TwiNj SS 'Tu Meri Aamanat Hai' Part 3= Page 5 *Updated* - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
oh oh i loved this!
such an amazing plot arpita
you wrote this so beautifully
although i was yearning for a longer update. koi nahi.
twinkle lost her memory. interesting.
and i loved how u mentioned about that hug failing to evoke any emotions in her.
heck, yuvi is here
this just keeps getting better and better
looking forward to the next update.

P.S the precap has managed to grab my undivided attention. all the more excited
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

oh oh i loved this!

such an amazing plot arpita
you wrote this so beautifully
although i was yearning for a longer update. koi nahi.
twinkle lost her memory. interesting.
and i loved how u mentioned about that hug failing to evoke any emotions in her.
heck, yuvi is here
this just keeps getting better and better
looking forward to the next update.

P.S the precap has managed to grab my undivided attention. all the more excited

1st update na that's why chota sa 😆 I am glad you liked it, Thank you 😳
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Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update dear . Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved the update dear
twinkle lost her memory 😲
continue soon pls pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its like ipkknd ek baar phir where lost here memory that she didn't remeber every think even shlok i felt like that
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interesting story...memory loss and Yuvi oh no!
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Wow what a great start! Absolutely love the plot line, it's so creative omg. And I can't wait to see Kunj take care of his amanaat. The Precap was written so well, you have me desperate for the next update! So excited haha.
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I'm literally hooked do continue soon ^=^
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"Tu Meri Aamanat Hai"

Part : 2




"Han baby...Mrs. Twinkle Yuvraj Luthra" > His announced proudly

She looked at him helplessly > "Mujhe kuch yaad nehi hai, kuch bhi nehi"

"Koi gal nehi, main hnu na, tu jaida sooch mat tu bas woh yaad rakh jo main tujhe bataunga, hum ek nayi tarikese suruwat karenge, koi jarrurat nehi purani baatein yaad karne ki hum naye yaadein banayenge" > He suggested as if loosing memory is not at all a big deal

"Jarrurat nehi? Ashe kaise keh sakta hai yeh?...Sayed mujhe shaant karne k liye tassalli dene k liye asha keh raha hai" : She thought

After taking a deep breath she asked > "Tum kon ho?"

A wide smile covered his face...

"Yuvraj Luthra...Tera Yuvi...I am your husband" > He informed

Husband... Wife...these words were making her nervous n a little uncomfortable still she managed to smile a little

Twinkle > "Thank you"

Yuvi > "Thanks for what baby?"

Twinkle > "For saving my life...Nurse ne kaha ki tumne mujhe sahi time pe hospital mein admit kia after my accident"

"Oh! Come on yaar it was my duty after all I am your husband & you are the love of my life...well actually you are my life" > With this Yuvi hugged her again...

And this time she hugged him back...

"Chal aab tu aaram kar le thoda, tab tak main tere liye dawai leke aata hnu...phir doctor se baat karke hum ghar k liye niklenge" > Yuvi told still hugging her

"GHAR" : This was enough to make her a bit relax...

She looked forward to this journey of hers...may be she will get all her answers in her "Home" she hoped...

**********

"STOP Stop stop..." > She shouted

Yuvi stopped the car with a jerk

"Kya hua?" > Yuvi asked in confusion

"Yeh" > Twinkle pointed towards something outside the glass window of the car...

Yuvi looked there & told > "Golden Temple of Amritsar, your favourite place"

"Mujhe lagai tha...Dekhte hi ek khichav sa mehsus hua...Mujhe andaar jana hai" > With this without wasting time she almost ran out of the car

"Arreh Twinkle... Aaram se" > Yuvi followed her

**********

"Mujhe bhalei kuch yaad na ho app tho sab jante hain na Baba Ji? Bataiye na kyun hua mere saath asha? Koi galati ho gai thi kya mujhse jo itni bari saza mili? Agar galati ho bhi gai tho kya aap maaf nehi kar sakte? Chaliye maaf bhi mat kijiye per at least thodi si hinmat hi de dijiye...Plz Baba ji...You know na main bohat confused hnu, kuch samajh nehi paa rahi hnu...aab main sab kuch aap pe chod rahi hnu Baba ji..." > Twinkle had no option other than leaving everything to her Baba Ji.

Slowly she opened her moist eyes...after praying to God she was feeling much much better

"Chale Twinkle?" > Yuvi asked

She nodded her head n smiled

**********

She was walking with Yuvi outside the temple when something caught her attention...

She heard few ladies talking no actually gossiping about on the lines..."Kamal ka banda hai"

She had no idea why she felt a strong wish to listen their whole conversation

"Woh mujhe bohat pyaas lagi hai...Tum pani le aaoge mere liye?" > She asked

"Pani car mein hai na chal wohi jake pee lena" > Yuvi told disappointing her

"Nehi, woh car wala nehi, mujhe inha ka gurduwara ka pani peena hai, meethi paani woh wahan jo baat raha hai" > She pointed towards a 'Chabil'

Yuvi was getting irritated still he managed to faked a smile > "Abhi lata hnu, tu yehi rukna kahi jana mat"

She nodded her head...

"Baba Ji yeh main kya kar rahi hnu?" > She thought while watching Yuvi walking towards the chabil

**********

She moved a little near those ladies to hear them properly...

One lady > "Mera pati tho asha kabhi na kare"

Another lady > "Han, manne tho aab tak ekin nehi ho raha ki aaj kal k zamane ka modern ladka asha koi mannat rakh sakta hai"

Enough... She couldn't able to control her curiosity more, she directly approached them

"Aap log konse ladke ki baat kar rahe hain? Kaisi mannat?" > Twinkle asked politely

One of those ladies > "Arreh tumhe nehi pata? Kal inha guruduware mein ek ladka pura din jalte aangaroo pe khada tha, aur tab tak khada tha jab tak ushko khabar nehi mila ki ushki biwi khatre se bahar aageyi hai"

Another lady > "Ushki biwi ka bohat bura accident hua tha suna hai, doctor ne keh dia tha ki coma mein ja sakti hai, per Rab ne ush bande ki pukar sun li"

"Really?" > She asked in disbelief...

"Aaa Ishq dooja naam rabda...Nain karte ishko sazdaa...Sazdaaa"

"Twinkle..." > Yuvi called

"Aacha main chalti hnu" > With this she walked towards Yuvi

*********

In the car...

She was looking outside the window... Still thinking about the guy who can stand on hot coals all day for his wife...

"Koi kisi se itna pyaar kaise kar sakta hai? Kitni lucky hogi woh ladki jishka pati ush se ish haad tak pyaar karta hai" > She thought

She looked at Yuvi...

"Kya mera pati bhi mujhse?...Nehi its just not possible...I am sure woh ladka jo bhi tha bilkul pagal tha, jalte aangaroo pe khada rehna pyaar nehi pagalpan hai" > Her logical mind came to this conclusion

"Lekin main ushke bare mein itna kyun sooch rahi hnu?" > She asked herself

Yuvi's voice broke the chain of her thoughts...

"Ghar aageya Twinkle"

She looked at the name plate of the mansion visible from the car "Manohar Sarna"

Yuvi opened the door of the car...

And she stepped into the building of SARNA Mansion...

**********

Precap : In the darkness she could only see a tall figure standing in a little distance...

"Kon hai wahan?" > She asked

The tall figure walked towards her...

She held the candle in front of his face to get a clear view of him...

"Tera ishq naaseebaan mein kar lu...
Tere ishq mein jee lu main maar lu"
Edited by Arpimugfan - 9 years ago

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