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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Aura its not that i don't want the kiss to happen but atleast till kunj alishas case.
I m saying it on real grounds because if alisha sees tsinj together she may try to frame them for having n affair nd may demand allimony.
Yes after officiaally divorcing twinj relation nd private thing can happen.
Till then they can build trust nd confidence in their relation.
Also twinkle's nd kunj's past i need to know.
Its just been hardly two or 3 days twinj met.

Aura i desperately want twinj union but after kunj's divorce which is the need of the hour.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: tikit

Aura its not that i don't want the kiss to happen but atleast till kunj alishas case.

I m saying it on real grounds because if alisha sees tsinj together she may try to frame them for having n affair nd may demand allimony.
Yes after officiaally divorcing twinj relation nd private thing can happen.
Till then they can build trust nd confidence in their relation.
Also twinkle's nd kunj's past i need to know.
Its just been hardly two or 3 days twinj met.

Aura i desperately want twinj union but after kunj's divorce which is the need of the hour.



Okay , i got it esh...
I ll keep tht in mnd ...
Pls stay tuned...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Yeah Eshu is so right.
First u build the relation then you can show their love.
It will be awesome also we can get many beautiful moments between them.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
i agree with tikit ...
i too want the kiss to happen but after this Alisha chapter get closed..

after that ...yaay twinj hi twinj[:D/]
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
You are disgusting - Last shot

As twinkle was consoling kunj ... She sddnly felt two wet lips on hers ... She was so shkd ,she pushed kunj with all the strengths she had in hrslf ...
Evn kunj was also srprsd ...
Twinkle smaked kunj...
T- Ap ki himmat kaise hui ???? Hw dare u to touch me , ha????
Twinkle hold kunjs collar and strtd
shkng him ...
K- Twinkle i m so so sosry ...pata nhi mjhe , i m really sry twinkle ...
T- Nw i undrsynd Mr . Kunj Sarna ... Meri di ne apke sath jo bhi kiya bilkul sahi kia ... Aap jaisa chrctr less , cheap insanoke sath yehi hona chahiye... U shmeless moron...
All ths whle kunj remained sclnt ... Tears were rolling dwn frm his eyes mkng thm red ...He was flng so hlpless nd guilty... Hw cld he???
K- Wht hve i done ...!!!Hw cn i be so emtnl ????
T- Aapna yeh drama bandh kije ... Bht kar liya... main is ghr me aur ek pal bhi nhi ruk sskti..
K-Twinkle,pls itni rat ko kaha jaogi tum... Ths plce is nt at all safe fr grls... Tum kal subha chli jana aaj rat yehi ruk jao...
T- kuyn ???Ab to nendmain meri fayda uthana bki hai, yeh mra khoon karna , rght?
Kunj straightly went out of the house without answrng any qstns of her...
K-Tum andar se door lock kar do ...main bahar rhnga ...
Twine was so fumed tht it didnt bthr her ... Asa kunj stpd out she clsd the door nd lckd it...
She thn went to sleep...
Twinkle was in slp bt sddnly she woke up hearng roarng sounds of the sky... She opnd the wndw nd say it was raing cats and dogs ...
Sddnly she rmembrd tht kunj was outside ...She took an umbrlla nd ran...
Her hurt stpd beatng seeing the scenary ...
Kunj was lying on the ground , trembling nd sneezing ... He became red bcz of cld ...
Twinkle ran to him ...
T- Kunj uthiye andar chliye...
K- Nhi twinkle tum andar jake so jao... Mujh jaise insan ka koi bharosa nhi ... I m okay , u go...
Kunj was quaking in high fvr...
Twinkle somehow took him inside and lyd him ... She thn chkd his fvr whch was 104 ... Kunj was unconsious ...He was whsprng " Maine sachme jn bjhke nhi kiya twinkle, i was so trd " saying all thse he again faintd...
Twinkle flt sry fr me... Fr sme reason she cldnt see him in pain ... Tht reason was still unknwn to her...
Twinkle chngd kunjs clths clsng hr eyes ... She became GRILLED TWINKLE by the extrme heat of his hotness ...She was msmrsd seeing his abs ... She smhw mngd to chnge him ... Thn she ran to the ktchn to mke soup ... She fed him lovingly nd he ate lyk a lttle baby...
Twinkles pov-
Awww kitni cutely kharaha hai ... Lyk a bby...
No no twinkle, yh galat hai , cntrl yrslf ...
Feedng the soup , twinkle gve him mdcne... Kunj fall aslp nd twinkle was cmbng his hair wth her hnd...thn she plcd a soft kiss on his frehead...
It was about 9 am whn kunjs eyes opnd ... He woke up and saw letter ... Opng it he was srprsd ... It was none else bt twinkles... She penned dwn sme wrds lyk thse...

Kunj,
I m really vry sry abt whtvr i said to u ystrday nght... Actually nw i can undrstnd the state ur going through , thts why i m wrtng ths little chit ... Hope u ll frgt evrythng abt ur past nd strt ur lyf afresh... Aur agar kismat ne chaha phir milenge ... Lots of gd wshes fr ur future...
Twinkle

Rdng the lttr kunj chuckled...

8 months later:
It was Alishas wedng ... Kunj and alisha were dvrcd wth mutual undrstngs ... And as always alisha carried her sluggishness by sndng her wdng crd at kunjs plce...

Kunj was sitting outdoor wrkng wth his laptop... he was so absrbd in his wrk ...
Sddnly he felt a light kiss on his cheeks nd a whisprng voice saying "I love you"...
He held her hnd and made her sit on her lap...
It was his lovely wife twinkle ... They gve anthr chnce to their fate nd got marrd nd strtd lvng a happy mrrd lyf ...
K- Hey, sexy ... Look at you ... U look so spicyy in ths shorts ... aur kaha tum gharpe woh boaring see salwar suit pehn ke rehti ho...
T- Bohot jyada naughty ho gaya ho tum ajkal... Jab dekho tab aise naughty naughty batein krte rhte ho...
K- Accha !!!!! U shld be hppy na, At least main apni biwi ke tarah sirf bed mein naughty aur wild nhi hota...
Twinkle strtd beatng kunj lvngly... Thn they broke into a passionate hug...
The End


Sry fr the late updt ... Let me knw whthr u ll lykd it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Me firsttt 😳
Aura,this update was amazinggg
In fact the whole story was super super good!
Loved loved this piece immensely
Great job done!
Keep writing more
Lots of love to you 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
And mee second.
Yeah Aura you are late but never mind Your last shot is enough to make excuse.
This update is really beautiful.👏
Please write again.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Aura this was beautiful.
Loved it.
Yes u were really late but it is excused s last shot was😳
Continue ishqana dil.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Thnku so mch k, Esh ,adi ... Sry abt the delay...
Love u all nd thnku so mch ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Aww so nice...I'm so happy that TWINJ became one but sad that u ended it early...
Looking forward for ur next fictions

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