Twinj FF - Distorted Destiny Completed on Pg 39 - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maisarah

Hey kiara,
Sry fr being late with the rply...
Dude u r such an amazng wrtr...
My eys bcme teary while rdng it...
So heart tchng ...
And thnks fr the pms ...
Totally in lve wth it ...


Hey Aura,hope you don't mind me calling you that!
No problem,don't be sorry!
Thank you so much 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
So I caught up again, as much as I love daily updates, it's so hard to keep track of them at times, thanks for the PM dude!


I'm so many feels because naughty Kunj does all sorts of the things to my heart. His mischievousness in the bathroom, I cant ! ☺️

I love how you've worked around this with the storyline, Twinkle blaming herself is something I reckon she would do so bang on bruh, and of course Kunj won't let her do a siyappa like that ever 😆

Looking forward to the coming parts. Sorry for late replies but I swear I love this story right now 😎
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

So I caught up again, as much as I love daily updates, it's so hard to keep track of them at times, thanks for the PM dude!



I'm so many feels because naughty Kunj does all sorts of the things to my heart. His mischievousness in the bathroom, I cant !☺️

I love how you've worked around this with the storyline, Twinkle blaming herself is something I reckon she would do so bang on bruh, and of course Kunj won't let her do a siyappa like that ever😆

Looking forward to the coming parts. Sorry for late replies but I swear I love this story right now😎


Thank you! 😃
No problem I'll pm you and keep you updated 😛
And I'll update soon,thanks again
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jambread3


Thank you so much meri behna,you are one of the sweetest people on this forum 😳
No precap because I want you guys to stay curious 😆

but your precaps always makes me curious and without precap m so so hungry for the update 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Here goes the next part,happy reading x

Chapter 15

Twinkle and Kunj didn't wanna pull away from each other.After waiting for so long,they were finally one again.

Slowly twinkle came out of their gloomy trance and started

Twinkle - "Kunj mujhe tumse ek baat puchni hai"

Kunj - "Puch na meri Siyaapa queen"

And with that Kunj kissed twinkle on her cheek earning a giggle from her.

Twinkle - "Oho Kunj suno na"

"Haan twinkle" said Kunj and placed a kiss on the other cheek too.

Suddenly when she realised Kunj was moving towards her lips,she covered her mouth with her hand.

Twinkle - "Nahi pehle tum meri baat sunoge"

Kunj - "Uff Accha theekh hai Bol Lekin jaldi,you see mere pass time nahi hai,I have to shower lots of love on my wifey!"

Twinkle - "Acchaji?"

Kunj - "Haanji!"

Twinkle - "Accha theekh hai"

and with that twinkle moved closer to Kunj and started playing with his shirt's buttons.

Without meeting his gaze,she started

Twinkle - "Kunj woh Pallavi hain na"

That's it,Kunj knew it.So this is what his wifey had to talk about. He had to admit,she looked so adorable when she was nervous.

Kunj - "Haan twinkle,Pallavi kya?"

Twinkle - "Woh Kunj,Pallavi tumhari Bohot Acchi friend hai kya?"

Kunj - "Haan Bohot Bohot Bohot Acchi friend hai woh meri! Kitna khayal rakhti hai na mera"

At that moment Twinkle looked up to Kunj. Her eyes showed fear. She was afraid of losing him and the fact that it wasn't her but some other woman who took care of him made her scared.what if someone replaced her?

Twinkle - "Oh.Im sure woh Acchi hai"

Kunj - "Haan Lekin woh tu Nahi hai twinkle."

Kunj knew. From the very beginning,they never had to voice out their insecurities. They just knew.

Kunj - "No matter koi Bhi meri zindagi mein aai,aur chahe kitni Bhi pretty aur Acchi ho mein kabhi usse dekh Nahi paunga. Pata hai kyun?"

Twinkle - "Kyun?"

Kunj - "Kyuki woh tu Nahi hai twinkle. Chahe koi Bhi aai woh Teri Jagah Nahi le Paiga. Twinkle Jitna tu mujhe special feel karwati hai utna koi Nahi karwa Paiga.Jab mein Tere saath hota Hun na toh mein Ek behetar insan bana chahata Hun. Tu mere Andar woh feelings Jagahti hai Jo koi Nahi Jagah sakta. Tujhe kabhi Bhi insecure feel karne ki zaroorat Nahi hai,you're irreplaceable in my life Mrs.Twinkle Kunj Sarna."

Twinkle who had started crying by now jumped on him and hugged him tightly.

Kunj steadied himself before they could lose their balance and fall and hugged her even tighter

Twinkle - "I love you Kunj I love you so much"

Twinkle cried and Cried while chanting 'I love you' on his shoulder.

Kunj calmed her down and buried his face in her hair.

Kunj - "I know,I love you too and I'm never letting you go."
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Back in Sarna house,Leela,Usha and Bebe kept pacing back and forth awaiting Twinj's arrival

Leela - "Oho kinna time hogaya hai,kahan reh Gaye yeh dono"

Usha - "Leelaji mujhe toh na Bohot ghabrahat go rahi hai,kahi kuch..."

Bebe - "Na Usha rani na,Kuch bura Nahi Hoga.Humare Bacche Bohot samjhdar hai,Sab theekh ho jayega. Humme sona chahiye Bohot raat ho gayi hai."

Leela - "Haan Ushaji Bebe theekh keh rahi hai,mujhe Bhi ghar Jana chahiye,Manvi aur Mahi Bhi ghar par akeli hai.Raman,pinni aur bubbly Bhi bahar Gaye hai"

With that the ladies bid each other their goodbyes.
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After their little reconciliation session twinkle and Kunj moved towards their car heading back home.

During the entire journey,Twinkle had a content smile on her face.A smile that indicated that she had the whole world in her hand now.

When Kunj saw this, he carefully took twinkle's hand and entwined her fingers with his and suddenly the journey became even more merrier.

Sarna mansion :

Kunj parked the car outside Sarna mansion and got out to pull the car's door for his lady love.

Twinkle smiled at his chivalry. She always wondered how did her man manage to be so perfect.

Kunj - "Chal twinkle ghar chalte hai"

and with that Kunj took her hand and led her to Sarna mansion

Twinkle pulled their hands making Kunj stop

Twinkle - "Haan Kunj ghar chalte hai Lekin Tum aapne ghar jao aur mein apne"

Kunj - "Hey Bhagwan! Twinkle tune phirse aapna natak shuru kardiya? Teri problem kya hai twinkle,Tera ghar Sarna mansion hai,Taneja house Nahi okay?"

Twinkle - "Okay baba Lekin Kunj abhi Bohot Raat ho Chuki hai,mein kal aapna saman lekar aaungi theekh hai?"

Kunj - "Not theekh hai. Twinkle yaar dekh mein tujhse aur door Nahi Reh sakta,Tu ghar Chal"

Twinkle - "Oho Kunj samjho na"

Kunj - "Samjh tu twinkle! Dekh Bohot Raat ho Chuki hai,agar tu abhi door bell bajaeji Toh Sab utt jayenge aur sabki neend kharab ho jayegi"

This made twinkle wonder. Sensing that twinkle was melting with his words,Kunj continued

Kunj - "Aur dekh mere paas Toh ghar ki Chabi Bhi hai. Tu fikar mat kar mein maa ko message kardunga ki Tu mere Saat hai Sarna mansion mein. Okay?"

Twinkle didn't say anything,she kept thinking

Kunj - "Yaar twinkle yaar jaldi okay Bol na Bohot neend aarahi hai. Jab Dekho irritate karti rehti hai"

Twinkle - "Oh hello,tumne mujhe irritating bulaya?"

Kunj - "Arre yaar twinkle words ko chodh aur feelings ko samjh aur tujhe ladna hai na Toh room me chalke ladthe hai."

Twinkle - "Okay theekh hai chalo" and with that twinkle and Kunj reached their room.

As Kunj closed their door behind careful enough to not make any noise,twinkle started

Twinkle - "Haan Toh Tum kya keh rahe the"

Kunj moved forward and placed his hand on twinkle's waist pulling her closer to his chest.

Kunj - "Ji wifeyji Toh mein yeh keh raha tha ki aap na Bohot hot ho"

Twinkle - "Haw Kunj Tum Jhoot kyun Bol rahe ho?Tumne Toh mujhe irritating kaha tha na,mein irritating Hun kya?"

"Nahi Nahi bilkul Nahi" said Kunj pulling her closer so that their chests touched and no air could pass through them.

Kunj - "Meri itni majal ki mein Mrs.Twinkle Kunj Sarna se kuch kahu"

"Good boy" said twinkle pulling Kunj's cheeks

Kunj - "Accha Chal ab mujhe ek kiss de"

Twinkle - "Haw Tum Toh itne forward ho"

"Haw Kya haw,Tu Toh aise baat kar rahi hai Jaise tere pati ne Nahi tere padosi ne tujhse kiss mangi hai. Aur hum Kya naya Nahi kar rahe hai. Humne Toh isse Bhi zyada cheeze Kari thi Goa mein" said Kunj winking at her
While Twinkle's mouth opened wide.

How naughty was her handsome husband

"Waise agar tujhe yaad Nahi hai Toh yaad dilon?" Asked Kunj taking her hand and kissing it ever so lightly.

"Nahi Nahi mujhe yaad hai Sab kuch. Ab chalo sau jaate hai" said twinkle pretending to yawn and look sleepy

Kunj smirked,he exactly knew what she was doing.

Kunj in his mind,
"yeh ladki Bhi na ek din mujhe Pagal kardegi.Pehle itni adorable lagti hai aur phir expect karti hai ki mein aapne aap ko control karu.Chalo aaj isse chodh deta Hun,waise Bhi kal mere surprise ke baad twinkle mujhse door Nahi reh Paigi.kal Raat ka intezaar rahega Mrs.Sarna"

Twinkle - "Oho pati devji Kahan kho Gaye? Asked twinkle snapping her fingers near Kunj's face.

Kunj - Haan Haan kuch Nahi Chal so jate hai"

Twinkle was surprised,didn't he wanna do stuff to her 2 mins back?

Twinkle in her mind,
"Arre isse Kya hogaya.Ab tak Toh itne Romantic mood mein tha suddenly Kya hogaya? Isse jhatke watke lagte hai Kya? Anyway mujhe Kya,his loss."

Both Kunj and twinkle positioned themselves on their side of the bed.

After Messaging Leela about Twinkle's stay in Sarna mansion,Kunj came near twinkle and wrapped his arms around her waist and placed a kiss on her jaw.

Kunj - "Twinkle?"

Twinkle - "Hmm?"

Kunj - "Kya kal mein jab uthunga,Kya tu tabhi mere paas hogi?"

Kunj's this innocent question made Twinkle's heart flinch.

Twinkle - "Haan Kunj,mein yahi hongi"

Kunj - "Promise?"

Twinkle - "Promise."
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Precap - Kunj's surprise and romance at night.


Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Read the update
Was very nice
Loved it
Update soon
And thanks for the pm
Happy birthday again
Love
Sayli
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was sooo nice...
Twinkle is insecured of Kunj pallavi friendship..
And kunjs explanation was bang on..
Twinj are together for ever..
Am sooo excited for their romance..
Upload jaldi plz..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww... this was soo cute and adorablee!!! 😳
Loved it!! 😊
Specially that part when Twinkle gets nervous while asking about Pallavi.. OMG!!
I was imagining Jas' expressions .. that was too cute !!! 😆😳
Bin kuch kahe ..Kunj ne jaanli hain Twinkle ke mann ki baat!!! And the way he explained her importance in his life.. aww..
That hug!!! ❤️
My Baes!!!
I personally loved this update a lott!!
Thanks for the pm!!!
Keep going ..
I'm way more excited than Twinkle for Kunj's surprise ..😆 and romance...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kiara can i 🤗 u for this. Loved it.
Aww kunj twinkle r so cute.
Twinkle insecure abt kunj pallavis relation.
Kunj explained well that no one can be twinkle kunj sarna. Loved it. She is irreplaceable.
I imagined sidmin as twinj.
Waiting for romance.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon. Update jaldi jaldi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a sweet and lovely chapter!!!
My heart did a few somersaults on having naughty Kunj and teasing Twinkle back!! *sigh*
It was perfect!

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