It was always you...!!! Twinj FF - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
I guess its cherry''s entry?
Awesome update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update, loved it.
New entry um, i guess it is cherry.
Continue soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 53
As twinkle observed the man what Kunj did shocked her more...
He turned around in a swift motion pointed at the man and threw the tennis ball at him... he rmouth formed a prfect O as the ball accurately hit the mans legs... and it fell on the ground... the man again picked up the fallen ball.. and Kunj started walking around the dining area... trying to avoid the throw that was again going to come back...
'What the hell they were doing'she thougt... Kunj made again ried to make a quick escape but still the ball hit him on the back as he turned to avoid it hitting him in the front... they were running around in the house aiming each othr... sometimes missing and sometimes hitting ... jumping of the sofa... the chair... behind the table... Kunj finally hit the man on the face and. The man was angry and adamant to hit Kunj hard... as the ball came back he ducked and... it hit a vase.. which came crashing down with a deafening sound enough to wake up to entire house... Twinkles hand reached her mouth witnessing the scene in front of her...
And then she watched at last the vase crashing... Kunj and the man both staring at each othr...
"Oye Good For Nothing... Dekho aapne kya kar diya... bebe se mar khane tayar ho jao" Kunj teased him... and the man glared in shocked and fear... like a 5 year old caught in a wrong act...
All the family members arrived at the scene..
Bebe saw the broken vase...
"Hayo rabba ye kaise hua..."
"Bebe ye... ye inhone kiya" kunj pointed out to the man... like a complaining child...
Bebe looked at his direction and was over come by emotion... Surjeet too stared surprised... Manohar Usha looked on... Anand had a smile on his face...
Bebe walked upto the man...
He looked down and smiled sheepishly ruffling the hair .behind his head
Bebe held out her hands in a manner to hold his face lovingly... but he felt the hands passed his cheeks and... held his ear...
"Aate hi badmashi shuru...han..."
"Bebe dard ho rha hai... bebe chodiye... sab Kunj ki vjah se hua..."
She let go...
he touched her feet... as she gathered him in her embrace with tears...
"Kitne dino bad dekh rhi hu tuje... yaad nhi ati tujhko... hamari..."
He held bebes face and wiped her tears...
"Isliye toa aya hu..."
He moved forward to surjeet...
Bowing down to touch his feet... surjeet had an expresionless face he just placed his hand over his head... and did not speak a word... even he dint expect any tears from his father...
"Aapki tabiyat thik hai na.."
To which surjeet just mumbled
"Ha.."
He stared Manohar and Usha in the eye with anger... but still bowed down to touch their feet... and moved towards Anand without speaking a word...
"Bhaiya...kitne saalo baad aapko dekh raha hu..."Anand spoke with genunine emotion as they both hugged and smiled...
Then he looked over to Kunj... standing at the end... and a girl in a suit standing beside the dining table...
He jumped over the sofa to reach Kunj near the broken vase...
"Chahe kitna bhi jeet le tu chotu... umar me toa me tujse bada hi rehne vala hu"
Kunj got irritated on being called by the name his brothers and classmates used to call him due to his small height in primary school... the man perfectly knowing how to rile him up purposely referred to him as Chotu...
"Umar me hi bade rehne vale hai aap... aur toa koi cheez hai nhi... jispe aapka bas ho..."kunj fired back...
As the man walked further and embraced Kunj in a tight hug...
"Bhaiya...!"
"CHOTU" he purposely spoke loudly making every1 laugh...
And Kunj broke apart
"Muje chotu bulana band kijiye...koi chotu nahi raha mein..ab.."
The man slapped lightly Kunjs cheek...
" ghar me sabse chota tu hi hai...hAan agar tu Ishaan aur Juhi ko bhi gin raha ho toa pata nahi"...all chuckled...
As Kunj saw Twinkles confused face... also a bit irritated the way she was coming to know hidden members of this family...
He held the man by shoulders and... brought him near the dining...
"Bhaiya... ye meri Biwi hai... Twinkle..."
"Twinkle ye mere bhaiya hai... CHERRY bhaiya... Tauji k bete..." stressing on the word cherry
Twinkle was about to chuckle on hearing the name Cherry... she was already smiling on looking Kunjs face when called Chotu... and here the name Cherry...
"Namaste bhaiya.."
"Mera naam Chand hai... Chand Sarna... mere pagal gharwalone mera naam cherry rakh diya hai... dont mind..."as everybody glared at Cherrry... and Twinkle smiled...
"Agar aap Mind nhi karengi toa ek baat puchu"
"Aap ijazat kyu mang rahe hai...puchye"
"Kya majboori thi... Twinkle bhabhiji... ki aapko isse shadi karni padi... mein aapka dard samaj sakta hu... isse shadi karkke."cherry spoke teasing Kunj...
"Kya kare Cherry bhaiya... ab shadi ki hai nibhani toa padegi.."Twinkle spoke siding cherrys teasing sprint ...
"Aur aap muje Twinkle bulaiiye... bhabhiji kehne ki zarurat nhi ... aap mujse bade hain..."
"Par shadi toa pehle aapki aur Kunj ki hui is nate aap meri bhabhi hui.. "
Twinkle just smiled at his explanation... it dint make any logic but had a convincing tone...
All the members were just delighted as they sat in the hall... talking to Cherry and Cherry being the perfect story teller started on about his adventures while he was away... while opening gifts which he had brought for all...

Cherry
A charming young man of 31.. unmarried... he is a Bajrangbali bhakt in its true sense... not eyeing any girl... left his house in the pind after studies for discovering himself... much to surjeets disapproval... .. from past 8 years... he is a tourist guide ...he has learnt local languages of MP Rajasthan UP... he has homes at places like Agra, Banaras,Ujjain,Udaipur,Jaipur,Jaiselmer...of his own he is doing this job of tourist guiding from past 7 years... and is a pro traveller...he is quiet rich inspite of being a tourist guide as he has many working under him in different cities...in the course of time he has turned his job into entrepreneurship...he loves his family... and even if he dosent love them(manohar Usha )he respects them as elders...
He frequently visits his family

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update 😃
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cherry as Bajrangbaliji ka bhakt 😆
Thank God he is not a kamina like the show here 😆
Lovely uodate 😊
Please continue soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update. Loved it.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Joe 😛
Plz continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 54

The entire family was on the breakfast table... it was made possible by Kunj...it was tough to convince Surjeet... but bebe and Kunj pulled it off..
"Twinkle bhabhi...vaah... kya parathe banaye hai... sach kahu... Punjab jaise parathe kahi nhi mil sakte"
"Ye sahi hai.. pehle khud apni jagah chhod k jao... bahar raho... fir shikayat karo.."surjeet taunted..
"Papaji... mera kam hai vo..."
"Kya.. kaam!!! firnagiyo ko ghumana..."
"Tauji.. plz.. hum sab shanti se breakfast toa kar hi sakte hai na..."
"Papaji.. me jo karta hu vo muje acha lagta hai.. isliye karta hu.."
Kunj interrupted..."Acha ye sab bate chhodo... bhaiya ap ye bataiye... aap ... kaha ghumke aa rahe hai..."
"Kunj.. pura desh toa ghum liya... lekin ek jagah baki thi... Andaman Nicobar jaake... aya... A1 jagah hai.. tumko aur Twinkle ko bhi vaha jana chahiye kabhi... haa. Isse yad aya... tum log honemoon gaye ki nhi... shadi kab hui tum log ki..."cherry inquired while sipping his tea...
"Ji.. vo bhaiya... actually abhi time nhi hai.. kaam hai bhot office sambhalna hai n all.. ghar ki halat bhi thik nhi hai... "
"Oye oloo k pathe... abhi nhi ghumoge toa kya budhape me ghumoge... kam.. kam kam... Twinkle bhabhi aap... sambhal k rahiye isse... kaam k bahane... ye aapko Punjab k bahar bhi nhi le jayega.."
"Bhaiya aisi baat nhi hai.. sach mein... stress bhot hai.. aur Twinkle ne bhi abhi abhi office join kiya hai... vo sab chhodiye.. aap bataiiye... Andaman Nicobar kaisa tha.
. Aur kab tak hai aap yaha..."kunj spoke trying to change the topic...
"Topic change karne ki koshish mat kar... aap log jaldi koi plan banao.. varna mere jane se pehle me kahi ki bhi ticket book kara lunga... aur fir jana hi padega... khud decide kar lo.. toa choice rahegi... varna mera bas chale.. toa Haridwar bhi bhej du.."cherry teaeed Kunj
".. kya bat hai bhaiya.. Tauji bhi yahi keh rhe the ek din ... humko ghumne haridwar bhejne ki...aap dono k khayal kitne milte hai na.."twinkle also supporting her husband in changing the topic... making evry1 remembr how surjeet teased both aftrr they had been to Gurudwara and Mahadev temple...
"Twinkle tu bhi badi chalak hai... "bebe spoke up..
"Aur nhi toa kya... ye Kunj toa hai hi... boring sa.. par twinkle bhabhi aapko toa ghumne ka shokh hoga... aap nhi bolengi toa... kaise hoga.. apne pati ko bas me rakhna abhi se sikh lijiye..."
Twinkle and Kunj both feeling flushed as... not being able to escape... 'vaah beta Kunj bada sab ko sath baith k brkfast karana tha.. dekh liya natija...hey Mahadev raksha karo..'Kunj thought...
'Babaji.. ye log toa piche hi pad gaye... Kunj k sath honemoon... uske man mein toa ladoo phoot rahe honge... honeymoon gaye ... aur vaha... usne rishta aage badhane ka socha toa... mein kya karungi... ek toa... jab bhi vo pas ata hai.. dimag kam karna band kar deta hai...'twinkle thought...
"Kaha kho gaye dono... sach mein.. bataiiye... aap log ne.. kaise honemoon cancel kar diya... nayi nayi shaadi mein.. log bahana dhundte hai... ghumne ka... abhi nhi toa.. kya... do saal bad bache k sath ghumoge kya... sach kahu... toa.. Kunj babies k sath Travel karna bhot mushkil hai... "cherry was on ... speaking non stop...
Just to see both their faces in shock... blush .. embaressmnt and whatever emotion possible...BAChAA...
"Oye cherry chup kar... kuch bhi bole jaa raha hai..."
"Kya.. bebe.. do sal bad.. bhot jaldi hai.. kya.. 3 saal .. bad... "getting no response..."4 saal bad..." still no response they both just gaped... "chalo thik hai.. 5 saal..."
"Oye cherry ... chup kar... kitna pareshan karega mere bacho ko..."bebe ... shushhed him...
"Bebe mein... aur juice leke aati hu..."Twinkle escaped..
"Mera mobile room me reh gaya hai.. me leke ata hu"Kunj sprinted...
And bebe hit playfully over cherrys head..
"Bilkul apne baap pe gaya hai.."
To which Cherry gave a sad smile.. remembering the tension between him and his father...

Kunj thought ye cherry bhaiya... yaar.. jab tak rahenge.. tab tak.. aise hi chidhate rahenge.. aur muje kya go gya tha.. me kyu itna sharma raha tha.. aur Twinkle kya soch rhi hogi...
Twinkle in the kitchen... pehle bebe aur tauji... aur ab Cherry bhaiya... muje kya ho jata hai.. Kunj k sath chidhaye jane par mein.. school ki bachi ki tarah sharma kyu jati hu... pet me gud gudi kyu hoti hai... khusi bhi hoti hai... aur tension bhi hota hai... na thik se smile kar pati hu... na.. soch pati hu sidhe dimag se...
Aur Kunj kya soch rha hoga...

Kunj came downstairs making sure no one was around...
And he found Twinkle clearing the dining...
"Chalo Twinkle late ho rha hai..."he spoke casually but without making an eye contact looking in the mobile...
"Hhmm.. abhi ayi..."
Twinkle grabbed her bag.. and.. they were inside the car...
As Kunj started to drive.. he stopped abruptly.. in the middle of the road... Twinkle got confused... and she saw him looking at her...his eyes were calm.. but held her eyes..she thought... 'babaji.. kunj ne aise gaadi kyu rok di... aur vo muje aise kyu dekh rha hai... kahi aaj subah jo bate hui uski vajah se... toa... babaji... muje kuch samj nhi aa raha...kya karu... meri sharto ko toa manne se raha... aur hai.. toa mera pati hi... plz babaji aise kyu dekh rha hai... gud gudi... kyu ho rhi hai... kaise puchu uske dimag mein kya chal raha hai...
Kunj looked at her... what was she thinking... he removed his seat belt... as she watched.. him... and came closer to her... he leaned in... as Twinkle shut her eyes...
"Kunj.. ruko... tum plz.. plz... Kunj"
He looked at her confused why was she stopping him from doing it...

Edited by joe10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superbly updated 😛
Plz do continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
Edited by hailly - 9 years ago

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