~My lovely Twinkle~ twinJ FF Chapt 23 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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super update again. great going <3
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Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon please.
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Chapter 5



A week past and twinkle was starting to be comfortable around kunj. See after the little hospital incident, twinkle had a change of heart. She realize she was a little harsh on him, after all he did save her, I mean just the thought of it almost made her want to call him a hero, but she held herself back from doing so. Her mom came and took her home while telling her to make friends with him.

At first she refuses, but thinking about it, she realized she had no friends in India. She didn't want to be like those people who had no one showed up at their funeral. Getting up and dress, she decides to walk to the park. She wasn't wearing her usual exercising outfit, but instead a short dress showing her clevlage. She sat on the swing enjoying the wind.

She didn't notice someone coming behind her, holding the handle of the swing. The person leaned forward stopping close to her ears and said "boo!" Making her scared, kunj laugh holding his stomach while twinkle glares, crossing her arms frowning. "Are you mad!?"

Kunj observe her smiling, he knew she tolerate him now, and hope maybe they can be friends and more. Looking at her choice of outfit he frowns. Why does she wear stuff like these, I don't like, he thought. He was snapped out of his thought when she snap her fingers, getting his attention. "Keep glaring like that and your face will be stuck like that"

Twinkle told him if that was an insult, and he told her its a word of advice from a friend. Hearing this made her stare, kunj taunts her saying he knows he's handsome, so she can stop looking. Unless she's starting to like him. "In your dreams" she says in English before sitting down.

"You speak good English" he says grabbing the handle and push her. "Well I was raised in america" she says

" how long did u stay there?"

When he said this twinkle turn to face him, she was met with his face inches from hers. They staid like that for a while before twinkle avoid his gaze " do you know what I want to do?" She says, kunj shook his head confuse. She smiles and got up, standing on top of the swing seat. She wasn't holding the chains, instead she stood and spread her hands out. Kunj worried says its dangerous, but twinkle pressures him she was fine.

Just than the wind blow making the swing move, twinkle still standing lost balance. Hearing her making a sound, kunj rush to her and caught her before she fell. He told her to hold onto the swing and than pushed her. "Why are you doing this again?" She asks before saying she doesn't need his help. Kunj told her he wanted to help her. Twinkle staid quiet, she thought he was weird, but she didn't question it.

They staid quiet for a while, enjoying the moment. Sadly it was ruined by twinkle stomach "you hungry?" He says but she refuse to answer. Kunj told her about a coffee shop near by with snacks. She accepts and they left the park. When they reached the shop, they ate and talk more getting to know one another. Kunj tease her saying it looks like they were on a date, twinkle plainly refused saying he would be the last man she would date. Kunj pretends to be hurt.

He told her their love story just started, and she says she hates love story and it will never happened after her last. She said the last part with a whisper but kunj heard it. He wondered what had happen to her and why she said that, but he didn't want to ask, well just not yet. Seeing her sore look he changed the topic " what do you like to do?" When he said this twinkle started talking about interia design and acting. Kunj smile while drinking his coffee.

Usually he hates people who talk to much, but seeing her smiling and talking freely about her likes, were worth it. He nods when agreeing with her and answers when asked a question. She's very expressive once she takes an interest into something, he thought. Soon it was time to go, before leaving kunj asks if she would like to hang out more often, she thought about it before saying yes.

This made kunj happy, she pat his shoulder to say good bye but stop when kunj grab her hand and spun her towards him. Confuse she was gonna ask what he was doing, but kunj said nothing. He moved closer and wipe the coffee cream of her upper lip " that was bothering me the whole day" he says

"What was?" She says

"The cream"

Twinkle was about to accept his answer when she realize something. " it was their this whole time and you didn't tell me!?"

Kunj laugh nervously " well... I thought it would be funny seeing you like that the whole day" he says

Twinkle now upset grab her bag handle ready to hit him. Kunj seeing this ran, making twinkle run after him with her purse.

To be continued.....


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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
aww the ending was so cute!
Nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awesome update. Loved it.
Twinj scenes were so cute.
Continue.soon plz.
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#26
awesome update dear
loved it very much
do continue soon😃
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Chapter 6

It wasn't long before twinkle went to a job interview.when she left she didn't realize how nervous she had been this whole time. She walk out side only to see it raining, cursing to herself she ran to the sidewalk calling for taxi. When no one would stop,she became frustrated. Suddenly her phone rang, she picked it up asking who was this. The person ignore her tone and asked her where she was at, twinkle stubbornly refused to answer unless her told her.

"Who are you?" She says

" your destiny" the voice answered

Twinkle roll her eyes "if you don't tell me who you are, I will hang up", this made the voice pause. Twinkle thought the person hang up, so she was about to press the end button when the person spoke "turn around"

Confuse she turn to see kunj on a motorcycle smiling and waving the phone. "Come I'll give you a ride" he says
Twinkle march to him asking how he got her number and how did he know she was here. Kunj just smile passing the helmet "didn't I tell you I'm your hero, I know everything"

Twinkle wrap her arm around his waist while they move "what is this one of your cheesy pickup lines"

"Are you falling for it?"he asks

"No" she says making kunj pout

When they reach twinkle house , she quickly left his side to enter her house, but stop when she saw kunj next to her " what are you doing?"

"Isn't it obvious I'm going to your house"

When he said this twinkle yelled at him. They bickered until leela opened the door, she saw them in an intimate position. Kunj holding her hand together from hitting him, while twinkle body was to close to him , so was her face. If anyone would have saw them they would have thought they were about to kiss, but leela ignored it. " twinkle, kunj come in" she says happily

Both parties quickly let go of one another once realize their position. They blush before walking in. Kunj look at leela before hugging her "aunty-ji" he says making her smile

Twinkle feeling jealous at the way kunj behave with his mom, turn and walk upstairs to change. Why does he treat everyone nice except me? She thought, we're friends so he should treat me more nicer, she finished changing into something comfortable.

When she came down, she saw kunj wiping his hair with a towel leela gave him. He smiles at her before teasing her about her choice of clothes, twinkle blush before asking him when he was leaving. Kunj thought about it, but was interrupted by leela who told twinkle he will have to stay because of the rain. Kunj thank her and told her since twinkle don't want him here he will leave, but leela once again insist.

Twinkle on the other hand told her mom if kunj wants to go let him. This made leela call her name, kunj smirk seeing her expression before sitting down. He told her he will stay because she asks, when he was saying this he was looking at twinkle right in the eye, twinkle glared back promising a painful death.

Leela smile before telling him to make himself comfortable. She told twinkle to get him something to eat, but twinkle refuse to. She called her name again before she move to get him food. While this was happening kunj phone rang, he sigh noticing his mom number before answering. "Kunj where are you?"

"I'm at a friend house"

"Maya?"she asks

"No mam"

"Than whose?"

Kunj hesitate before heading twinkle approach. She slam the bowel on the table glaring at him " my friend twinkle" he says

"Twinkle" she says curious "is she pretty?"

Kunj sigh he knew that voice, his mom is trying to set him up again "no she's very aggressive like a bear,very intimidating and unattractive"he says irking twinkle. In her head she kept repeating the words he said, this made her upset. Kunj seeing her hand shake quickly told his mom, he has to go.

He tried calling twinkle name but she didn't listen. Suddenly she exploded, tackling him on the couch. She grab the pillow hitting him with it, kunj tried to stop her but she couldn't hear him, she was far gone. She remember the words the students use for her when she was in collage, fatty, beast, ugly, looser. This made her cry. Kunj seeing this was confuse, he wonder what happen. "Look twinkle I'm sorry, I mean I didn't mean it" he says

But twinkle continued to cry " your not ugly, your very beautiful. I was just teasing you" he says snapping her from her daze.

"That's not funny" she says sniffing

Kunj lift himself halfway up wiping her tears. " I'm sorry, will you forgive me" he says holding his ears, twinkle look at him before asking if he really ment it, when kunj nod she smile before grabbing the pillow and hit him, calling him an idiot. Kunj in his head says she change her mood fast. They were to busy in their own thought that they didn't notice leela standing their watching them , she cleared her throat making them blush

"Am I interrupting you guys"she says making them turn even redder. Twinkle got of kunj and went to the kitchen afraid to face him, while kunj rough his hair, feeling awkward.

To be continued...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Amazing update, loved it.
Twinj scenes were cute.
Continues soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 7


It was late when everyone went to sleep. Kunj was still up, see he couldn't sleep because he kept having dream about his childhood. He put his arm under his head, looking at the ceiling "papa" he mumble, he was soon snapped out of it when he heard a noise. Turning around he wasn't surprise to see twinkle sneaking around. He smile to himself and walk behind her with her not aware, he walk with her until she reached the kitchen. He watch as she took a spoon and grab an icecream, than turn smiling.

" what are you doing?" He asks making her drop her dessert

" why are you still up?"

" i m not allowed to be up?"

" don't answer the question with a question" she says irritated

"Ok" he says giving up

Confuse twinkle wondered why he gave in so quickly. Kunj on the other hand grab the ice cream from the floor and throw it, than he cut a price of paper towel and wet it. He came back to her and bend down, "what are yo-" before she could ask he grab her leg and put her foot on his knee. " I'm simply helping you clean the mess you made"

She watch as he clean her foot and in between. She blushed a little, thinking no guy has done that for her. Once he was done he tap her foot to get it of before asking her why she was getting ice cream so late. Twinkle told him that she had nightmares of an accident, " ice cream helps relieve my stress" she says

"OK than, I will just go buy you a new one"

Twinkle laugh " are you crazy its really late, no store is open"

" than I will go to another country and get it"

Twinkle laugh " what are you superman"

" no just your hero" he says,

twinkle ignored his statement, she asks him why he was up. He told her he couldn't sleep like her. She asks why and he told her he won't tell. " come on kunj, I told you its only fair you tell me"

Kunj told her fine, he will tell her, but in return she has to keep him company. " that's not right, you can't ask for two things"

"Yes I can"

"No you can't"

" well do you want to hear it or not" he says

She nods, he shoo her from the kitchen and told her he will clean the floor. When she was gone he made a call before going to the living room. He saw twinkle on the floor with a pillow on her lap, waiting patently, when she saw him she pat the floor, inviting him to sit. " OK spill"

Kunj thought about it " well, I kept having a dream of a girl. She was moving away, since I didn't want her to leave I put a sindoor on her head." He says

Twinkle asks how old he was " I was probably eight" he says

Twinkle surprise asks if he was crazy " how could you do that?, i mean did you even know what it means. You just tied yourself to a girl you don't even love" she says

Kunj frown " don't say that, the first time I saw her it was love at first sight. She was my world, she helped me with my lonlynes" he says remembering his dream, see he didn't know who the girl was since her face was blurry, but he know her name.

" wait... She was your world, what happend to her?"

Kunj told her he doesn't want to talk about it, but she insist. Kunj was about to reply when the doorbell ring, twinkle wonder who it could be. Kunj got up and walk to the door, twinkle couldn't see who since his body was blocking her from seeing. Once he close the door, he walk back to her " here this is for you"

Curious twinkle grab the bag and pull whatever was in it " you kidding me right" she says surprise " how? Where?" She asks

Kunj smile " does it matter where, just enjoy it", she contemplated before digging in, eating the ice cream. Kunj watch her enjoying herself. He complement himself for making her happy. Twinkle while eating stop " don't just stand there come eat some" she says

" its fine, I have a sweet tooth" he says, but twinkle insist " don't be silly, a little ice cream won't hurt you" she says getting up. Kunj protested but twinkle wouldn't have it, she took a spoon fool and walk to him " Ah!" She says signaling him open his mouth. Kunj find it amusing , but he didn't want her to treated him like a child.

He watch as she wait for him to open his mouth. Mumbling to hurry up or the ice cream will melt. " do you really want me to eat it?" He asks hinting something

Twinkle oblivious said of course, " OK since you insist" kunj grab her hand that was free before leaning down, and pressing his lips with hers. While kissing her he could taste the sweet flavour, it was so addicted that he wanted more, but held himself back from going any further. Twinkle didn't notice she drop the spoon, she was indeed surprise at kunj action.

When her brain finally realize what was going on, she bite his lip, making him pull away " what was that for?"

" you kissed me!?" She says

"So, what's the problem" he says

" don't do it again"

" ok" he says

She sat back down, and he sat beside her. They staid quiet for a while, twinkle still can't get over it. While kunj was smiling in the inside. Kunj hating the silence decide to break the ice. He yawn saying he's going to sleep. This snap twinkle out of her daze " wait a second, you can't sleep yet"

Confuse he asks her why; she told him he still didn't answer her question. " you are very stubborn" he says but she just cross her arms glaring. " the girl she died" he says

Twinkle frown " I'm sorry kunj, no wonder you didn't want to tell me"

" its fine, I'm sure she's happy and living well" he says

Twinkle touch his arm, rubbing it. Kunj surprise, lean his head on her shoulder. Twinkle heart beat a little, but she tried not to show it " you know that makes you a widow" she laughs

" I will live, I'm still young and handsome I'm sure there's a girl out there for me" he says

" is it even possible to have a male widow?"

Kunj thought about it " yes its possible"

They talk for a while before they both fell asleep on each other. Twinkle head on top of his, while his on her shoulder. Their hands touching, while their heart beat.

To be continue...

Preview

Kunj search around until he spotted her. She was surrounded by guys dancing. Irritated he marched over there.

Scene 2: kunj becomes sick, twinkle worries for him. Kunj seeing her trip, gets of the bed and grab her hand before she fell down the stairs. She was hovering on the stairs, while looking at him. He pull her making her hit his chest.
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Awesome update
he called him her hero and kissed her yay!

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