Twinj + Family TS: Being Poisoned COMPLETED pg 6

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

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3dancelover

@3dancelover

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Res! Im first yay!

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Yaar you write wonderfully seriously!

Damn that Yuvi, so many emotions you portrayed, loved how you used the dialogue from the ep

and no the ending, update soon!

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved the start
Brilliantly written 😳
Waiting for the next part

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

Shakti ji it was brilliant I totally loved it,I mean It would be amazing if we can have This kind of sequence on the show it will be apt for usha to start liking and trusting twinkle.

This was amazingly written ,Soo Soo Soo amazing!

Update soon shakti😳

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Priya

@priyanvs

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

shakti this is not fair u left us in suspense

any ways nice update dear

loved i t

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princessjoey25

@princessjoey25

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Shakti your each os is just lovely...

awesome work 👏

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anisha

@Anisha-k.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

I was literally crying reading this SS di...😭

Amazing...fantastic di👏😳😃 the poison part Hayy Allah made me cry😭...tears are still rolling down my eyes...but at the same time a big smile on my face...😃

Loved it to the core of my heart!!!❤️

Can't wait for the nxt chap di...plzzz upload it fast it's a humble request...i don't think i'll be able to sleep just thinking about TWINKLE!😕

All in all FABULOUS di! 👏

BTW thanks a lot for PM!🤗