Twinj SS 'You are disgusting'Last Shot updated - Page 3

amazing story
ohhh Alisha is really a very bad girl she don't even care about her own baby
Twinkle and Kunj jiju-saali its a very weird and interesting thing
let's see how their love story will evolve
and Twinkle's chemistry with nephew was so good
that dialogue of Twinkle was so good " Jiju isme bilkul ap jaise features q... he is shooo cute" indirectly she appreciated Kunj
continue soon

Aura,This story would be a mature one.

Hi Aura

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

Aura,This story would be a mature one.

I just loved it.

Though my reaction after reading first sentence was-OH!NO.

But after read it whole I give u thumbs up.

Go for it only one thing please handle the critical relations carefully.I know you must do it.

Ofcourse waiting for next update.😃

P.S.-Nice name was given to baby.

Thanks dude ...
And I 'll take care abt the critical rltnshp mttr as u mrkd it...
Thnku so vry mch fr lvng it
Adbhay ? It's also my nephews name... Copycat 😃

Originally posted by: amlavs

Res

--unres--

It's amazing..

Oh nice concept..

Alisha stupid..plz go to hell..

Wait Wat?? Juju??? Even kunj felt weird while twinkle called him..

Plz.continue soon..

Thx for pm..

Luved it..

Evn I felt wierd while writing Jiju ... 😛
I m so glad to know that you love d it buddy...
Loads of love ...
And pls tell me the elaboration of res ...
I m confused

Originally posted by: piu22

Great one... Plz make TWINJ one and get Alisha hell out out of his life...

Waiting for the next part

Thanks babe...
Yeah I will make sure that twinj are tgthr.
Lve u

This is quite different...

Originally posted by: tikit

Res

😃 😛 😆

Originally posted by: Dibs.on.Sid

Amazing story Aura

Hooked already

Twink calling Kunj Jij is a li'l weird even for Kunj too.

Throw that B@#$ Alisha soon out of his life

and please don't doubt urself, you have out of the box ideas n write wonderfully

do update soon

Thanks for the PM

Yayyy I made u hooked 😛 😃
So happy u liked it ...
Thanks fr praising babe
I 'll be there soon with the nxt shot

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

amazing story
ohhh Alisha is really a very bad girl she don't even care about her own baby
Twinkle and Kunj jiju-saali its a very weird and interesting thing
let's see how their love story will evolve
and Twinkle's chemistry with nephew was so good
that dialogue of Twinkle was so good " Jiju isme bilkul ap jaise features q... he is shooo cute" indirectly she appreciated Kunj
continue soon

Awww baby u always make me blissful with ur feedbacks... All u guys do... Thanks for that...
Lve u ...
I 'll be there soonish