Twinj + Family TS: Being Poisoned COMPLETED pg 6 - Page 7

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

that is so perfectly written and just perfect! Thank you for writing such preciousness.

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

wow such an adorable update Shakti. you nailed it absooutely. loved it souch <3

Originally posted by: .FlightOfEagle.

Itvwas soo soo amazing!

I loved everything about it,Kunj refusing to beliefe that she has left and then twinkle came back!

The hug,to ensure she is here as just mindblowing!

I loved usha here for a change🤣

I loved thier enture conversation when they were alone and Kunj was so afarid,And then The ending was mindlowingly amazing!!!

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Beautiful update
Loved the ending 😳

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Bht.Cute tha. Yaarrr... Especially last.part...

Starting me to Dara e diya tha ... For some seconds i thot Twinkle really died... Coz i thot reality touch k liye.. But i am So happy thy u brought her back...love u for tht...

Usha Rani Needs some Hardcore drama like this to bring her back to her senses ... I hate her on TEI.. Thanks for Reviving hrr..

Keep writing..🤗

Originally posted by: Anisha-k.

Wow...Shakti di!!!👏😳😃

Loved it to the core...so sweet!!!!❤️

Awww i just loved Usha i just wish something happens like this in the show!!!😃

Btw thanks a lot for PM!🤗

And sorry for commenting late!😳

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Oyi.. So cute Twinj. Loved it genius.

Usha lol..u surprised me 😲.

Beautiful one..

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update. Beautiful ending.
Loved it.

Originally posted by: docritu99

Another beautiful piece of writing..
For a change I like usha here..
And twinj were perfect.. The climax was awestruck.
Was visualising everything..
Thnx for this shakti..do bring on some more ideas like this..

P.s I guess shahid's movie.. Its most probably Vivah..is it..??

Originally posted by: tikit

That was so nice. Keep writing more stories.