Twinj FF - Distorted Destiny Completed on Pg 39 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: tikit

Oh kiara this was really nice. Finally twinj will meet yay. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.


Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sa86

Kiara u are successfully potrayed the sadness,the misery of Twinkle's character.It's really heart wrenching.

Waiting for next twist.


Thank you ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: amlavs

Oh my god..it sooo wonderful update..

Poor twinkle..I can feel her condition aft hearing such a surprisingly shocking news..
Wanna know Wats gonna happen next..

Plz update soon..


Yay,thank you 😉
I'll update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: maisarah

Kiara , kiara
It was so fabulous...
Kunj is bck ... Wphooo...
Lvd it a lot...
Updt soon nd pm me must...
Love u


Thank you love! I'll for sure pm you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Hey this is great and I love the regular updates! Twinkles breakdown was so realistic.

Are you going to go down the plastic surgery route? Because I want to imagine Kunj as Sid ok so no face change, it's a desperate request😆


Update soon !


Hey,thank you so much! Hahah don't worry,I won't be showing any plastic surgery drama,there's another twist! I'm sure you'll like it! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Happy reading x

Chapter 5

After finishing her meeting with the clients,twinkle straight went to the Sarna Mansion.

It was around 6 when she entered the kitchen. She asked all the servants to step aside because she wanted to make dinner for everyone all by herself. She couldn't figure out if she was sad or happy with coming to know that Kunj was alive. All she knew was she was happy because she was going to cook for all the family members.

She loved cooking for them and the fact that the whole family was going to come together and have dinner for the first time in these 5 years just increased her excitement.

She prepared all the favourite dishes of the family members. She was very surprised with her self when she still remembered their favourite dishes.

She quickly gave a final touch up to all the dishes and asked the servants to go and call all the family members for dinner while she placed the dishes on the table.

After about 5 mins,
Kaka - "Choti malkin,Sab logo ne aaney se mana kardiya hai,woh chahte hai ki mein unka khana upar bhejwadu"

As soon as he said this,twinkle saw Bebe and Usha coming down,they looked happy which mattered to her the most. She knew that when they come to know that Kunj is alive,they will be happier but she needed to tell them in such a way that it didn't cause any harm to them,it was a very sensitive topic to be spoken about.

Bebe - "Kya hua puttar? Tu itni uddas kyu lag rahi hai?"

Twinkle - "Woh babe kaka ne saabko khane ke liye bulaya Lekin koi nahi aaya."

Usha - "Bohot time ho Gaya hai jabse Sab aapne room mein khana pasand karte hai.ab yeh ek aadat ban chuki hai"

Bebe - "Oho Usha rani Agar yeh ek aadat hai Toh humme Iss Aadat ko badalna hoga. Twinkle puttar,tu chinta mat kar,mein unhe abhi bulati Hun"

Bebe - "MONU,SURJEETE,ANAND PUTAR,CHERRY PUTTAR SAB LOG ABHI KE ABHI NEECHE AAO"

Hearing Bebe scream on the top of her voice,all the men came rushing down the stairs. All of them sighed in relief when they saw Bebe hale and hearty in front of them but they saw a woman standing beside Bebe but her back was facing them so they couldn't see her face.

Surjeet - "Oho Bebe Kya hogaya,aisi bhi Kya aafat aagayi ke aapne Hume aise chilla kar bulaya?"

Bebe - "Oye surjeete,wadi khushi ki baat hai isiliye Toh neeche bulaya hai nahi Toh mujhe kissi Pagal kutte ne kata hai ki mein yu chilaungi?"

Twinkle by now had started giggling,she could sense Bebe coming back to normal.

Hearing her giggle the men's curiosity grew.

Manohar - "Woh Sab Toh theekh hai Bebe Lekin yeh ladki Kaun hai?"

Bebe - "Abhi batati Hun and with that she gave a slight wink to Usha which went unnoticed by the men"

Bebe - "Putar,Tu aise kyu Khadi hai,mud kar aapna pyara sa chehra Toh dikha"

With that twinkle turned around in *Tashan*

While manohar gasped in shock,Anand had a satisfied look on his face as if he knew that twinkle would come back some day. Cheery was happy and surjeet tauji bend his head down in guilt.

None of them had imagined twinkle to be here today. They thought they lost twinkle forever but maybe God had other plans.

Anand knew Kunj and twinkle were destined to be together and her journey in this house wasn't over yet.

"Twinkle beta",Manohar was the first to come out of the shock. Twinkle came forward and to touch his feet but manohar held her midway and hugged her. After all she wasn't his bahu but his daughter. He was so so glad to see her again,she had done so much for his family and he didn't even get a chance to thank her enough.

Next,Anand came forward and gave her a side hug.

Anand - "Mujhe Toh pata tha ki twinkle wapas zaroor aaygi"

Bebe and Usha smirked while twinkle smiled.

Cherry - "Oho Bhaiya aap bhi na bade good for nothing ho by God,yeh Toh mujhe bhi pata tha ki twinkle Babiji zaroor wapas aayengi Toh phir aap Akele Akele kyu credit le rahe ho."

And the whole family started laughing,cherry went and hugged twinkle.

Cherry - "Welcome back twinkle Babiji"

All this while,surjeet had his head bent down in shame.after kunj's death and twinkle leaving the house,surjeet came to know about Anita's real intentions. She left him and his house 2 days after kunj's funeral. She confessed to him how she only used him to take revenge from Leela taneja and twinkle and she never even loved him in the first place. Surjeet was broken,he was so ashamed of himself. He recalled all those hatred words he used for twinkle,the time when he thought she had robbed the chain and when he was going to slap her. He felt guilty and he regretted his every action but he didn't have enough guts to go upto twinkle and apologize to her.he feared that if twinkle didn't forgive him then he won't be able to live with that forever.

Sensing surjeet standing there lost in his thoughts,twinkle walked up to him and touched his feet. He felt even more guilty this time. This girl whom he did so much wrong to still gave him the same amount of respect. He felt guilty for questioning her morals and values taught to her by her mother.

Twinkle - "Kaise hai aap tauji?"

Bebe knew that surjeet had changed and she was happy that everything was coming back to normal. The broken pieces were somehow coming back together.

Surjeet - "Mein theekh Hun puttar,tu Kaisi hai?"

Twinkle - "Mein bhi theekh Hun" she smiled.

As she was turning around,
Surjeet - "Twinkle putar"

Twinkle - "Jee tauji?"

Surjeet walked up to her and stood in front of her folding his hand and bending his head down,

"Twinkle putar,please menu maaf karde. Meine Tera saath kitna bura kita phir bhi tune kabhi kuch nahi Kahan. Meine tujhe humesha Galat samjha. Meine humesha uss Anita ki baat suni Lekin Teri aur kunj ki nahi. Tu mujhe kehti Rahi ki Anita Acchi nahi hai par phir bhi Meine Teri baat nahi mani. Pls mujhe maaf karde putar,pls mujhe maaf karde."

Twinkle held surjeet's folded hands and continued.

"Aap Kaisi baat kar rahe hai tauji.aap kyu mujhese maafi mang rahe hai.Aap Toh mujhe bade hai na aur Bhala bade kabhi chotose maafi mangte hai kya? Aap please yun iss tarah haath mat jodiye."

With that surjeet wiped away his tears and kept his hand on twinkle's head and smiled.

Surjeet - "Rab kare ki tujhse iss duniya ki haar Khushi mile."

All the family members were so happy to witness the scene Infront of them.

Twinkle - "Accha chaliye,Baaki batein baad mein karenge,philhal hum Sab dinner karte hai,aaj mein Sab ke liye aapne haathon se Khana banaya hai."

Hearing This,cherry's face lit up.

Manohar - "Arre wah aaj ka Khana twinkle ne banaya hai?"

Usha - "Ji"

Cherry - "Arre Toh hum aise good for nothing ki tarah kyu khade hai? Chalo Khana khathe hai."

Bebe - "Haan Haan khathe hai warna cherry ki pet mein Jo chuhe hai woh bhangda karenge." And she twisted cherry's ears.

All the family members sat together on the table like old times and twinkle started serving food to all of them. Seeing the variety of food Infront of him,cherry's mouth watered.after serving food,twinkle sat down too and all of them spoke about random things.

Manohar told twinkle about how the wedding planning business was going while cherry told her how he received 10 proposals for marriage in these 5 years. It felt like old times,all were laughing together enjoying themselves.

Twinkle's eyes watered seeing them and her mind wandered back to kunj. She looked at the photo that was hung on the wall Infront of her. It was of kunj,her heart ached for him. How much kunj wanted to see his family happy together and when they actually were happy,he wasn't there to witness it.

She slowly put her hand on the seat of the chair beside her. It was of kunj. She wished kunj was there and their family would have been complete.

"Kunj Tum hamesha chahte the na ki hamari family hamesha ek saath rahe aur Khush Rahe? Dekho kunj,aaj hamara yeh sapna pura ho raha hai. Kash Tum yahan hote yeh Sab dekhne ke liye. Please jaldi wapas aa jao kunj,mere paas,Apni family ke pass",thought twinke.

Twinkle knew she had to tell everybody about kunj being alive. She had to stay strong for that.

She had decided that once their dinner was completed,she would tell everyone the truth.
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Precap - twinkle tells everyone about Kunj being alive.
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Nice Update

It's amazing
I can't wait for Kunj to enter d story
Can't wait for d next part
Edited by harshi2000 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Kiara its a amazing update..
The family moments are soo beautiful..
Luved the surjeet-twinkle convo..
Can't wait to see Kunj entry..
Update next part soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Amazing...
Left us on a cliffhanger...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Kiara it's so nice to see the bonding beween Sarnas & their choti nu.
Actually TEI Storyline should be progress at this way.
But the needed drama destroy the whole story in our fav serial.😕
Edited by sa86 - 9 years ago

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