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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Dibs.on.Sid

And sorry girl, I have a few of your fics pending, will read as time permits😉thnks for the PMs



Take ur time meri Jan...
Work comes first...
And I are welcme 😛 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: tricksters

Hi Aura

Woww ..entirely different story😊...It seems interesting.
I doubt that whether that baby is kunj's🤔...Alisha is having extra marital affairs naa..Is that kunj's baby itself??
Yeah like kunj the word jeeju stabbed our heart into millions of pieces.
Thanks for the PM.
Please update soon.



Haha...
Evn I m confused about the baby's progenitor 😃 😉
Thnku dear ...
U liked it that's all ...
Love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
This seems really interesting. Hope alisha leave soon though.Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Sdea

This seems really interesting. Hope alisha leave soon though.Looking forward to the next update.




Thanks dear ...
Loads of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Oh my god Aura!
Firstly sorry for the late comment...
Aura,I love this concept so much
Though I got angry seeing Kunj and Alisha married to each other
I love this concept and I mean every ounce of what I said
Honestly,I'm already so hooked that I don't know if it's a good thing or bad.
Amazing job,loved the first chapter ❤️
I really wanna know how you shape this up
It's a very humble humble request -
Please continue it soon,please please please
Love you so much for this 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Jambread3

Oh my god Aura!
Firstly sorry for the late comment...
Aura,I love this concept so much
Though I got angry seeing Kunj and Alisha married to each other
I love this concept and I mean every ounce of what I said
Honestly,I'm already so hooked that I don't know if it's a good thing or bad.
Amazing job,loved the first chapter ❤️
I really wanna know how you shape this up
It's a very humble humble request -
Please continue it soon,please please please
Love you so much for this 🤗




Awww k ,
There is no prb with the latest comment...
Sabar ka fal mitha hota hai 😉
I m pleased that I hve made u hooked with ths ss...
Love u too darling...huggie fr u
Edited by maisarah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

You are disgusting : 2nd Shot

Kunj smhw mngd his anger...As usual alisha went to hang out wth her frnds ...
Kunj was wrkng in his laptop ... It was 8 pm nd kunj needed a cup of coffee badly ... So he wnt to the kitchen to mke it by his own ...
Reachng there, he saw twinkle making coffee fr hrslf ...
K- Oh ...
T- Oh jij, kuch chahiya tha apko?
K- I needed coffee actually ...
T- Oh main bhi usike liye ayi thi... I ll make it fr u...
K- Cool enough...accha adbhay ...
T-So gya ...ekdm badmash hai , so hi nhi raha tha ... It took 2 hrs to mke him sleep...
K- Haha... My son aftr all...
T- Yeah rght ... Accha jij , di kabtak ayegi ?
Kunjs ecprsns chngd in tht momnt... Kunj blurt out all the sorrows and griefs to twinkle ... Smwhre Twinkle flt rueful fr kunj...
She took his hand in her ...
T- Kitna dard chupake rakha hai apne apni andar !! Itna dard , itni taklifoke sath aap kaise?
K- Tumhri di ne kbhi mere pyaar ko samjha hi nehi ...Uske liye mrge is all abt sex ... Uske lia ek husbnd wife ka rishta give and take typ ki hai ... Thak chuka hu main twinkle ... Is rishtey ko nibhate nibhate...
I m tired of it...
Twinkle was consoling kunj ...

Waiting till 1 am fr alisha kunj and twinkle went to their own rooms tke their nap...

Morning -
Alisha was slpng on the sofa lyk a dead prsn ... She was drunk ...
Kunj vot ready fr office ...
T- Are jiju , aap kaha jarehe hai?
K-Office twinkle ...
T- Nashta to krke jaiye ... Aisa khali pet bahar jana accha nhi hota ...
K- Roz to bina brkfst kiye hi nikal ta hu phir aaj ?
T- Pls jiju...
Kunj sat fr brkfst nd fnshd it...

Alisha was lookng fr kunj shouting his nme ...
K- Wht the hell ??? Hum akhi ghar me rehte hai , aur mere kanme koi defect nhi hai nrmally tone main bat karoge to sunai dega ...
Alisha threw a paper on his face ... Twinkle rushed there ...
A- Sign on thse papers ...
K- Kis cheese ki paper hai yeh ??
A-Divorce papers ...
T- Di , yeh app...
A-Stay out of it twinkle ...
K- You knw wht i m glad ... Finally its gnna be ovr ,alisha ... Yeh roz ki khech khech se accha hai ki yeh rishta hi na rahe ...but main yeh dvrce papers par sign krnga ,par mujhe adbhay ke custody chahiye ... Main apni beteko tum jaise aurat ke hawale nahi krnga ...
Alisha fulminated into laughter ...
Whch made Kunj and twinkle confsd ...
A- Aww kunj , tum kitne sidhe ho ... U still think ki adbhay tumhara beta hai !!! U r mistakn swty , adbhay mera aur aryan ka beta hai...
Hearing thse kunjs wrld was ransacked ... He wasnt able to hndle the stroke gvn by her whom he lvd the most ... Evn twinkle was shckd ...
K- Its nt true ... Tum adbhay ko mjhse le jana chahti ho ... Thts why
A- It is the truth baby ...Here, have a look at the DNA rprt ...
T- Yeh rprt fake bhi to ho sakte hai na ...
A- Dnt intrfre twinkle ... Meri billi aur mujhiko mew !!!!
At tht momnt alisha felt a hard patch on her face ... It was none othr thn kunj ...
A- Hw dare ...
Another slap sound moved the house a bit ...
K- Get out ...
A- Uh ah ... Nt so hurry ... Doctor khanna ...
Dr khanna was kunjs childhood and reliable frnd ... He got some papers in his hand nd a spleenful face ... He shwd the papers to kunj ... Nw evrythng was clrd to kunj ... He undrstood the reason of alisha s shwrng love nd concern fr him... Kunj immediately took the papers and signd it ... and thrwd on her ugly fce
K- Take ur illict son frm here nd leave ...
Alisha went to pack her clths nd took adbhay nd left the house...

Kunj was shattared ... His eyes became red in anger ... Twinkle lkd at his eyes , all she could see there was pain and emptiness ...
She felt the pain he was going through... She cldnt blv tht her sis is so ruthless , hw could she dumb such a nyc guy ?
Twinkle slowly stpd twrds kunj ... She kept her hand on his shlder ...
T- jij pls sambhaliye khud ko ... Aise tutne se kya hoga ... Alisha di jaise adki apko dsrv hi nhi krte ...

Whn twinkle was sayng all ths suddenly she felt two wet lips on her ...

Let me knw hw it was ... And stay tuned to knw more ...
To be continued
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
amazing shot Aura
am so happy that Alisha is now out of Kunj's life
but Kunj has so much pain in his heart 😭 and even Adbhay is not his child ohhh its too much to handle for such a nice guy
m so glad that Twinkle is there for him
and yaa even I want some lines to know why Alisha did this all of a sudden as she want to have all the luxuries which Kunj can give her
Thanks for the PM buddy
and my apologies for being late
Edited by twinjlover9 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Ok thankgod alisha gave him divorce.
That alisha😡🤢 the baby was not kunj's.
Damn her.
But happy too for kunj he got rid of her.
I just want one thing for twinj to make their relation strong but slowly.
No need for hurry in their relation.
I m sure kunj's life must have been shattered😭.
But two lips on twinkle's lips🤔 that fast.

Ok its quite interesting. Continue soon.
Aura if possible pm me the next update.
Edited by tikit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Aura,thank you for updating fast 😃
This part was amazinggg
Thank god Alisha and Kunj are no more together,their name together also makes me cringe 😡
Divorce hogaya,balle balle 🥳
And that was not Kunj's son? 😭 bichara Kunj
And ohhh By what I predict,those Lips are Kunj's 😳
How much I would love to see them kiss 😆
Your ending makes me so curious as to what will happen next
Please continue soon! 🤗

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