Twinj SS 'You are disgusting'Last Shot updated - Page 2

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

I am glad to have u back and really excited for the story

Do write it soon

And you are a great writer, don't doubt your capabilities

Thnks dear ... I wnt doubt , i prmse ...
Pm u whn done

Originally posted by: SweetSau

Yeah ur back with another story!

Can't wait for it update soon.

Also update your ff too.wait eagerly for the updates.

Love

Sayli

I ll darling ... Thnks fr bng there

Originally posted by: amlavs

Wow..

Another os ..

Waiting..

Hey my goldie ... Lve u

New OS?
The title of the OS makes me so curious 😆
Please continue soon!
And yes Aura,Athira is right,don't doubt your capabilities...
You're an amazing writer and I enjoy your stories a lot 🤗

Hlw my all dear fellows ...
Its me aura... As i was deduced to write an os on twinj , i m here wth it ... Hope u guys ll enjy it ... Pls mention hw it was ...
I ve tkn the outline frm King's aka
ff ... I was cmpltly in lve wth the reflction tht cldnt stp myslf frm mimcing it...

OS - You Are Disgusting

Kunj Sarna a 36 years old married guy who became fthr of a son 3 days earlier... Kunj was mrrd to his gf Alisha ...
Kunj and Alisha met 8 yrs ere on kunjs best frnd yuvi's 28 th bday ... Alisha was the grl who made him cmpltly insane nd flimsy... And aftr 3 mnths extrme effort he made it... Thy earned mch appreciation awa fame as a couple... Passing over his F*Lys dissaproval kunj mrrd alisha nd strtd their own tiny hppy F*Ly...


Not hppy actually... Alisha strtd to show her evil side aftr 1 year of their mrge... She was such a s**t... Boys, drinking, prtys , night outs etc was her main wrk... She had sme extra marital affairs... Kunj caught her red handed svrl tyms... Kunj was fedup... He wasnt able to hndle it anymre... She ws nw gttng out of hnd... Rglr argmnts nd altrctns were mkng his lyf hell... Whn he reachd to the dcsn of endng it by dvrce , his lyf took anther hpfull trn ... He came to knw tht , Alisha was prgnnt with his baby ... Kunj was so hppy tht he cldnt find out the evil mtve of alisha bhnd ths incdnt... Alisha knw tht as lng as kunj is with her , she cn lead a royal nd sphstctd lyf... No jobs ,no financial prbs only chilling lyk a millioniare ...

Kunj undrstood hr trick whn it was too lte...It was 7th mnth of hr pregnancy... He remaind sclnt as he didnt wnt to loose his baby...

Nw he has bcme a fthr... He hmslf cldnt blve tht... Aftr gvng birth the bby alisha again strtd to maintain hr rglr actvts ... So it was a trauma fr kunj , as he thought tht their bby cn brng alisha on the rght track ... Kunj was nt able to sustain the bby all by himslf ...
K-Alisha, W*F is tht...
A- Wht hve i dne nw...
K- Alisha i cnt yaar... Tum kya chahti ho ki main ghar main baith jao apna sara kam dhm chdke? Is tht wht u wnt...
A- Cmon kunj, maine aisa kab bola...
K- Thn wht abt our baby ... Tum to pura din ghr pe hoti nhi ho ... Who ll tke care of him ...
See jan, we ve bcme prnts ... Rspnsbltis bar chuki hai ... U ve to gve tym to our kid...
A- Oh stp it kunj... Tumhe baccha chahiye tha na, ab kya hua ? Listn kunj mujhe yeh baccha waccha bada krne ka koi shokh nhi hai... Aur ha baby ka dhyan rkhne ke liya maine ek nanny hire kiya hai... Thdi der main ati hgi ...
K- You knw wht u r jst disgusting nd impsble ...
Thts whn the door bell rang...
Kunj opnd the door with an angry face which chngd in a mttr of sec seeing a beautfll girl stndng on their door ... He was lost in her beauty ...
Lady- Hlw , Mrs. Alisha hai ghrme?
K- Oh yeah yeah ... Pls cme in ...
L- Thnks ... U mst be Mr
K- Kunj Sarna ... Alishas husband ..
Alisha cme thre ...
A-hi , twinkle ...
T- Hlw Alu ...
They grls hugged each othr ...
A- Kunj meet twinkle ... My cousin..
K- Hi ... Twinkle
A- Twinky , ths is ..
T- Jiju ...

The jiju wrd stabbed kunjs heart in thsnds of peices ... He didnt knw why ...
Baby strtd cryng ...
A- Oh god .. nt again ...
T- Ohhh baby ? Whr is he??
A- In tht room ...
Kunj and twinkle ran twrds babys room ...Alisha felt irritated ...
Reachng there twinkle say her little nephew cryng in the baby cott...
T- Awww babyyy... Dnt cry , dnt cry... Look at u ! Arent u the cutest thing in the wrld ... Masi ko dekhke smiley derhi hai ... Ole ...
Kunj was smlng seeing twinkle nd his infants chmstry...
T- Jiju isme bilkul ap jaise features hai... he is shooo cute ... Btw iska nam kya hai ?
K- Not dcded yet ...
T- Wht???? His age is almst 15 days ? Cme on jij... alu u didnt nmed ur bby still?
A- tuhi rakhle na yaar... U knw we bth are dumbos ...
T-Are u sure? Jij ,Alu?
K-Absolutely ...
A-Go on...
T-I think we should call him Adbhay ...as he is gnna be a bold nd courgeous guy ... wht say ...
K- Vry gd choice ... Amzng nme ...
Alisha was busy wth her phone ...
It made kunj heated once again nd he left...

To be continued...

Hey guys tell me hw it was ...
A

Res

Great one... Plz make TWINJ one and get Alisha hell out out of his life...

Alisha is one bad woman.

Amazing story Aura

And sorry girl, I have a few of your fics pending, will read as time permits😉 thnks for the PMs