~My lovely Twinkle~ twinJ FF Chapt 23 - Page 2

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hailly thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update , loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
interesting dear
read both parts in one go
continue soon
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2


When twinkle mom arrives, she couldn't help but to laugh " why did you stay out in the rain, why didn't you wait inside?" she asks, twinkle told her she had an umbrella, and that she was doing perfectly fine before a car pass by and splash water all over her. Her mom grab a towel and gave it to her, twinkle thank her before wiping her hair. She told her mom she feels gross, and that she can't wait to wear warm clothes again. This made her mom smile, the thing is Leela had miss twinkle a lot. She didn't want to leave her all by herself in America, but she had to come back to India because her in-law was sick. Now that her daughter is with her, she is relieve.

They reached the house, and walk inside. Leela help puts her luggage in her room, before making her some nice tea. They sat on the couch, getting warm before leela decides to ask her a question. "How were you fairing by yourself, beta?" twinkle puts her cup down, thinking about her question.

"It was very hard for me mam. Since I wanted to start a new life, I threw everything away. I found a roommate, she was the best" she says happily thinking about her friend. "She helped me with my diet, and would wake up with me to run, she was always there never giving up on me. There were some times I wanted to die with exhaustion, but I thought about you mama. When yuvraj and Maya would flaunt and make fun of me, I ignored them. I wanted to get over their betrayal, in order to do that I concentrated more on work. I would see them time to time, but after earning money, I moved to a different place with my friend.

I was happy reaching my goal, no one made fun of me or call me bad things. They respected me, I even had a promotion. What yuvraj did to us I will never forget, but I won't act upon it, because the past should be left in the past. She finished, her mom hugged her before wiping her tears. To lighten the mood she told her daughter that she looks like a superstar, and that she will be break lots of heart. Twinkle frown "I won't be dating anytime soon mam, I want to concentrate on my career"

Meanwhile the man walk inside his mom house, as soon as he did, his mom welcome him with photos from her iPad. "Kunj what do you think about this one, she's very pretty right?" she says happily

"Mom, how many time have I told you, I'm not getting married?" He says but stop when his mom showed him a picture of Alisha, he smile thinking she's cute, but then walk to the living room. "You like her beta" she says

Kunj sat down relax before saying "she's pretty, but my answer is no" he says

His mom frown, "aunty just give it up, and kunj will never married. He will live alone with his money to keep him company" she says coming down the stairs to great her best friend. Kunj smile seeing her "Maya, what are you doing here?" he asks

"What's this you don't want me here" she says teasingly

Kunj tease her back, saying she should marry him instead, so his mom can stop her crazy search. Maya smack him on the head, calling him crazy. His mom told them to stop flirting and come eat. After dinner, kunj had to leave, which disappointed them. His mom told him to take Maya home, at first she denied the offer but she soon accepts. During the ride, Maya asked him if he remembers the girl he married to when he was nine, kunj cringe at that. "I don't remember, her face is blur to me. But there's no point, it was a mistake anyway" he says

Maya smirk before telling him to turn there "I don't know kunj, nothing can stop fate, but you're probably right, no one cares about old ritual" she says, she got out the car and wave good bye. Once she was gone, he went home. He went home and change, just when he was about to go to bed, the necklace fell. He picked it up and smile "I wonder when I should give this back, what am I saying, I probably won't see her again anyway" he thought before turning of his light.

The next day he woke up extremely early to go jog. While jogging he saw a girl stretching on the bench. He watch as she took her foot of the bench and stretch her hand. "Speaking of the devil" he mumbles before running to her.

he stop before her " twinkle right?" he says

"yes, and you are" she says jogging now. kunj smile " lucky guess"

twinkle look at him, she didn't believe it was lucky guess, now she was creeped out. maybe iif i ignored him, he will leave, she thought jogging away. kunj followed her " who would have thought we would meet here" he says before continuing " do you live around the area? by the way my name is kunj" he says

twinkle annoyed ask him to shut up, this took him by surprise. " she stood infront of him, poking him "I dont know why your following me, but you should know i have a blackbelt. i'm not afraid to use it, she says. " now leave me alone" she says kunj tried to explain himself, but she just ran away, now afraid. twinkle scold herself for talking to him like that, she became afraid wondering if he will come after her or kidnap her.

kunj on the other hand confuse, smile before laughing. " what an interesting girl. now i wont leave you" he says

To be continued...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Since they were a bit long updates it took time for me to read it...
Awsm updates
This is sooo interesting...i never imagined twink like that...u r creative yaar
Such a new concept...
Maya uv cheapos hate them...
Kunj child marriage ????
Oho kunj...u wont leave twinkle right???
Waiting for next part
Update sooon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Nice update.
Very different concept.
Do update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
interesting concept
read both chapters
hating UV and Maya
and yay Kunj wont let go of twinkle Continue Soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Very interesting concept.
Don't know how I missed this.Catch up with all the updates .
Love Twinj.
Child marriage of Kunj very intriguing .
Uv and Maya two creeps .
Maya in India? Left UV already?
Can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3

The next day kunj woke up, he had a hunch that she will be there. Grabbing her necklace, he ran to the park. He look to see if she was there, but he couldn't find her. " where could she be?" He thought, he waited and waited but she didn't show up. Just when he was about to give up, he saw her running. He smile ready to go meet her, but stop when she was signaling him to move. Confuse he signal her why, and she turn around, making him look at her direction.

He saw bunch of dogs running behind her. "Is she afraid of dogs?" He says to no one. He saw one of the dogs about to bite her, so he quickly ran and grab her, pulling her to his chest. The dog bite his arm, leaving a mark. Twinkle seeing this became worried. Kunj grab a stick and throw it, making the dogs chase after it. "We better run before they come back", twinkle agreed. While running she couldn't help looking at his arm.

She told him to stop for a minute, which got him confuse, than she drag him to a tree and sat down. Kunj looking around could see flowers everywhere, he smirk and turn to her " don't tell me your about to confess your dying love to me" he says

Surprise at his accusations she grab his arm a little to rough " no I wasn't, I was just trying to treate your arm" she says, seeing her flustered face made him laugh " I was just joking" he says , twinkle still fumming took her safety kit out and senitize his hand. Kunj watch as she use her bandage to cover up the bite mark. He observe her for a while before looking away when she look at him " I don't like when people stare at me"

"I couldn't help myself, you intrigue me" he says

She stood up letting go of his hand before thanking him for saving her life, kunj told her it was no problem. " I'm surprise, for a girl who has a black belt, I would have thought she could handle three dogs"he says

" I could, but my fear prevents me from acting out" she says a little embarrassed.

Kunj gave her a knowing look" first, the plane, now dogs. You can say I'm like your personal hero" he teased

"Mera hero? You wish" she says before turning to leave, kunj ruff his hair, before remembering he has her necklace " oh shoot" he says running after her, but she was long gone. " maybe another time" he says

Elsewhere, twinkle walk in her house, kicking her shoes in the closet " mera hero? Please, he was just there at the right time. I can take care of myself fine" she says now sitting on the couch. Leela hearing this asks her what happens and she went on talking about kunj, how he save her and expect her to call him hero. Leela while listening smiles, " I don't see anything wrong with it , beta"

Twinkle stop talking gaping at her mom " why are you taking his side?" She says

"I'm not, I just think he fits the title since he helped my lovely daughter" she says now pinching her cheeks, twinkle frown at her action "stop that" she says, but her mom refuse. Leela finally let go, and scold her for not showering after exercising, not wanting to hear her lectures about hygiene she got up and walk upstairs.

Meanwhile, kunj went to work, in the meeting he showed people his newest design. It was great, and people love it. They asked him how it will work, and he says" these machine are touch screen, people while showing can select the food they want at the grocery and it will come out like a soda from a vending machine. This will be good for people who are clean freaks, we don't want people with germs to touch food that they see and dirty them like the lettuce and other stuff."

He smile thinking about it " we want everyone to feel safe, and eat good food. Would you eat a food that's been touched, would you even buy it knowing how brown it looks and opened it is?"

"No" one of his worker says

" there you go, these vending machine will be very helpful. If the food runs out, it automatically notify the workers, so they can be quick and ahead of time" he says

Everyone clapped at him, some say he was a genius while others deny that it will have some problems. After the meeting kunj decides to take them out to eat which they were happy to go. While walking to the nearest restaurant he saw Maya talking on the phone. Kunj told his workers to go in while he talk with his friend. He waited until she was done before clearing his throat. When Maya saw him she smiles.

He asked her how her business was going and she told him the statues. They walk in the restraunt and sat in the nearest table, talking about work, and catching up on things. While this was going on they were unaware of twinkle walking in with her mom and in laws. She was smiling excited to finally eat american food. Some of kunj co workers whistle when they saw her, but she ignored them and sat down, unaware of Maya and kunj on the opposite table with Maya back to hers.

To be continued...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved both chapter 2 & 3 .
Amazing update, do continue soon plz.
Edited by hailly - 9 years ago
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Chapter 4


Earlier

After twinkle showered, her mom and in law decides to take her out to eat. Twinkle told her it was fine, she rather stay in the house to catch up, but her mom insist saying it will be good for her to get to know India. Still she refused, her mom frown and thought of a way to get her out. "Twinkle" she says grabbing her attention " the restaurant we're going to has american food" she says making her daughter eyes spark.

Twinkle grab her mom eagerly dragging her out the house. Her in law shook their head before chuckling. Once everyone was in, they drove to the restaurant.

End flashback

Twinkle and her family sat down and look at the menu. She was impress with the restaurant design. For some reason it looked familiar to her, but that was crazy since she's never been here before. While eating she ignored the whistle and holler that was coming from the other table.

She roll her eyes when one of them got up to come to her table. The man wasn't ugly, but he wasn't her type. He asked her if she would like to dine with him, and twinkle excuse him saying she hates guys who can't see the big picture. He was about to ask her what she ment, when she points to her mother and in law. The man apologize before asking for her number.

" you are very cheap, can't you see I'm busy" she says raising her voice, by doing this people starts to notice. Kunj turn and frown when he saw one of his workers. He excuse himself and walk to the table. Maya was about to walk there as well when her phone rang. "I'm sure kunj will Handel it" she says before going to the bathroom.

" what's the problem here?" He says making ten eyes to turn to him. The man gulp while twinkle gap "YOU!" They both said

Kunj smirk while twinkle frown " should have known it would be you"he says

" what is that suppose to mean"

"You know exactly what I mean my twinkle" he says

Twinkle knit her brows together " anyway, is he part of your skim to annoy me"

Kunj confuse asks what skim. Twinkle told him not to play dumb, she told him his friend was disturbing her family peace by flirting with her. This made kunj smile, but it wasn't the usual cheerful smile, it was the one his coworkers know to well. " really is that right" he says looking at the man.

The man nervously shiver, sweating while wishing he could leave. The thing is kunj was never a happy person, when he was younger he use to do bad things. When his father was alive, kunj use to do his dirty work for him. His mom never knew what his dad job was, it was a secret.

One day when his mom was attacked because of his dad. He decides to change in order to do that, he went to college. When his dad passed away, he was to take over his dad business, but his mom refused to allowed him to take over.

When kunj graduated, he had no money, his mom house was going to be auction. The only way for him was to continue his dad business, while working one day. He decides to invent something small that could help his mom. He didn't realize it would make him billions in the future. Don't get him wrong he still makes deadly guns for goons, but he also tried to turn it into something positive, by selling it to the government and deplomat.

Twinkle annoyed that he's still there told her mom that she wasn't hungry anymore, and that they should leave. Kunj snap out of it and told her she doesn't have to leave, but twinkle ignored him and grab her jacket. Her mom conflicted payed and left. Sighing kunj turn to his friend, he tried to say something but kunj ignored him shutting him up with " your fired", this surprise the man.

Maya asked him if everything was ok, and he said yes. She wondered who the girl was that was yelling earlier. Meanwhile, twinkle finally calm down cross her arm "beta who was that?" Leela says

Twinkle fumming says " he is a stalker that won't leave me alone"

"Stalker?"" Is he the hero guy?" She asks

Twinkle nod " he's no hero, I don't understand why he's everywhere I turn" she says

" maybe it was an accident, I mean he could have been eating with someone" , twinkle denies it, she doesn't think so. Of he was stalking her she will have to report this to the police, she thought.

The next day twinkle went jogging, this time she decides to take a different route. While running she heard someone telling her to watch out. She look up but it was to late, a ball hit her right on the head, making her fall. Wimping in pain. The man walk to her , well more like jog to her, shirtless. The man told her not to worry and that he will take her to a hospital.

Twinkle rubbing her head look at the man, and frown. "You again" she says, before getting up. She got up so fast that her head became dizzy again. " I don't need help from you.stay away from me", kunj on the floor stood up, he told her to stop being difficult and take his help.

Twinkle refused, sighing, he told her fine. He will leave. She watch as he walk to his car and drove away. Twinkle sigh with relief, but she frown when it started raining. " why does this have to happen to me" she says holding her head when she started feeling dizzy " mam, what am I going to do. This migraine won't leave, and it became worse with the soccer ball"

She walk a few blocks, not caring that the shorts she was wearing is wet or her vest getting soak. She held on to a bench to stop the headache, asking in her head for help. Suddenly she heard a honk, she turn to see kunj in his car " get in twinkle" he says, but twinkle used her free hand to tell him to go away.

Kunj annoyed by her stubbornness, got out of the car and walk to her, twinkle feeling someone behind her turn her head. "What do you want now" she says trying her best to stare at him, but the rain was clouding her vision. "Your in pain" he says

"And how would you know that?"

"I just do" he says

"My pain has nothing to do with you, so just leave"

" normally I would have answer to your commend, but seeing my little twinkle all wet and very vulnerable, I just can't leave you. Only I can see you like this" he says

Twinkle blush hearing him say that. She could feel his strong hand grabbing her hips, lifting her up and carry her bridal style to his car. He use one hand to open the car before putting her in the seat. When he did this twinkle felt something I mean who wouldn't seeing a hot shirtless man, that could possibly be a Calvin Klein model if he wanted to. Their eyes lock as he buckled her.

Twinkle looks down feeling embarrassed. " why do you do this?" She says quietly, kunj look at her " do what?"

Twinkle looks up " why are you always flirting with me?" She says

Kunj move his head a little closer " its because your a tease"

Her mouth widen while leaning down to get in his face "Me a tease, I am not compare to you" she says looking at his chest. Kunj smirk " you like what you see" he says

"N-no", she says now pushing him to get away from her. Kunj leaned into her so close that she thought he was going to kiss her, but he just closed the door. Twinkle couldn't help but take him in, pale skin pulled tight over muscles, strong legs that held him up. Twinkle for some reason felt insecure, she turned red when realizing he could probably see her clevlage.

She looked down at his shorts , and could see the outlined of his you know on display, and she couldn't stop staring at it as he crawled across her getting to the driver seat. Twinkle snapping out of it asked him why he didn't just exit the car and walk to the drivers seat. Kunj just told her he didn't want to get wet. Twinkle argued he was already soaking so that's no excuse.

" your right, but this was more fun" he says turning the engine. Twinkle call him an idiot before leaning back on the chair and close her eyes. By the time he reached the hospital twinkle was asleep. He smile seeing her sleeping before saying she still a winy brat , but she looks cute sleeping. Frown when he heard her snore " I take it back" he says before getting out and taking her to the hospital.

To be continued...

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