TwiNj FF : Yeh Laal Ishq (Part 2 = Page 5) - Page 3

Originally posted by: kusharberry

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Originally posted by: Duumps

Very interesting concept .

Please continue soon.

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TwiNj FF : By Arpita

[~ Yeh Laal Ishq ~]

Part : 1

The house was filled with only darkness...Only one room was not completely dark thanks to the TV...

A middle aged woman was sitting on a sofa watching the "Breaking News" on a news channel...

Twinkle entered her lifeless body into the house...And walked directly towards that room...

She sat on the floor near the feet of the woman...

Looking down at the floor she somehow managed to speak > "Suna Na Apne...Maine Apke Bete Ko Maar Dala...Maar Dala"

The lady refused to react on her words...She was still looking at the TV where a pic of her son was flashing...

"Inh...Inhi Haatoon Se Goli Mara Maine Ushe...Apne Inhi Haatoon Se..." > Twinkle told looking at her hands

"Aur Main...I Did Not Even Cry For Him...Main Bilkul Nehi Roo Rahi Thi, Trust Me...Mere Aankhoo Se Tab Bhi Aanshoo Nehi Gire Jab Woh Mere Godh Mein Lete Hue Keh Raha Tha Ki Twinkle I Am Not A Criminal... I Am Not A Crimi..." > She couldn't able to complete the sentence...A tear dropped from her eyes...

She placed her head on the woman's lap...

"Per Abhi Mujhe Bohat Rona Aaraha Hai...Aab Tho Main Thoda Roo Sakti Hnu Na BEBE?" > The innocence in her voice forced Bebe to react

Bebe placed her hand on her head & finally Twinkle broke down into tears...She felt a drop of Bebe's tears on her forehead she knew even her Bebe needs a shoulder to cry on but she had no strength left in her...She felt weak...Very very weak...

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Precap : She felt a tight slap on her cheek...But it did not hurt her...She felt an weird satisfaction...

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Very very short chapter I know, Well this chapter is short because before "Revealing" anything I would like to know all of your views/predictions, what do you guys think, WHY Twinkle had to fired the bullet on Him? And who is that "HIM" Kunj or Yuvraj or Someone else? Chalo guess guess... 😆

Omg...amazing part arpi..

Arpita i won't lie, this blew me away

wow nice update dear

OMG awesome arpi..

Haw... Itna chotu sa chappy. Meri bhuk kam nahi hui aur jayada bad gaye. Now... I am a bhukhd for the next update. Chalo meri bakwas hogi now the chappy. It is mindblowing. Sach mai mere hosh udgaye. Full of suspence. While reading the chappy i was hoping ki pata toh chale yeh Him kon hai? par its k i'll try and wait. par agar twinkle ne kunj ko mare diya toh story kaise chalegi? But then i have read stories in which the main character dies and his\her better halfs unke yadon ke share ji rahe hain. But i don't want twinkle to suffer. But then i love such stories... I am so sadistic shame on me. And haan ek aur baat kunj only has the ability to break twinkle. Chalo now about uv. Agar uv ko mara toh i have no problem. Because he is the perfect villan not romeo. Romeo toh kunj hai. And then love will pave its way. before i lose my mind update de dena plz putting an end to this torture. thanks for the pm.