Twinj FF - Distorted Destiny Completed on Pg 39 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh God!Kiara,
How couldn't I noticed that.
U gave the hints again and again but I am kind of dumbo.😆
I love the twists of New beginings,New equation in old relation.
There are so much potential in the upcoming twist.
Loveee it totally.👏
Actually in reality it's time for goodbye of Yuvi character(though Zain is good actor).
When CV understand this?Only God knows.

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update Kiara
Kunj is such a sweetheart
twinj's emotions when they didn't spoke to each other was so easily imaginable by the way you write
ohhh twinkle wants to drift apart as she thinks she is curse for Kunj but m happy that God have different plans
Thanks for the PM
keep updating like this
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit

Oh kiara loved the update.

Loved twinjs thinking oh so sad abt kunj. Kunj is such a sweetheart and cutiepie. Feeling sad for twinkle but slowly drifting apart😭seriously.
Kiara m loving it. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.


Thank you so much 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

Twinkle wants to stay away...drift apart slowly😭

God has a Different plan...😳
Nice update...
Tanks for the pm...dear


Thank you cutie 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: amlavs

Heart touching update kiara..

Ur way of writing I must appreciate...
Twinj are sooo in love..
Twinkle poor baby she is trying to move away from him..
Kunj is willing to give her all happiness..
S let's see Wats gonna happen..
Thx for pm dear..
Luved it..continue soon..


Thank you so much,means a lot 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sa86

Oh God!Kiara,

How couldn't I noticed that.
U gave the hints again and again but I am kind of dumbo.😆
I love the twists of New beginings,New equation in old relation.
There are so much potential in the upcoming twist.
Loveee it totally.👏
Actually in reality it's time for goodbye of Yuvi character(though Zain is good actor).
When CV understand this?Only God knows.


Hahah thank you,I'm glad you liked it 😉 yeah man seriously they should end yuvi's character,it doesn't have anything left only,yes zain is a really nice actor
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

amazing update Kiara
Kunj is such a sweetheart
twinj's emotions when they didn't spoke to each other was so easily imaginable by the way you write
ohhh twinkle wants to drift apart as she thinks she is curse for Kunj but m happy that God have different plans
Thanks for the PM
keep updating like this


Thank you so much love,I'll update as soon as I can 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aaa. ...this story is just so perfect.
You have written everything so realistically that I forget it's fiction. The dialogues and the emotions are brilliant
Amazing job!!!
👏
Eagerly looking forward to more..

Again, brilliant job buddy!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Aaa. ...this story is just so perfect.

You have written everything so realistically that I forget it's fiction. The dialogues and the emotions are brilliant
Amazing job!!!
👏
Eagerly looking forward to more..

Again, brilliant job buddy!


Thank you so so much,lots of love to you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy reading x

Chapter 10

The next morning had got a new ray of hope.

Happiness was back in Sarna house again.

The morning was a very chaotic affair.Usha and Bebe had ordered the servants to make all of Kunj's favourite dishes,they made sure that the house looked extra clean today. The men decided to stay home and welcome Kunj back.

Usha - "Bebe mein na Kunj ke liye uska favourite gajar ka halwa banati Hun"

Bebe smiled.

Meanwhile in taneja house,there was a similar scenario. Raman had ordered all the different kinds of Indian sweets from the best shop in Amritsar,after all their Damad was coming back home.

In twinkle's room

Manvi - "Wow di,kunj jiju aaj wapas aa rahe hai,I'm so excited yay"

Twinkle giggled at manvi's innocence.

Mahi - "Di chalo jaldi maa bula rahi hai,Sarna mansion jaana hai,jiju bas abhi aate hi honge"

Twinkle - "Haan Haan chalo"

Twinkle looked at the mirror one last time,checking if she was looking fine

Manvi - "Oho di aaj Toh bada self conscious ho rahe ho,Hayeee yeh pyar Bhi kya cheez hai"

Mahi slapped manvi on her arm for her teasing when she saw twinkle turn a shade redder.

Back to the Sarna house,the whole family had gathered in the hall awaiting Kunj's arrival.

Kunj had requested them to stay at home suggesting that he would come back alone. After a lot of protests by the family members,they had finally agreed.

Suddenly they heard a car honk at the gate which indicated that Kunj was home. Usha rushed to get the thali from the kitchen.

There came Kunj looking as dashing as ever.

It always made twinkle wonder,how did he look like a Greek god even at such times.
Manvi gasped seeing kunj. She was told by bubbly that kunj was handsome but in reality he was just another synonym of perfection. She felt proud of her twinkle di's choice.

Kunj came forward to hug all of them. While hugging them,his eyes were only stuck on twinkle who was standing at the corner of the hall.

Even today by looking at her,his heart beat faster,thought kunj.

Everyone noticed that kunj had a small bouquet of flowers in his hand and smirked knowing what was following next.

Kunj walked up to twinkle and pushed the flowers in front of her

The flowers were beautiful and also twinkle's favorite.

Twinkle blushed and took the flowers from him.

She whispered a thank you to him.

Suddenly manvi comes to twinkle,

Manvi - "Wow di kitne beautiful flowers hain,I must say jiju ki choice Bohot acchi hai" and with that she winked at her elder sister

Twinkle blushed way harder when realizing that manvi was teasing them.

Kunj was confused,he didn't know who manvi was. Sensing this,

Manvi - "Oho mein bhi kitni Buddhu Hun,mein toh apna introduction dena bhul hi gayi. Hi I'm manvi taneja,naam toh Suna hi hoga,mein aapki biwi ki sabse choti behen Hun."

As she said this,kunj looked at twinkle for approval of what manvi just said who In return nodded indicating that she will tell him everything later.

Kunj - "Hi manvi,nice to meet you!"

Manvi - "Waise jiju aap na bade hot ho"
Everyone started giggling by then

Kunj - "Accha ji meri choti saali ji bhi Bohot pretty hai."

"Aww thank you" and with that they shared a side hug.

Everybody was so glad to see how much kunj and manvi had bonded in such a short period of time.

Bebe - "Ek kaam kar putar tu aapne kamre mein jaake aaram kar,twinkle putar Tu kunj ke saath ja."

Twinkle - "Ji Bebe."

Twinkle and kunj's room was still the same. They hadn't removed anything from the room,from the pictures to the vases,everything was left intact.

When they entered they felt a wave of nostalgia rush through their bodies. This was where they had started their journey. From the fights to the siyapaas,from calling each other names to realizing their love for each other.It seemed like even the room had craved for their presence.

Slowly kunj went and sat on the bed.

Twinkle brought a bowl of soup,sat beside him and started feeding him.they didn't say anything,like always their eyes did their talking.

The eyes mentioned how much they missed each other.

As twinkle was blowing on the spoon of soup for him,kunj slowing took her free hand and intertwined his fingers with hers. And in that moment,they felt complete.

They didn't wanna talk about anything and the most comfortable thing for them to be would be their presence for each other.

The whole feeding session went on like this with twinkle feeding him and their eyes and hands locked together.
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Late at night

Bebe - "Twinkle putar Tu yeh Kya keh rahi hai? Tu aapne maike mein rahegi? Putar yeh Tera ghar aur Tu kunj ki woti hai,Tu usse aise kaise akela chodh sakti hai?"

Twinkle - "Bebe mein janti Hun ke Jo main kar rahi Hun who shayad Galat hai lekin mere paas aur koi raasta Nahi hai. Mein kunj ko aur dard Nahi de sakti,aur agar mein yahan rohungi toh usse firse hurt kar doungi"

Usha - "Twinkle,kunj tumse Bohot pyar karta hai,woh tumse door rehne ka ghum bardash Nahi kar payega"

Twinkle - "Jaanti Hun mummy Ji lekin mein yeh Sab kunj ki bhalie ke liye kar rahi Hun. Please understand"

Bebe - "Theekh hai putar,tu ja"

Usha - "Lekin Bebe.."

Bebe - "Nahi usha rani jaane de usse,mujhe aapni nu par pura bharosa hai,woh Jo kuch bhi karegi sahi karegi."

Usha didn't have a choice but to stay mum.

Twinkle - "Mein ek baar kunj toh dekh kar Aati Hun phir kaal seedha yahan aaungi"
With that twinkle started walking towards their room.

Kunj was asleep,his medication had made him really drowsy. It's the best time to talk to him thought twinkle.

Twinkle went towards him and started admiring him lovingly. He was her everything,she never knew that she would ever fall in love so hard that she wouldn't be able to get up only.

"Kunj,kash mein tumhari bahon mein puri zindagi beeta pati. Kunj Tum hi mere Sab kuch ho.aaj tak Tum ne mujhe humesha sirf pyar diya hai,aur Maine? Meine sirf tumhe dard diya. Ho sake toh please mujhe maaf karde na."

Twinkle by now had started crying badly.fearing that she would wake kunj up she ran outside.

And As for kunj,he was busy dreaming about his siyaapa queen.
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Precap - Pallavi comes to meet kunj,twinkle gets jealous.

Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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