Ficlet 1/50: Your hands are so much larger than mine

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For Kiara aka Jambread3
Happy Birthday Lovely!
Wishing you an amazing year ahead.
#14: Your hands are so much larger than mine.
Let it be known that a fever riddled Twinkle and heavy dose medication make for interesting late night conversations much at her expense. She would question anything and everything like a five-year old. Why?' being her favorite question.
Why is the sky blue? Why do fishes swim and birds fly? Why don't fishes fly and birds swim?

And then there are the occasional obvious facts that she would suddenly state and amuse herself with. Coconut is not actually a nut, Kunj! Amazing!' Kunj! The sun doesn't actually set! It's the earth that is rotating! Wow! Who would have thought?"

So that was what was happening for the past two days in the Sarna household. Kunj tending to a sick Twinkle and he has got to admit it, looking after her was more entertaining than worrying. Here he thought he would have to hold her hair back as she puked her guts out, maybe wake up in the middle of the night to give her, her medicines. But nope, it was actually more of sitting by her side and faking attention as she hoarsely rambled on and on about things she wouldn't dare speak of in her complete consciousness. In her defense her medications were very potent because only Twinkle can manage to get the combination of viral infection, stomach bug and fever all together, which caused her to be doozy and loopy through the entire day.

Currently Kunj was sitting beside her on the bed. He placed a hand on her forehead to check her fever. Twinkle who was so far peacefully dozing chose he exact time to grace the land of the living. Her eyes flicker over to meet his and then follows down the path of his hands. She grabs his fists in her little ones and in an action none of them anticipated, she kisses his knuckles.

It softened his heart to mush to see that even her loopy state she yet managed to shower her love on him. He was about to lean down, return the favor and kiss her forehead, when-

"Kunj! Your hands are so much larger than mine!"

And the moment was killed. Ruthlessly and adorably butchered!

"That is because I am bigger than you" he chuckled.

"Nope! Tum jhoot bol rahe ho! Humari age bilkul same hai. Matching-matching!"

"Haan par tujhe thoda bada hoon na?"

She scrunches up her nose in thought, trying to remember just how much elder he was to her. "Kitne bade?"

"6 mahine."

She sits up at that, shocked and clearly confused. She pushes herself towards him close enough that their shoulders touch each other. "Kunj height mahino mein nahi, centimeters mein count karte hai, samjhe?" she says pinching his cheeks.
Why does she have to be this loveable? Kunj found himself thinking and barely stifling a chuckle. "Twinkle, main tujhse, age, height, aur weight mein bhi bada hoon."

"Par Kunj still, your hands are so much larger than mine! Kaise?"

By now Kunj knows that it was futile trying to explain things to her so he switches his strategy. "Twinkle, dekh." He says and places his palm against hers. "Mere haath bade nahi hai. Dekh tere haath chote hai."

Twinkle squints her eyes and brings herself closer to their hands, trying to get a better view to examine them. She hums one or twice. "Haan Kunj, tum sahi keh rahe ho! Mere hands are smaller than yours!"

She pushes herself closer to him once again, this time planting her lips smack and sweetly on his cheek. "Muah! You are always right Kunj. Thank you." She mumbles in a yawn before placing her head on his chest and dozing off again.
Kunj finally gets to place a kiss of his own on her head. She is going to kill him with her cuteness one day.

THE END.
Well this marks the end of Day 1/50. I hope you all enjoyed.
Thank you for taking the time to read, like and comment. It's much appreciated.
Also here is the Link to the list, if you want to request a number: (50)Days of Summer
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its so amazing twinkle being sick that too in this way is utter cute
ohhh Twinkle hands are smaller than Kunj how sweetly Kunj manage to answer Twinkle
No our cutie pie Twinkle is not going to kill Kunj by her sweet antics but you all amazing writers are surely going to kill me with writing so adorable stuffs on Twinj
the end was also superb where at last Kunj gave her kiss back
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Posted: 9 years ago
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'll be back after reading...
I m back...
Such a Cute story...
Twinkle's Questions ...🤣
& Last line so true for both twinkle & kunj actually...

Nice start nvl...
Waiting for the other stories...
Edited by Shaveerkti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Indeed she is going to kill all of us with her sweetness and cuteness..
I agree to the fact that illness brings out the little kid inside us..
But this is so typiical twinkle and yet so diferent from other normal girls..
The depiction of twinj was Fab..
And i dnt have words to praise ur writing.. Its as usual brilliant..

Kunj played smart moov and knowing her fully came up with the most illogical answer and yesss twinkle accepted it .. Woowwiee..

M high on my Twinj feels right now.. N I miss them so badly..

Thanks for bringing them life in ur write up.. And plz continue to do so..

Looking forward..
Edited by docritu99 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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[font=verdana]I AM DONE OHRMYGODDD DUDE!!

This was so brilliantly written, so adorable and had the Twinkle we all love so much.

She's such s cutie errmygodd.

Btw, even someone didn't know yet followed the US 2016 presidential election cycle, they could sense the underlying pun in the title and Twinkle's question. [LOL][/font]
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.its amazing..
Twinkle is sooo good...
Kunj bichara...
Luved it sooo much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow mehvish this was so cute. Loved it.
The essence of cute twinj.
Twinkle was so cute with her weird question of ur hands r so larger than mine.
Loved kunj's anwer ur hands r smaller than mine and twinkle accepted it 😆.
Sick twinkle is so cute.
Twinj r adorbs.
Write more mehvish.
Thanks for pm.
Reminded me of sidmin s twinj.
Edited by tikit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG i am in love with your style of writing.
It was amazingly written. I loved it.
Twinkle is so cute with all her weird questions.
And kunj is just being kunj ❤️
this line literally cracked me up ''And the moment was killed. Ruthlessly and adorably butchered!''🤣
waiting eagerly for the next one😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww this was so adorable 😳
Twinkle and her questions 🤣 Such a cutie she's
Totally Loved reading this
Cant wait for the next one 😳
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yayyy so finally I got my gifttt! ❤️
You know I was actually waiting for you to post and wondering why you still hadn't.
Anyway coming to the ficklet,babe this is one of the most adorable ones I've ever read and I'm not even kidding.
Like it has all the elements of being the perfect shot.
Firstly,twinkle is so so so cute man and Kunj taking care of her is something I would always look upon to read. How cutely you portrayed them. Like literally from the dialogues to the thoughts of Kunj about twinkle.
This was indeed a delight to read. 👏
You write so well,eager to read the other ones,update a new one soon!
Thank you for this gift,I love it!
Love you buddy
P.S I'm sure by now you must be habitual to my long messages 😆 🤗
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago

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