Twinj OS: Giving You My Sky

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello all. Just wrote a short OS about the feelings Twinj share for each other. Sharing with you all.

OS: Giving You My Sky

It was late night. Everyone in the Sarna Mansion fell asleep but Kunj was still awake gazing at the stars and thinking about the past five months of his marriage. Life has always been a roller coaster ride for him. He remembered the day when he met Twinkle for the very first time. She was a girl full of liveliness. He was never expressive but Twinkle turned him into a different person. He finds a different sort of ease when she is around. Her soft voice, clinking sound of her bangles, her small glittering bindi, heavenly smile on her face, her concern for the family...whatever she does just makes him to want her more and more. Would she be able to hear what his heart says?

He wondered what happens when two people fall in love. Do they need to speak or the silence between them coveys the message which can't be expressed by thousands of words. Twinkle and he they don't even whisper to each other. They just look at each other and by that they understand hundreds of unsung words. He can't distant his heart from hers'.

Suddenly his thoughts were interrupted by Twinkle. He didn't realize when she came until she started shouting by seeing a falling star and suddenly she closed her eyes. Kunj stared at her. There was something heavenly in her. She was looking like an angel and he wished if that moment stopped there. Then she opened her eyes and looked at him.

Kunj: Twinkle what did you wish for?

Twinkle:' Kunj you know we can't share our wish upon a falling star,'she said staring at him with a big smile and crystal eyes. But you know today at this moment I want to tell you that I am the luckiest girl on earth because I got you. I had the best times of my life with you.

Before Kunj could blink she placed a quick kiss on his cheek and turned all crimson... that's it. I don't want to let her go...I want her to know that I love her. Looking into her soft eyes he said look at the starts which are shining bright. You are the brightest star of my life and I will always keep you happy to keep your spirit alive.'

Tears started dripping down from her eyes and she said, 'I can't give you anything except my heart.'

Then he wrapped her in a tight hug saying 'Baby I am always here for you..to protect you...to love you...today I want to present you my sky...you are the only star who will be shining bright there...today, always and forever...'


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a sweet OS!!!
Well done!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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adorable OS CN
loved it <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much all for liking my very first OS.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awwee, so cute * imagine me pinching your cheeks*
that was very good
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was adorable!
Lovely OS
Looking forward to reading more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Twinkle what did you wish for?.

hehe. That's a secret. Wish upon a falling star can't be revealed. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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.sonal Very Sweet Os..
😊

Aww thank you. You are an amazing writer dear. I have just tried to compile my thoughts.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Inkheart Awwee, so cute * imagine me pinching your cheeks*
that was very good

Thank you dear. I felt your pinch. Ouchhh 😉
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Ragini - This was adorable!
Lovely OS
Looking forward to reading more

Thank you dear Ragini. Even your writings inspire me a lot. Will try to come up soon with a new one.😊

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