Twinj + Family TS: Being Poisoned COMPLETED pg 6

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17.sonal

@17.sonal

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Bht.Cute tha. Yaarrr... Especially last.part...

Starting me to Dara e diya tha ... For some seconds i thot Twinkle really died... Coz i thot reality touch k liye.. But i am So happy thy u brought her back...love u for tht...

Usha Rani Needs some Hardcore drama like this to bring her back to her senses ... I hate her on TEI.. Thanks for Reviving hrr..

Keep writing..🤗

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RUBAB

@Rubab_Naqvi

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Shakti you updated..

Wow but res for now m.in class ..lol

Gonna read in some time

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anisha

@Anisha-k.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Wow...Shakti di!!!👏😳😃

Loved it to the core...so sweet!!!!❤️

Awww i just loved Usha i just wish something happens like this in the show!!!😃

Btw thanks a lot for PM!🤗

And sorry for commenting late!😳

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Aalina.

@Aalina.

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Oyi.. So cute Twinj. Loved it genius.

Usha lol..u surprised me 😲.

Beautiful one..

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Amazing update. Beautiful ending.
Loved it.

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docritu99

@docritu99

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Another beautiful piece of writing..
For a change I like usha here..
And twinj were perfect.. The climax was awestruck.
Was visualising everything..
Thnx for this shakti..do bring on some more ideas like this..

P.s I guess shahid's movie.. Its most probably Vivah..is it..??

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Eshita

@tikit

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

That was so nice. Keep writing more stories.

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Duumps

@Duumps

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Beautiful OS.

Loved TwiNJ .

So cute ending.

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Priya

@priyanvs

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

nice ending dear

loved it

at last usha accepted twinkle

loved kunj and twinkle scenes

sry for being late to comment

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Such a relieving update...
I loved whole of it.. Don't know which part to specially mention... But yes Usha'a change of character was heart warming... Only if we could see it on screen :/
And then Kunj coming to meet her in the evening - It was so well-wriiten and enjoyable...
I enjoyed whole of the part but specially this one...
Waiting for the next OS/TS or anything you wanna write 😆

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