hai ki muje london jana hai. Aur mujhe na uski udaaz chera bilkul pasand nehi. Na chata hua bhi mujhe yeh sab karna padrahai. Lekin its worth mujhe pura yakin hai ki meri suprise twinkle ko bohth pasand ayegi and wish ki iss sal twinkle ki b'day usse yadh kar rehjai. Hey vaiguru koi gadbad mat hone dena plz. And kunj interupted before the receptionist was about to say taht today is valentine's day.
In my story😃 twinkle totlly forgot that today is valentine's day as she never celebrated valentine's day in these years. Kunj just took advantage of that. Kunj came to know from leela that twinkle not even celebrated her bday in these years so he wanted that this year should be special and memorable b'day for her.
Fb ends.
Ku.. Acha bebe mein phone rakta hoon bye..
Twinkle came out..
Tw.. Bebe se bath hogai.
Ku.. Haan..
Tw.. Toh kya kaha bebe ne.
Ku.. Yehi hum dono apna apna kyal rkhe..
Twinkle smiled.
Ku.. Toh mein kahan ta.
Tw.. Matalb.
Kun.. Mein samjata hoon.
Tw.. Kunj tum yahan kaam keliye aye ho, toh uspe focus karo.
Ku.. Ji madam. Mere ek aur kam bhi hai.
Tw.. Aur voh kya hai.
Kunj pulled her again and held her waist.
Ku. Voh yahi ki mein tume aesi gurte reh jao.
Tw.. Tu jaa aur apna kaam kar she tried to push him, but he pulled her more.
Ku.. Kyu meri mrzi, mein jab chao, jese chao tume gur sakta hoon. Kyunki you are mine..
Tw.. Haan baba, lekin tere kaam.
Ku. Pahad mein jai yeh kaam. Meri samne itni sundar biwi hai, aur mujhe aesa koi bhi kam nehi chaiye jiski vajse meri koobsurat biwi ki nazre meri aankon mein kam ho jai.
Tw.. Bus.. Bohth hogai tere makkhan lagana jao apna kaam karo.
Ku.. Nehi kunj just pouted.
Twinkle pecked him on his lips.
Ku.. Ek deep kiss hogi toh chalega. He leaned forward.
Tw.. KUNJ jao apna kaam karo..
Kunj just kissed her cheeks and left out to see for the special night for twinkle.

Hope I DIDN'T bore this part, but bear with my mistakes. 😃

Btw happy belated valentine's day guys.







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Posted: 8 years ago
The update is lovely...as always...
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Part 47
Twinkle was wandering here and there.
Tw.. Babaji kunj ko toh meine bechdiya yahan se per mujhe bohth bore horaha hai mein kya karoon.
There a phone ringed. The name itself brings her a slight smile in her face.
Tw.. Bolo kunj
Ku.. Itni jaldi phone bhi utali. Itna miss karahiti mujhe, kya mein aao.
Tw.. Nehi.. Apna kam katam karke aana.
Ku.. Mujhe na vahan tere pass ane ka man karaha hai.
Tw.. KUNJ (trying to hide her blush)
Ku.. Aww meri bacchi aab blush bhi karahi hai. Mujhe na aab control nehi hora hai.
Tw.. Kunj apna kam karke jaldi aaja na. Mujhe bhi tere bina kahi bhi mann nehi lagta.
Ku.. Hayi hayi. Fikar mat kar twinkle jaldi aajaonga. Per tujhe na mereliye ek kaam karna padega. Jab tak mein vapus na aajao tabtak tu apni room ki bahar mat jaana.
Tw.. Kyu
Ku.. Plz meri bath maan ja mein aakar samjata hoon.
Tw.. Tk, nehi jaongi, aab kush
Ku.. Bohth. Aur sunno darwaza bandh rakna koi bhi aye toh kholna mat.
Tw.. Kunj mein choti bacchi nehi hoon.
Ku. Mereliye tu humesha meri pehli bacchi hai.
Tw.. Tk baba jab tak tu nehi aajate tab tak mein Darwaza nehi kolungi.
They both kept their phones.
Kunj was seen decorating the arrangements.
Kunj pov
Finally voh vqt agay hai twinkle jahan mein tujhe bata sakhu ki kyu mein tujhe chodke chale gya. Tere bina iss 4 sal kese guzara sirf mein hi janti hoon twinkle. Mujhe pata hai ki tum mujhse naraaz hogi per mein manaloonga. Tuje london leke ane ka mujhe eki maksat hai ki mein teri saari shake dur karoon.
He ringed someone.
Person.. Haan sir sab kuc tyar hai. Aap befikar rahiye
Ku.. Suno twinkle ka bodyguard banna jabtak tabtak mein vahan nehi ponchta.
Per.. Ji sir.
He kept the phone
Ku.. (In mind) Bohth saari mushikil ke bath usse mein yahai lekar ayi hoon. Aab bus mujhe twinkle ko sach sach batana.
Mein usse uski bday ki din uski saari kushiyaan lautana chata hoon. Hey vaiguru meri madat karna.
He reached the hotel
Room.
Kunj entered the room. But couldn't locate twinkle
Ku.. Twinkle.. Yaar kahan hai tu. He went to balcony, she was not there too. He went outside the room. and searched the whole reception area.
Ku.. Excuse. Did you see my wife.
Rec.. No sir, We didn't see her.
Kunj went outside and started searching her.
Ku... Twinkle. He ringed her but her phone is not reachable.
He called the person.
Per.. Sir
Ku.. TUJHE KAHA TA TWINKLE KO DEKNE KO.
Per ...haan sir, per sir I Didnt saw her going out of the hotel sir.
Kunj cut the call before he could burst out. He came back to his room and saw her drinking her coffee. He just rushed to her and pulled her close and pinned her to the wall.
It ws not so easy for twinkle, before she could understand what is happening, she saw that kunj is angry with red eyes.
Ku.. Bataya ta tujhe ki kahi mat jana. Mein aajaonga. Per tujhe toh meri bath suni tabna.
Tw.. . Kunj voh... Voh
Ku.. Kya twinkle.. Bolo tere paas koi solid vaja hai.
Tw.. Voh kunj mein sirf terrace gayi ti. Mujhe kamre mein bohth bore horaiti
Ku.. Bore... Bore.. Sirf apni baremein soch.
Tw(with tears) IAM SORRY KUNJ.Iam really sorry. Mujhe nehi pata ta ki..
Kunj.. KYA NEHI PATA TA TWINKLE (he shouted at her loosing his tempt)
Twinkle just jerked a little and tears in the corner of her eyea were pooling.
Seeing her tears kunj came back to sense and realised wht he did.
He just hugged her tight
Ku.. Iam sorry twinkle mujhe tumse iss tara bath nehi karna chaiye ta.
Twinkle was still in tears. Kunj couldn't see her like this he slightly pecked his forehead and hugged her again.
Ku.. Pata hai twinkle mein tujhe kabhi ko nahi sakta kabhi bhi nehi. Tu meri sab kuch hai twinkle. Mujhe maaf kardo.
Tw.. I...ts o.. K kunj.
Twinkle tightened her hug on him.
Ku.. Kya hua baby.
Tw.. Mujhe na aesa laga jesa tum mujhe firse chodke chale jaoge.
Ku.. Iss baar bilkul nehi twinkle. Iss baar mein tujhe chodke kahi nehi jaonga.
After a few minutes of feeling each other essence they broke the hug.
Kunj handed her a beautiful saree and asked her to wear it tonight
Tw.. Kyu aaj koi spl din hai.
Ku.. Mereliye tere sath har ek pal spl hai twinkle bus tujhe mein kush dekhna chata hoon.
Tw.. Mein toh kush hoon ,...bohth Kush hoon.
Ku.. Aur voh kese
Tw.. Jabhi mein tumere sath hoti hoon toh mein bohth kush hoti hoon.
He again hugged her with alone tear in his eyes and they both remained in each other embrace








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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 48
ku.. Twinkle aur kitne der lagegi
Tw.. Bus kunj hogaya.
Twinkle came out in a saree gifted by kunj. Kunj was awestruck by watching her.
Ku.. Bohth koobsurat lagarhi hai yeh saree
Tw. Aww. Tum kitne gande ho. Yeh saree achi hai aur isse pehne wali achi nehi.
Ku... Areey aese nehi hai jaan. Iss saree ko tumne pehne ke bath yeh saree ki koobsurat aur badgayi.
Twinkle smiled and controlled her blush.
Ku.. Itni achi line bhi bola meine aab sharma bhi do mere jaan.
Tw.. kunj(trying to control her blush)
Ku.. Aab chale varna der hojagi.
Tw.. Ji chalo.
They both entwined their hands.
They entered a hall
Tw.. Kunj hum kahn hai.
Ku.. Ek min ruko jaan.
The light came back and there was a beautiful scenery presented in front of her.
Tw.. Kunj yeh kya hai.
Ku.. Happy valentine's day wifey
Tw.. Aaj valentine's day
Ku.. Haan.
Tw.. Mein toh booli gyai.
Ku.. Ab dekho aur bhi suprise hai. Tumne ek aur cheese boolchuki hai.
Twinkle was confused.
Ku. 10,9,8,7,6, 5,4,3,2,1
HAPPY B DAY MY DEAR WIFEY.
Tw.. Kunj aaj mera b day ,aur tujhe yaadh hai
Ku.. Haan. Sirf iss saal nehi nehi, pichle 4 sal se mein tujhe wish karte aya hoon.
Tw.. Kese
Ku.. Abhi batata hoon. He showed the moon on top.
Tujhe pata hai twinkle, sablog moon ko messager mante hai. Mein har ek sal iss moon ko dekhe wish karta hoon teri. Iss jaga london ki sabse important jaga hai. Meine tume yahan issiliye laya takhi mein har sal tujhe yahi aake b day wish karya hoon. Tujhe boht miss karta hoon.
Twinkle had tears in her eyes.
Ku.. Ajao tumariliya cake, iss cake ko khato . Leela maa ne kaha tune apna bday manana, apna hasna, muskurana, aur khaas karke siyappa karna bulchuki ho. Lekin mein iss bhar tumari saari khushiyaan vapus lana chata hoon.
Toh MRS twinkle Kunj sarna kya aap ready hai. Twinkle grinned ku.. Iss vaqt mein tumare sath jeena jaatha hoon kya tum mera sath dogi.
Twinkle smiled and nodded. They both cut the cake and fed each other.
Kunj... Chalo twinkle hum ek game khel te hain.
Tw.. Kesa game.
Ku.. Aaj khass din hai toh khass din keliye khass game khelna banta hai.
Tw.. Tk batado. Twinkle Kunj sarna naam hai mere mein kabhi nehi haarti.
Ku. Over confidence is not good Mrs sarna.
Tw.. Over confidence nehi Mr sarna, mujhe pata hai ki mein hi jeetongi.
Ku.. Tk dekte hai phir.
Game ka naam hai staring and singing.
Tw.. Aesa koi game hota hai kya.
Ku.. Haan aesa hai.
Tw.. Toh kya rule hai mr sarna
Ku.. Toh rules yeh hai ki hum apne aanke koli rehge. Joh kisi apne aankhe bandh kardiya usko koi bhi ghane ko ghanna hoga. Aur aesa 10 rounds hoga. 10 round katam karne ke bath jo koi bhi hartha hai unko jeetne walonki bath manni hogi. Simple
Tw.. Tk mein ready hoon.
Ku. Mrs sarna koi bhi bath mani hogi.
Tw.. Tk mein tyar hoon.
Ku. Tk toh dekte hai hain.
Tw.. Jeetugi toh mein hoon.
Ku... tu bus sapne dekho.
They both looked at each other both wanted each other victory in this game.
Sorry for the late post. My exams are going to come. So little busy but will write the next soon.


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Part 49
(Actually I Didnt explained the scenery
So imagine a pool in a centre of a glass hall. There was a bed in the centre of pool which stands by support. The whole place is decorated with flowers and candles there were water showers all around . moon, star could be seen clearly from below, there was a table chair in a corner with candles in the middle and they both were sitting on it. .)
Tw.. Toh chale start karte hain game ko.
The game started
Kunj and twinkle were looking at each other eyes.
Ku.. Tujhe pata hai twinkle tu itni koobsurat hai ki meri aank tere se kabhi bhi atak nehi raha hai. Bhagvan ne single piece banaya hai tujhe aatva ajooba meri biwi.
Tw.. Makhaan lagana koi tujhe sekhe mr kunj sarna. Aur vese bhi tujhe toh badi kush hona chaiye ki teri biwi aatva ajoobha hai.
Kunj smiled and he slightly moved his eyes.
Tw.. Ha ..ha kunj sarna dekha aab tu ek gaana ghale.
Ku.. Tk meri queen. He took gis guitar and sang.
Ku.. SOniyo O soniyo Tumhein Dekhta hoon to sochta hoon bas yehi Tum jo mera saath do Sare gum bhola ke Jee lu muskuraake zindagi. (Kunj asked twinkle hands and they both danced together) u ded e mera saath tham le haath Chahe jo bhi ho baat Tu bas de de mera saath Tu dede mera saath tham le haath Chahe jo bhi ho baat Tu bas de de mera saath.
Tw... Toh khel shuru kare
Ku... tk shuru karte hain.
This time twinkle lost and she sang.
Pal bhar thahar jaao
Dil ye sambhal jaaye
Kaise tumhe roka karun
Meri taraf aata har gham phisal jaaye
Aankhon mein tum ko bharun
Bin bole baatein tumse karun
gar tum saath ho..
Agar tum saath ho..
Ku.. Vah meri queen kya ghaana ghaya.
Like this the game continues.
In one twinkle and in another kunj were losing and singing song for each other.
Tw... Toh chale mr sarna aakri round mein hai mein 9 markds tum 8 ho. Agar mein jeetgyai toh sochlo kuch bhi karne ko boldungi.
Ku.. Tk dekte hai.
This round again kunj lost and twinkle won the game.
Kunj took the guitar and sang
Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi
Tujhse hoke judaa sun zara
Twinkle continued
Bin tere mujhse naaraaz tha dil
Tu mila hai toh hai keh raha
(Kunj stood and danced a little)
Main toh tere rang mein
Rang chuka hoon
Bas tera ban chuka hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi sab tera
(Twinkle got up and sang her lines and entangled her hand around his neck)
Main toh tere dhang mein
Dhal chuki hoon
Bas teri ban chuki hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi
Sab tera, sab tera..
Sab tera, sab tera..( ( There was a shower of water over them but it doesn't matter as they were into each other) )
( kunj and twinkle both getting drenched and wet but they were enjoying. His hands were in her milky navel, her hands were on his hairs clutching and caressing to get a grip)) he looked at her and sang
Phir dil ke raaston pe
Teri aahat jo hui
(he kissed her wet forehead)
Har dhadkan jashan mein hai
Yeh inaayat jo hui (twinkle hugged him due to shyness and gripped his shirt tightly by singing these lines)
Main toh tujhe milke jee uthi hoon
Teri dhadkan mein chhupi hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahin
(she again raised her head and sang)
Sab tera, sab tera..
Sab tera, sab tera..
They both knows that this was not going to end here.
Ku... Toh mrs sarna mein khel harchuka hoon toh batao kya Karna padega mujhe(still not changing their position)
Tw.. Tum hare nehi ho tum mujhe jeetadiya takhi mein bura na man jao. Toh mein punishment nehi doongi. Mein tumse yeh bolungi ki jo tujhe man karta voh karo.
Ku.. Toh... mein kuch bhi kar sakta hoon,
Twinkle nodded
Ku.. Matlab kuch bhi
Tw.. Haan(she shouted) she was going to run when he held her and turned her with force. She landed on his chest with her eyes closed. Kunj cupped her face and looked at her eyes and then at her wet and shivering lips. He
leaned in to kiss her. She blushed and moved away. (Showers are still pouring on them.
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara.in background (He held her wrist and kissed her hands and her finger tips)
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye. (Twinkle blushed and hugged him)
Hum... Hum Tum...
Tum... Hum Tum... (They both were moving their bodies in that position)
Twinkle raised her feet and kissed his forehead then his closed eyes. It was very gentle.
Aankhon Mein Humko Utharne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye. (He picked her up and twirled her around) twinkle clutched his face with her free hand and kissed his cheeks.
Hum... Hum Tum...
Tum... Hum Tum... they both looked and smiled as they know no one could complete them without each other.
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara.




Edited by Sosan - 8 years ago

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