Twinj SS: Embracing the Rain Updated (Chapter VII-Page-9) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
their first meet was so good
again this caring side of Kunj so good
and their love for poetry aweee first when he was making fun of English I felt sad but naa its a joke it was shown so beautifully that he was really joking I loved that part a lot
continue soon and please do PM me when you update the next the part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks buddies. I am overwhelmed by the love and appreciation I received. I went through all the comments and I have no words to express my gratitude. Thank you all. Will try to upload the next chapters asap.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys updating the second part of my SS. Happy reading. 😊


Embracing the Rain

Part:2

Twinkle thought in herself she is walking with someone whom she met just a few minutes ago. She should feel awkward but to her surprise she is pretty comfortable with him.' She observed that his eyebrows were frowning now and then. Finally he broke the silence between them-See the sky is overcastted with black clouds. I don't think the rain is going to stop soon.'

Seems so. Don't know how but Maa always warns me about the forthcoming danger. I should have listed to her and made a phone call. Now the stupid phone is out of charge and I afraid she must be in tension'- saying so she got lost in the thoughts.

You can use my phone' he uttered. She hesitated first but he lend his phone in such a manner that she couldn't deny.

Hello Maa.'

Twinkle where are you puttar' Leela uttered in a tensed voice. Why didn't you call me? It's raining so heavily and I got so tensed that I called you several times. I even called Chinki. She told me you were working in the library. I almost had panic attacks thinking if my daughter is safe or not.'

Twinkle could feel her mother was sobbing. Maa I am alright. Got so much busy in the work that I didn't realize it was already evening. My phone was out of charge. Don't come to pick me Maa. It will take much time. A friend will help me to find a taxi. I will be home shortly.'

Leela: I don't know what life has stored for me. Come soon.'

Kunj who was silently listening to their conversation now talked , Did you just say a friend will help you to find a taxi? But kuch der pehele hi to you said we are strangers right?'- he again frowned his eyebrows.

Twinkle: Please stop annoying me. You know how mothers are like. I had to say so to make her calm. Friend and you!!! You would be the last person with who I would like to befriend with. Huh!!'

Kunj: I see. And who told you I want to befriend you? I am just helping you because my mom taught me to help people if they are in problems.'

Twinkle. Okay okay. Don't take too much of credit. Because of the rain I got stuck. Otherwise, I would have never come along with you.

Kunj: Can you please shut your mouth and sit on the bench for a while? I don't think we will find a Taxi somewhere near. I have to go forward to hire one. Keep the umbrella and sit there.'

Twinkle: But if I take the umbrella you will get drenched.'

Kunj: Don't worry about me. I will manage. You need the umbrella more. If you get drenched you will get fever. Just go and sit there. I will be back soon'- saying that he handed over the umbrella to her.

Twinkle took the umbrella and move forward towards the nearby bench. She observed him walking ahead. He got all drenched in the rain but was not at all bothered about it. After sometime he turned back to see whether she was in the right place or not. As if he was trying to assure she was okay. Then he quickly turned back and speeded his walk.

Twinkle was sitting on the bench holding the blue umbrella. She had thousands of questions in her mind. For the first time she felt that it feels wonderful if someone cares for you. There was no one in her life except Maa who got tensed for her. Wish Papa were here to make her feel special. She didn't notice when pearls like tears started to roll down from her eyes. One thing which she didn't know was that she looked like a deity who didn't belong to this world.

It was noticed by Kunj who was standing in front of her with the taxi. Hey are you alright?' he uttered.

Twinkle's thoughts were interrupted by that familiar voice. When did you come' she asked him in an awkward voice.

When you were lost in your thoughts' he quickly replied. Before she could say anything he just said Here is the taxi. Go home. Your Maa must be worried.'

She just couldn't say anything. She went near the taxi, folded the umbrella and got in.

When the taxi started she noticed that guy who was still standing there, smiling and waving his hand towards her. Rain drops were pouring on him and he just stood there carelessly. Suddenly she felt like she didn't want to go back. She wanted to get drenched with him, standing beside him exactly where he was. But the next moment her thoughts somehow disappeared and a feeling of loneliness surrounded her...

Edited by Cloudy_Noon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
rini..awesome update...
i liked their conversation...
his concern...her thoughts..
and above all the ending
..where she wishes to get wet in the rain ...along with him..
loved it...😃😃
i really want to knw how they r after 4 yrs...😳
continue soon😳
Edited by crazyfan9_sanju - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read both chappies now!
And I must say this was so adorable. No! This was beyond adorable
I really like the subtle bond they are forming and the pace with which you are going on with this story.

You have woven this story with this charm that is so hard to ignore. It is magical and way too beautiful!
Loved it!😃

Great job buddy👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read both chappies now!
And I must say this was so adorable. No! This was beyond adorable
I really like the subtle bond they are forming and the pace with which you are going on with this story.

You have woven this story with this charm that is so hard to ignore. It is magical and way too beautiful!
Loved it!😃

Great job buddy👏

Thanks buddy. It takes a big heart to appreciate others. Your kind words will surely motivate me. :)
Edited by Cloudy_Noon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!! The feelings of twinkle were beautifully penned...
Waiting for the next one..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update..
Twinkle and kunj ate babies..
Friendly at the same time fighting..
It was soo lovely tat he didn't care abt him and went to get taxi..
Turned to check abt her safety and went..
Plz.continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Aaha!
Back to Back.
Like it.
So it's start now.
The Amazing and mind blowing feeling ever in the world between them specially Twinkle.😳
You penned the part beautifully.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This story is so peaceful...
The love, care...feelings...
Twinkle look like a deity-loved the line...

Update the next part soonish...

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