Tera Mera Saath Rahe- Twinj TS last part pg4

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So watched the intense confrontation scene, I don't like the fact Anita always gets away with causing trouble in their lives. So this is my verison of what should be the focus instead of Anita and Cherry's stupid plans.
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part one

Tera Mera Saath Rahe- Twinj

Twinkle couldn't believe that she had accused Kunj of molesting her. It had been Yuvraj that had tried to harm her. Kunj had always stood by her and protected her.

She kneeled on the ground and cried her heart out.

Meanwhile, Kunj was riding his bike in the empty streets. He realized Twinkle was nave and had vented those cruel words on him only because he had not cleared this misunderstanding.

"Kyun mujhe pe vishwas aaj tak nahin kar payi?," he pondered.

"Kash, I didn't believe Yuvraj's act. I didn't believe her then, and today I almost slapped her again. RT is her father. I should tell her this truth as well. If I hide this fact as well, how will Twinkle trust me?," Kunj realized.

It grew colder, and he stopped to refuel his bike. The attendant told him to hurry up as he was closing so he could go home to his family.

Kunj finished and paid what he owed. It was 3am when he finally made his way home. He had stopped at gudhawara as well.

A feeling of dread filled his chest suddenly, as he approached the room. He didn't know what to expect.

Kunj's heart seemed to jump up to his throat when he spotted his wife sprawled on the floor. He rushed to her side and brushed her hair off her face.

The cold wind blew in from the open balcony doors. Kunj shook Twinkle gently and felt her forehead. She was burning with fever.

He swiftly picked her up and placed her in the bed and placed the duvet over her. She awakened slightly and her teeth clattered with her shivering.

"Kunj mujhe maaf kardo. Tumne hamesha mera saath diya. Uss stupid Yuvi ke wajh se yeh sab kuch huya hai. Woh kayre hai," she stammered.

Kunj soothed her by caressing her forehead and back. He held her close as she was in shock and very ill.

"It's ok Twinkle main hoon na," he assured her.

She clung to his shirt and he ended up having to sleep beside her.

A few hours later, Kunj awakened. He looked down at Twinkle and checked her forehead. She still had a fever. Since Leela was still ill, he decided to ask Bebe to stay with Twinkle until the doctor came to see her.

The doctor declared it was viral fever and aggravated due to some stress.

"Just have her rest, eat what she can tolerate and drink lots of fluids," she ordered.

"Thanks doctor,"Kunj stated.

"Of course Mr. Sarna. I see you love your wife very much. Inka dhyan rakna," she stated before leaving.

Kunj tried not to blush.

Bebe got up and smiled at him.

" I am leaving you to make sure she doesn't strain herself today. I am going to make her some light food. You know she woke up briefly a few minutes ago asking for you," she said with glee.

Kunj smiled slightly. Yes he had been hurt by her words but he could never be heartless towards her.

He turned to go back in the room. Twinkle was sitting up in bed clutching her head.

"Twinkle tu theek to hain na?," he asked softly but in a stern manner.

She immediately turned towards him.

"Kunj kahaan chale gaye tum raat ko?," she exclaimed. She lunged at him , pulling on his shirt.

He slowly wrapped his arms around her fragile form.

"Twinkle you need to relax ," he stated.

"Nahin! If you don't forgive me, I will keep begging you and I won't let you go!," she declared.

Kunj was beside himself.

What was he going to do with this Punjabi Patkha?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it
Imagining if the actual show played out like this
Continue soon!
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AG this was too good. waiting for part 2 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Realy loved it..
Plzzz continue soon

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It ws nyc.. Something like this shud have happened..
Nycly written.. Pls do continue... Wanna wat will Kunj do...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oooh, beautiful start.
Nice story.
Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update. Love it.
Waiting to see kunj reaction.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 3dancelover

Loved it

Imagining if the actual show played out like this
Continue soon!


I wish the same, love that we can write fanfictions on our favoirte jodis!😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks everyone I have been on bedrest sorta past few days because I hurt my back at work, so should be able to update soon, thanks for all the lovely comments and likes!
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this was lovely
continue soon
it would have been sweet if it went this way

very nice

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