Twinj FF - Distorted Destiny Completed on Pg 39 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sa86

Kiara it's so nice to see the bonding beween Sarnas & their choti nu.

Actually TEI Storyline should be progress at this way.
But the needed drama destroy the whole story in our fav serial.😕


Yeah man 💔 instead of showing such a senseless drama,they could have shown some happy family moments...how I miss the old TEI 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow kiara i must say this was awesome. Hope cvs ccould have shown something like this. Waiting for kunjs entry. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Just read all the parts in a single go.
This was actually brilliant.
You are an amazing writer
You seriously rocked. These chapters were really good. Loved them to the core.
I love how your ff is turning out.
Everything is just so perfect and beautiful.
I so wish this actually happened in the show but alas.
Continue soon. Eagerly waiting to read more. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
nice story
I totally loved it read all the parts
and truly saying everything was superb
first part is my favorite one because manvi's character was so nice and all behna's scene was so cute
now I just can't wait for Kunj re-entry
plzzz update soon
i really wanna know why Kunj is in hospital
and I have sent you a buddy request plzzz do accept it and send a PM when you update it or write another story because I like your writing a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: tikit


Wow kiara i must say this was awesome. Hope cvs ccould have shown something like this. Waiting for kunjs entry. Continue soon.


Thank you! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: roshni101

Just read all the parts in a single go.
This was actually brilliant.
You are an amazing writer
You seriously rocked. These chapters were really good. Loved them to the core.
I love how your ff is turning out.
Everything is just so perfect and beautiful.
I so wish this actually happened in the show but alas.
Continue soon. Eagerly waiting to read more. 😳


Roshni you have no idea how happy I got after seeing your post! This means a lot a lot to me. I was feeling so low since last night but you made me smile,thank you so much! Love you 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

nice story
I totally loved it read all the parts
and truly saying everything was superb
first part is my favorite one because manvi's character was so nice and all behna's scene was so cute
now I just can't wait for Kunj re-entry
plzzz update soon
i really wanna know why Kunj is in hospital
and I have sent you a buddy request plzzz do accept it and send a PM when you update it or write another story because I like your writing a lot


Thank you so so much love! I'm glad you liked it! I'll post as soon as I can. Ive already accepted your buddy request,I'll for sure pm you! Your kind words made my day,thank you 🤗 love you
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay guys so I wasn't going to update so soon but since it's my birthday week and usually my celebrations go on throughout the week,I thought of giving you guys a small treat since I'm getting such a warm response from you'll. I'll try to update everybody. So here you go,happy reading x

Chapter 6

After dinner,twinkle had called up leela and asked her to come to Sarna mansion bringing along the other family members too.

As soon as they arrived,while the taneja's and Sarna's had a greeting session,twinkle waited patiently. She understood the depth of their feelings,it had been so long since they had met but right now there was something which was even more important than their reunion,disclosing the truth about kunj's being alive.

Soon The Sarna's and Taneja's made themselves comfortable in the hall to listen to twinkle's special announcement.

Seeing them finally stable,twinkle began,

Twinkle - "Toh meine aap Sab ko yahan..."

Cherry - "Arre arre twinkle babiji aapko interrupt karne ke liye mafi chahata Hun,bas ek min. Oho Bhaiya pls Zara mujhe aapke jaga pe bethne do na,woh meri Jagah hai!"

And with that the chaos started again

Bebe - "Oho cherry putar tu sach mein na good for nothing hai. Nalayak kahi ka."

Finally Anand and cherry exchanged their seats.

Twinkle sighed and started again when,

Pinni mami - "Oho twinkle putar one minute Bhai. Oho Didi ji dekhiye aapke Bhai ko jabse yahan aaye hai chocolate pe chocolate khaye jaa rahe hai. Meri Toh death hi hojayegi."

Manvi - "Ek min Ek min kya kissi ne chocolate kahan?"

Raman mama - "Haan Manu putar,mere paas Bohot saare chocolates hai,aaja."

Mahi saw twinkle sitting with her hand on her head with a tired look on her face.

Mahi - "Please aap Sab Beth jaiye,di kuch kehna chahati hai!"
But the soft one she is,no one was able to hear her.

Manvi went and sat with Raman and started eating the chocolates.

Twinkle was now frustrated,her family was behaving unbelievable.they were acting like they were some runaway animals of the zoo.

Twinkle - "AAGAR AAP SAB KA HO GAYA HO TOH MEIN KUCH BOLU"

Everyone went silent with twinkle's outburst.

Sensing that her outburst had worked,she took the opportunity and continued,

Twinkle - "Dekhiye abhi mein aapse Jo kuch Bhi kehne wali Hun usse Ek dum dhyaan se suniyega."

Twinkle started narrating whatever had happened between her and the stranger,from the phone call to the meeting at the coffee shop,she gave the tiniest of the details excluding her breakdown obviously.

By the Time she was done,the sight she saw in front of her was heartbreaking and somewhat expected.

She could see how Bebe and Usha had hugged each other and were crying their hearts out,manohar clutched the sides of the sofa,tears brimming down his eyes,Anand and cherry shared a warm happy brotherly hug,surjeet thanked the Lord while mahi was crying too.

Leela ran towards the photo of wahe guruji,

Leela - "Hayee wahe guruji tera lakh lakh shukar hai ki kunj Zinda hai aur sahi Salamat hai. Aaj meri ardaas rang layi. Sach kehte hai log,tere ghar mein der hai par ander nahi."

Twinkle fell on the couch and cried herself out. She couldn't stay strong any longer. She needed to see kunj,she needed to make sure that he was alright and she needed to touch him. She couldn't understand these feelings,she loved kunj more than anything in this world and no one could ever take his place but she couldn't gather enough courage to face him.

She felt a hand on her shoulder,

Raman mama - "Putar bas ab aur nahi rona. Jitna ghum tujhe dekhna tha na tune dekh Liya hai,ab sirf khushiyaan hi khushiyaan hai."

Manvi was happy,she knew how much twinkle craved for kunj. She had heard a lot of stories about twinkle and kunj's tashan by bubbly. She was finally going to meet her kunj jeeju.

Surjeet - "Putar par menu Ek baat samjh nahi aai,agar kunj theekh hai Toh phir hum usse hospital Milne kyu jaa rahe hai?"

Twinkle - "Sach kahu tauji Toh mujhe Bhi nahi pata,humare saare sawaal ke jawab,Hume Kal milenge."

Bebe - "Koi na putar,philhal humme sojana chahiye Kal kunj se Milne Bhi Toh jaana hai na."

Everybody smiled,a smile that reached their eyes.A smile that indicated the contentment and satisfaction in their hearts. Their son was finally coming back to them.

Everybody knew that they were far from sleeping today,tomorrow was going to be a very special day.

They didn't know what the next day had in store for them but they knew one thing for sure,everybody was going to sleep with a smile on their face.
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Precap - twinkle's confusion and the most awaited,our hero,Kunj's re entry.
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Kiara did I miss your birthday?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy birthday kiara. Cant wait for kunjs entry finally. Just update asap.

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