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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dawi

Lemme tell u this, you are an amazing writer. I wanna apologize from readers' behalf for lack of response, but trust me, you have the skills. For me, at least, I have been busy with my stuff, I have exams next week. But, I promise you that I will try to keep to with ur story as much as possible. Keep writing, cuz only that is fair to your writing skills 😊😊


well thank u for appreciating me. 😊
Hey, u dont have to apologize for evryone. Glad u took out time and read it.
I am definitely reconsidering on continuing the ff.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey everyone. Here is the next chapter. I hope now I am not updating too fast so u guys can easily follow up. Plzz bear with the long length of chapter. Keep reading and commenting.
Chapter 13:

Next morning--
Twinj were sleeping hugging each other. Kunj had buried his face in Twinkle's neck.
Twinkle woke up and her body was aching. She remembered their night and blushed. But her pain was just increasing.
Twinkle tried waking up Kunj.
Tw: Kunj.
Ku: Hmmm (still sleeping)
Tw: KUNJ !
Ku: Hmm.
Tw: Kunj.. Utho.. Plzz wake up. I m not feeling well ! Kunj !
Kunj woke up still sleepy !
Ku: Kya hua Twinkle ??
Tw: Kunj my whole body is aching.
Kunj sighed.
Ku: Baby this is quite normal aftr 1st time. U will feel weak for sometime. Don't worry.. Go have a hot water bath. U will feel better. ! U want me to help u ? He asked rather worriedly.
Tw: Nahi Kunj.. I will go myself.. Tum plzz so jao, u must be tired. Maine aise hi tumhe disturb kiya.
Kunj pulled her down and nuzzled in her neck space and started kissing it !
Ku: Hmm baby.. U smell so good !
Acha now go and wake me up by 11... Some construction is going on in office. Jai will handle it. I have to reach there by 1pm. Kal se I have to go early. And become quite busy. So let me sleep late today !
Tw: Okay Kunj. Love u ! Kunj can I ask u sumthng.
Ku: Hmmm.
Tw: Will u be loyal to me ? Kunj promise karo ki aaj ke baad I will be the only girl in ur life.
Kunj was shocked to noe Twinkle still not trusted him but then thought it to be her insecurities. She was insecure and was scared of loosing him to another woman. Mayb it was because of his past one night stands. He needed to assure her.
Ku: Twinkle, I will always be yours. U trust me, don't u ?
Tw: Yes Kunj, I trust u more than my life. sorry shudnt have asked u this.It is just my ...
Ku: Insecurities baby. Twinkle listen, few years back I was not responsible and mature. Those were mere attractions. Moreover these were very common in London. But now Twinkle, i noe my responsibilities. U r my first priority sweetheart. Dekho abh toh mere paas proof bhi hai.. Tattoo of ur name ! U r my queen. Haan lekin I can't promise ki u will be the only girl in my life.
Tw got teary eyed : Kunj ?
Ku: Sweetheart. Here look at me.
He wiped her tears and spoke.
Ku: Abh tu mujhe meri princess se door nhi rakh skti. Usko bhi toh pyaar krna hai.
Twinkle thought who his princess is and started sobbing.
Tw: Tumhari princess ?
Ku: Haan Twinkle, sirf meri nhi. Humari princess. Abhi kuch time ke baad vo aa jayegi.
Twinkle made a questioned face while crying.
Ku: Arre meri stupid wife, I m talking abt our daughter.
Twinkle stopped crying and smacked his arm. She grinned and Kunj burst out laughing.
Ku: Abh agar maharani ki permission ho toh Can I sleep ? Raat ko bhi nhi sone diya aur abhi bhi nhi. Tw: Sorry Kunj.. Tum so jao.. Gud nyt !
Kunj was already asleep by then. She covered herself with another duvet and walked to the bathroom. She made herself comfortable in hot water bath. And closed her eyes. Memories of last nyt came flooding in. She blushed hard and mentally noted that her husband is very gentle and understanding. She was the most lucky woman on Earth.
After some time, she changed into mini shorts and crop top. These crop tops were her and even Kunj's favourite. She had this sudden urge to please Kunj in all ways. She wanted her man to be happy after giving her all the happiness. Now he himself deserved evrythng good.

There was still some time to wake up Kunj. She went to the living room and was surprised to see its state. All their clothes scattered here and there.. It reminded her how they hade made out on the couch ! She picked up all their clothes and put them in laundry. When she was about to go to kitchen to make coffee for Kunj, the doorbell rang.
She wondered who it must be ?
Tw: itni subah kon hoga ? Chinky aur Karan ko toh hamne raat ko dinner ke liye invite kiya tha !
She opened the door and 2 Voices spoke.
Voices: SURPRISE !!
Twinkle gasped and then grinned. There stood Mahi and Inaya at the door with their handbags and driver carrying their luggage. She hugged them both and called them in and seated them in living room. She thanked her lucky stars that she had cleared the mess of clothes just in time. Otherwise it wud hav been embarrasing.
Tw: Mahi and Inaya, what a surprise ! Thank god u came. I was missing u both so much.
In: Haan bhabhi humne bhi aapko bahut miss kiya.. So chale aaye aapko milne.
Ma: Di, aap kitni hot aur cute lg rhi ho in western clothes. So Jiju ne aapko permission de hi di.
In: Arre Mahi aise kaise bhai permission na dete. Bhabhi ki baat toh manni hi padti ! Bhai darte jo hain bhabhi se itna !
All the 3 Girls laughed at it.
Tw: Btw thank u Inaya, meri iss pagal behen ko punjabi pataka banane ke liye. Abh lgti hai na yeh Twinkle Kunj Sarna ki behan ! U looking gud Mahi.
In: Aur main achi nhi lagti.. She fakes anger.
Tw: Tu toh full on pataka hai meri jaan. She passed a flying kiss to Inaya.
Twinkle went to kitchen to get them water.
Meanwhile Inaya whispered to Mahi..
In: Mahi did u notice bhabhi's neck ?
Ma: Nahi Inaya. What is it ? She asked suspiciously. In few days only they had mixed up quite well and called themselves best frnds foreva.
In: A love bite.And so much of glow on her face. Lagta hai bhai and bhabhi had an erotic nyt. And she winked at her.
Mahi (gasped): So abh hum dono ko pata hai ki hume kya krna hai.. Ryt ?
and she winked back at Inaya. They both silently giggled and sat straight when they saw Twinkle coming.

In: Bhabhi bhai kahan hain ? Mujhe unse milna hai. She secretly winked at Mahi.
Ma: Haan haan di.. Jiju kahan hain ? Tw: Haan voh tumhare bhai urf Jiju so rhe hain. He has said to not wake him up.
In: Arre no tension bhabhi, ham jaakr uthate hain na.. Kyun Mahi ?
Ma: Haan haan Inaya.. Lets go. They pretended to stand.
Twinkle cudn't let them go in their bedroom. Kunj was sleeping naked and he was not even covered above his waist.
She immediately stood and spoke.
Tw: Nahi Mahi & Inaya.Vo...vo I mean...tum dono travel krke aa rhi ho toh Tum dono thak gyi hogi na toh jao guest room mein jaakr rest karlo. Kunj ko main utha doongi. Even mujhe coffee bhi bnani hai uski.
She mentally patted herself for finding gud excuse when she saw their convinced faces. What she dint knew was both her punjabi patakas were just teasing her.
In: Haan thik hai bhabhi.. Bye !
Twinkle showed them their room and both the girls burst out laughing as soon as Twinkle went away.

Twinkle quickly entered their room and locked the door behind her.
She stood by the door panting.
Tw: Thank god they both dint come here !
She went to their bed and smiled on how kunj was sleeping peacefully. Kunj was sleeping on his stomach and had his hand on twinkle's pillow. He was covered by duvet only till his waist and looked breathtakingly hot.
She slightly bent down and kissed his back. Kunj's lips curved into a smile. He turned towards Twinkle, leaned against the bedrest and pulled her in his lap tightly holding her waist. Twinkle kissed him softly.
Tw: Morning Kunj.
Ku: Morning sweetheart. So how r u feeling now ?
Tw: Its better Kunj.
Ku: Baby did u like it ? I tried to be as gentle as I could.
Tw: Kunj u were the best.
She shied and hid her face in kunj's chest.
Ku: Awww meri baby sharma gayi. ! Twinkle tu kaise kr leti hai. Sometimes so bold and sometimes so shy. Bas abh aur mat sharma, varna main khud ko control nahi kr paaonga and main abhi fir se nahi krna chahta. U have not fully recovered now. Maine tumhe promise kiya tha ki raat ko krenge. So be ready for the night and winked at her !
Twinkle smacked his chest. And den she remembered to tell him abt Mahi and Inaya.
Tw: Kunj hum nahi kr skte raat ko. Main tumhe batana bhool gyi ki Mahi aur Inaya aaye hain ! They r going to stay for 2 Days.
Kunj though loved both the girls but was not at all happy with their timing to come. Kunj thought to himself.. Toh aa gye Kabab mein haddi. Abhi hi toh privacy mili thi.
Ku: woww ! Mahi and Inaya aaye hain. M so happy. He faked happiness.
Tw: Kunj u r lying to me ? Tumhe kya laga mujhe kuch samjh nhi aayega. I noe u r not happy with their timing of coming. But koi nhi. Its just for 2 Days. Behave properly with them. She warned him.
Kunj nodded.Somewhere in heart he was happy. He loved Inaya very much and always pampered her and now Mahi was also more like a sister to him.
Ku: Obviously sweetheart.. I love them equally.
Tw: And haan abh jaldi utho aur ready ho jaaon. U noe maine kitni mushkil se un dono ko yahan aane se roka hai. Moreover tumhe office bhi jaana hai na. So get ready quickly and come to the dining table. I m there only serving them snacks. And haan tumhe yaad hai na aaj humne Karan and Chinky ko invite kiya hai dinner ke liye ! Come home early.
Ku: Yes baby. I remember !
Twinkle gave him a quick peck on lips and ran out of the room.
Kunj chuckled and went to get ready.

At the table, the girls were talking when Kunj arrived.
Inaya literally jumped on him. Kunj had to take a few steps back and steady himself before hugging her back.
In: Bhai, I missed u so much. Aapke jaane ke baad koi mujhe pamper nahi krta. She pouted angrily.
Kunj chuckled and kissed her forehead. Then he hugged Mahi.
Ku: Mahi kaisi hai tu... Hope meri paagal behen tujhe zyaada pareshaan nhi kr rhi.
Ma: Bilkul nhi jiju.. Abh toh hum bffs ban gye hain.
Twinj were happy for their sisters.
He sat on breakfast table with them.
Ku: So my darlings, mere piche se kya baatein chal rhi thi ?
Twinkle chuckled at how her husband always pampered them. She was sure they 3 Were going to spoil bad by his pamperings.
Twinkle served him lunch as he had to go to office.
Ma: Jiju yeh bilkul achi baat nhi hai. Hum aaj hi aaye aur aap office jaa rhe ho.
In: Rehene de Mahi. Bhai aise hi hain. Sadu kahin ke.
Twinkle also joined them.
Tw: sahi mein Kunj. We had plans for going out aur abh tum nhi aaoge hamare saath.
Ku: Arre my darlings, u noe na abhi its starting. It will take some time. But tum log jao na. Go enjoy urselves.
He turned towards Twinkle and spoke: U r not going to drive the car. Take the driver with u. Mujhe pata hai tum tino milke pakka koi siyappa karoge.
Tw: But Kunj
Ku: No arguments Twinkle.
Tw: Okay fine !
Ku: So bye my darlings, meet u in the evening. He hugged Mahi and Inaya and gave a quick peck on Twinkle's lips. Twinkle was shocked and embarrased.
Ku: Bye sweetheart !
Mahi and Inaya: Ooohooo. So romantic !
Kunj grinned and walked away leaving a blushing Twinkle behind.

The girls got ready and went to mall to spend their time. Obviously one wud expect them to shop, considering the fashion freaks they are.
In the Evening in his office, he recieved a msg and was shocked. It was his credit card details. The girls had spent almost 30,000 Shopping nd Clubbing. Twinkle will be twinkle he thought.
though Twinkle had talked the other day about trying to live like a middle class couple and had told him that she wud reduce her shopping... But he knew Twinkle wud never be able to do it. He cud really not blame Twinkle for it. From her early age, she had been spoilt by Leela and aftr their marriage his father had pampered and supported her a lot. And he knew after their confession, he was the one who was spoiling her bad. She had been raised like a princess and now was his queen. So let it be the way it is he thought.

----Precap: Major Twinj Fight----

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow shrija;
It's really nice update.
I am now going to read your next update.😊
Edited by adi_FMT_ct - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
shriti..
such a nice chapter.. loved the sis duo.
update soon.. but shocked seeing the precap😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Awesome chapter Shraja
Twinkle crying while listening to Kunj about having other one as his princess was superb I liked that part a lot as we knew he is only talking about their daughter but his wifey 😭
and the part with three girls is so cute so lovely
Inaya and Mahi are such cutie pies just loved them ...and when they teased Twinkle aweee 😃
the main thing Kunj he is so good always thinking about his loved ones security,health and to pamper them but oops he wanted privacy 😆
and the last part was funny and lovely too Twinkle will always be Twinkle in shopping 🤣
and the precap looks so interesting Twinj fight after so much sweet parts a intense one will be good
and Thanx for the PM to this wonderful story
and glad you are continuing it
Edited by twinjlover9 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Wow..I loved it very much..
Twinkle blushing and Kunj teasing is amazing always..
Trio girls shopping and 30,000 bill my god..
Precap: fight?? Am scared..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Shriti wow.
I loved sweet romantic parts of twinj.
I loved daughter princess part.
Inaya, mahi bffs👏.
I love kunj pampering all three.
Precap
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Shriti..its mindblowing..😳..I loved each and everything in the update😉
Kunj is very naughty😉
Thanks for the pm.
Hope that Fight does not lead to separation 😕.
Edited by tricksters - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome as always.
Loved reading the last few updates .
Sorry couldn't comment weekends are very busy with family.
You did justice to the consummation and the morning after.
Loved naughty Kunj and his princess.
TwiNJ fight ...hmmm.
Would love it if you update daily though.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey I am new to the forum so i really dont noe what RES means ? Can u tell me ?

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