SS: Invisible Angel *Updated Part Two* - Page 6

Originally posted by: Sdea

It's 3 am at my place and I saw your comment about uploading part 2 and I just couldn't go to sleep. And it was sooo worth it.
I literally love the way you write. You make even simple part sound so beautiful. It was wonderfully written. So simple yet so nice.So the major drama and angst is for the next one. And even though you updated just now am going to beg you upload soon. ❤️

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

I'm sometimes baffled at how others give such normal comments when I'm such a emotional mess after reading.

Let me just say quickly that the gym ball scene was just too much. My heart actually skipped a beat bro, I actually had to hold my hand to my chest to calm the rapid beating because omg I was so terrified. How do you manage to evoke these emotions in me?

Kunj's happiness breaks my heart. He's so happy and excited and even Bebe. But Twinkle, Oh God! Having to put on a strong front just so no one else starts worrying regardless of being in that excruciating amount of pain. I cant. The bathroom scene 🥺

Inayah, I dont know if I should praise you for such in depth writing or say that I hate you for making me feel like this but this was amazing. My hearts still beating really fast btw.

Originally posted by: teddyyy

I DON'T KNOW IF IM READY EITHER NEMO, I'm going I'm going 😆

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Yeah thank you just HAD to start with Kunj baby doing a little countdown right?! I'm not supposed to be emotional after the first line itself Inayah. Haye mera dil. I didn't cry this time but dude not fair, why a stillborn?!!?!? This is so horrible, they are both so happy and it's so close to the due date. And omg Twinkle's pain :( She should have said something but then I understand her fear and hesitance. I can't imagine Kunj's reaction at finding her in such a position. How's he gonna take care of her when he's the most excited one? My feels. Like when she almost got hurt and he yelled at her and then Twinkle being strong for him, I can't.

Remember we were talking about how a piece is good if we can visualize it? Every second dude, so I loved this part as much as the first, I thought you did a splendid job! Truly excited for the next part all while afraid for the pain haha. Your writing skills are brilliant

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

This made me feel so heartbroken and you're telling me that you're only going to rip my heart into a thousand shreds in your next update? The sadist in me is so excited but my heart is already crying🥺

I give praise where its due, trust me on that 😆

Originally posted by: -WalkThatWay-

I hope I can do that with my next update 😆

Your a true sweetheart you do know that don't you x

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

You have a way with words so you probably will 😆

Thanks dude, its so sad that none of my family see me for the gem that I am 🤣