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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 10

Twinkle while drinking her tea accidentally spit some out. She quickly wiped her mouth, apologizing. Kunj looks at his mom " why exactly are we getting married?" He says .

His mom look at twinkle than kunj " after what she did to you, you this is the right decision. Your lucky your not pregnant" she lectured, now looking at twinkle. This time it was kunj time to be surprise. Kunj mom grab her plate to put it in the sink, while she was busy twinkle glare at kunj. She grab his ears and pull him to the living room " I think your mom heard us" she says

" I figure much"

" you have to tell her the truth kunj" she says

" your right, we should. I will tell her now" he says unaware of his mom listening. As soon as she heard them coming, she ran to the sink and start washing dish. Kunj walking in clear his throat. " mam" he says

She turn around, and told him to bring more of the stuff on the table. He complies, kunj tries again to start the conversation, but she kept ignoring him. Asking him questions about twinkle and how excited she is to finally have a daughter in law. " mam... Please listen" he says

" I wonder what color would look good on her"

" mam... Me...and... Twink-"

" tell me later beta, I have to call your father" she says now reaching for her phone. Kunj frustrated finally blurted it out " mom, twinkle and I did nothing it was just a jok-" , he never got to finish when his mom fell. Worried kunj grab his mom, calling her name. It wasn't long before twinkle heard it " kunj what happend to her?" She says

" I don't know, she just fainted" he says worried

He picks her up and put her on the couch. Than he check her pulse. She's not OK he told twinkle. He called the family doctor and he came. Kunj asks him if she's fine, and the doctor told them she has high blood pressure. He asks kunj if his mom been stressing herself lately. Kunj thought about it, before nodding. He asks her if she's been depress or felt weak before, and he said yes.

The doctor told him, this is serious. He told him he needs to try to make his mom stress free and watch her sugar intake. He than asks him if his mom been stress over something lately " yes, she's been stressing herself trying to find a bride for me"

" I see" he says " I think you should try to make her happy by any means so she won't have a heart attack" he says. Kunj nod, the doctor prescribed some medicine for her and told kunj he will watch his mom, while he takes twinkle home. At first he didn't want to leave, but with the doctor ressuring him...he complied.

As soon as they left kunj mom open her eyes " did it work" she says

The doctor smile " he believed it, but are you sure this is a good idea. I mean kunj will be very angry when he finds out" he says

" your right, but she is perfect for him. He with thank me later" she says smirking. The doctor shook his head, he was glad his mom wasn't like that to him.

Elsewhere, the ride was silent. No one spoke, kunj hand was tightened around the wheel. Twinkle seeing this ressures him, that everything will be fine. " what if it won't twinkle, meree maan , mere lie Sab kuchh hai. I won't forgive myself if something happens to her" he says, twinkle understood his pain, just like him, her mom is her life. She wish their was a way to help him after all kunj is her friend, even though at times they fight.

Kunj while thinking park his car. Twinkle bit her lip embarrassed by what she was about to do, she unhooked her seat belt and called his name. Kunj turn to her and she kissed his forehead. Surprise kunj was about to ask why she kissed him, but she just pulls him in a hug. Massaging his hair. The silence was welcoming. After all they needed it, twinkle mom seeing the car opens her door to see a welcoming sight.

Both unaware of her presence until twinkle pull away. Embarrassed she quickly got out the car and say good bye to kunj. Kunj just stood their confuse, before smiling.

The next day kunj was waiting for twinkle, he had called her because he had decided since last night. He was standing their , with two balloons on each side. Their was a lot, with different color. He had a banner that says will you marry me, and people dressed as teddy bears holding a heart. Kunj looks at his golden watch, he smile and fix his white suit.

Twinkle while walking wonder why kunj asks her to meet him at a cafe. He told her to wear a nice saree, but she refuse. She wore a nice black dress and her hair was in a pony tail, showing her small earing. When kunj saw her, he instructed the band to start playing and right in front of her kunj starts to sing, well attempted.

Mere maula maula mere maula, man matwala kyun hua hua re
Man maula maula mere maula, mere maula,

Twinkle confuse watch as kunj dance , soon follow by the people behind him. The sign was hidden by the balloon so she still didn't know what kunj was up too. She laugh when kunj accidently bump into one of the bears, embarrassed, he watch her, smiling. One of the bears grab him, and he snap out of it. Twinkle turn when she saw bubbles floating around, she spun around smiling, trying to catch one, kunj grab her hand and dance with her. She tried telling him, she cant dance, and he told her just follow him. While dancing the bears blow bubbles around them, twinkle looks at kunj and he did the same.

She shyly looks down, but kunj grab her chin and gave her a peck. Before twinkle could react he ran, twinkle blushing ran after him. It wasnt long before kunj was drag away by the bears to finish the song. While the song was reaching its end, kunj gave her a flower follow by the rest of the people. He got down on his knees while the melody finish " mujhase shaadee karogee, TWINKLE!!"

Twinkle baffled didn't know what to say. Meanwhile, a man step out of his car. He took his sunglasses off " I'm home" he says smiling.

To be continued...
Edited by angelk1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Very nice update, you know only yesterday I was thinking about this story.
I'm really enjoying it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kardooks

Very nice update, you know only yesterday I was thinking about this story.

I'm really enjoying it.


Even though its a long update, i try to make it enjoyable to everyone. Thank you for liking my story :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Loved iy.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So I just updated two stories, so I will update this and ragna story tomorrow. My brain needs to refresh and get some ideas lol
Edited by angelk1 - 9 years ago
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Chapter 11



Twinkle eyes cross before fainting. Kunj worried quickly got up and ran to her. " twinkle!!" He yells, they took her to the hospital and the doctor told him she will be fine. Kunj sigh with relief, he watch as leela walks in asking for her daughter. When she saw him she walk to him and asks what happens.
He was about to explain when he got a call from Maya. He answered and excuse himself. Leela told him to go if its an emergency, he says its nothing just my friend wants me to meet her friend. " he must be important, you should go" she says

" are you sure?"

" yes, I will take care of my daughter"

Once kunj left, she walk to the room. She calls her daughter name and she woke up. " twinkle what happens?"

Twinkle sit up " he propose mam"

" isn't that a good thing?"

" no, I'm not ready to get back in a relationship" she says

Her mom sigh " you need to let that incident go twinkle, how will you move on if you don't"

" NO!, I will never forget. He hurt me bad mam... Him and that GIrl I don't think my heart can handle another heart break."

" kunj seems like a good man. Just think about it" she says

But twinkle refuse to even think. She told her she's planning on avoiding him as possible. Leela frown, she told twinkle why she has to be so stubborn. " you can't avoid him forever."

" yes I can" she says determined

Elsewhere Maya and yuv were at a coffee shop. She was surprise he was back in India. Earlier, he had contact her saying he wants to meet up and catch up. She happily agree... So here they are now. He had ask her if her restaurant was going great, she explain everything and talked about kunj. This got his interest.

" kunj? Who is that" he says

Maya smirk " you don't remember kunj, he was your rival in high school. You two use to compete over everything...even me, you two were the best of buds." She says

Yuv thinking remembered now " amthat trader. After he won that track race he left me" he says not to friendly

" come on yuv, you still holding a grudge. I'm sure he has a reason" she says

Yuv ignored her words and asks her if her and kunj were dating. Maya laugh " I don't want to ruin what we have" she says

" if you keep waiting he will get snatched from your hand" he says " speaking of the devil" he mumbles seeing kunj.

Maya turn to see him, she got up and gave him a hug. Afterwards she asks him why he was dress so handsomely. Kunj chuckle before teasing her " what are you trying to say, I don't look handsome everyday"

" no silly, I was wondering. What's the occasion" she asks

Kunj was about to answer when he froze. He look at yuv and smile " yuvraj?" He says surprise

" kunj"

" what are you doing here... I mean long time no see" he stammerd. Yuv roll his eyes, seeing that thongs were about to get ugly decides to break the ice. " so spill what happen to make you dress up" she says

Kunj blush a little " I was trying to propose to this girl" he says

Maya laughs " let me guess aunty put you up to this"

Kunj blush " no, I actually like this girl" he says missing the sour look Maya showed not to long ago.

" really? What do you even know about this girl?" She asks to quickly

Kunj thought about it before smiling " I don't know much about her history, but the times I spent with her feels like a hundred years, like I know so much about her" he says
Maya tried ignoring the feeling in her heart. " so what was her answer?"

Kunj frown " she kinda fainted once I propose"

Hearing this Maya laugh. Yuv smirk " at least you still suck at getting girls" he says kunj glare at yuv.

Maya told him twinkle probably don't want to marry him. He should find someone else, " no... She is the one. I just have to be patient... She will come around" he says

Yuv smirk seeing the. Jealousy radiating from Maya. I guess it was good I came back. Things about to be like old times, he says thinking of when they were in high school. He remember Maya who was the new girl. Kunj and yuv were running away after they were caught peeping in the girls locker room.

They laughed while running . the principle told them he will expell them the next time this happens. While walking, the boys thought of what they had to go through to sneak in. Yuv decides to dress like a girl, while kunj got in the dirty laundry basket. " you had the best idea" yiv says

" but yours was good until your wig came off" kunj laughs

Yuv took out the money and hand it to kun " you win this round, next one will be my won" he says. They stop when they saw a confuse Maya searching for her class, yuv tap kunj and whistle maya 's way. " she's a hotty, I'm gonna go talk to her" he says. He walk to her asking if she needs help, she showed him her schedule and he told her where her class was.

She thank him, but stop when she saw kunj. She asks if he was his friend and he says yes. Maya tried to talk to kunj, but kunj ignored her. She frown at this, yuv nudge kunj and told him not to be rude. Kunj apologized before walking away. " what's his problem?"

Few weeks pass Maya still wasn't able to talk with kunj. It wasn't until one day she saw him reading in the library that she took interest in him. She thought he was just a thug that doesn't like education, but she was wrong. That day she approach him and they talk about business, they both found out they have something in common. This started their friendship.

The time Maya spent with them it was memorable. She fell for both boys charm. It wasn't long before yuv and kunj confess to each other about Maya. They were both surprise, and they got into a heated arguing...leading to them fighting in school. The principle had enough, he told them they will both get expelled.

Kunj and yuv plead to him and he told them he will forgive them, but they have to join the track team and work together. Yuv complained at first, but kunj interrupted him and agreed. Yuv was furious and they didn't talk for a week until Maya was able to convince them. So they joined track and kunj was really good. Yiv became jealous of the praises he gets so he practice everyday.

Maya decides to help him... Their they got even closer. It was durring the big competition both boys were ready, not just to win but to finally decides who gets Maya. It was a tough race, all the pressure yuv put on his legs led him to loose. When he had fall kunj turn back to help him, but he told kunj to go. He refused but he told kunj he needs to win for their school, so he did.

It wasn't long before yiv felt jealous. He was mad that he lost and probably lost the girl too. While he was in the infermery he was shock to see Maya, she confess to him and told him she loves him. She was unaware of kunj outside listening.

Kunj heart broken drop out of school the next week. Everyone was surprise, yuv had tried to convince him, but he told yuv that he needs to find himself and what he wants to do in life. He told him not to look for him before disappearing. That was the last time he ever saw his best friend, that was the last time he promise the next time he sees him, he will ruin him.

To be continued...

Preview

Twinkle after long thinking decides to face kunj. She went to his office and told him she do. He smile before hugging her. Everyone clapped for them.

Scene 2

Twinkle is scene looking for stuff to cook. She was talking to herself unaware of kunj passing her ingredience . she turn with the wooden spoon in her hand to walk to the fridge when she bumped into kunj. Both had an eye lock, she pout and told him he should be in bed and shoo him " OK mom" he playfully says before going up. He just stood on top of the stairs watching her.

Scene 3

Twinkle walking to her job bump into someone making their files fall " sorry" she says they both look up shock

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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
it's very very good 👏
and it's gradually becoming more intresting🤗 😃
continue soon
Edited by Diy0 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks, I haven't been updating because of my birthday Lil, but I'm glad you like
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So i heard sid is leaving the show, why does this always hPpen. Now their will be a leap where twinkle and yuv are married. Honestly i will not watch the show if that happens. Also z tv is getting on my nerve first they remove rachna and now sid and their story plan is he/ got shot or met with an accident. Its getting old, if ztv dont step up their game and do something new than i will stop watching that channel.
Honestly I'm tierd of the whole one women or men marrying two or three times and being replace.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 12




Ever since she got out of the hospital... Shes been avoiding kunj. He knew shes just trying to ignore his proposal so he gave her some time to think, but that soon change when he realize she refuses to pick up his call. He went to her job but they said she wasnt there, it was a lie of course because he saw her by the window hiding behind the curtains.

Then while grocery shopping he bumped into her. Their cart hit one another, at first he didnt know it was her, until he looks up. Boy was she shock, before he could say her name she turn and ran. He was confuse at first but he soon push his cart and ran after her " twinkle!" he says

Twinkle made a turn and look behind her. " leave me alone" she says

" twinkle we really should talk"

Twinkle turning back made another turn and grab what she was looking for. When she saw kunj coming closer she push her cart" twinkle please stop for a second" he replied but twinkle was adamant... She looks at him and told him to stop following her. Kunj eyes widen, he calls her name agIn but she yells at him and turn just in time to hit a stack of toilet papers.

The store manager came and glare at both of them " you two out!!!" he screams kicking them out of his store. They both pout protesting. " well.. I guess we can talk now, huh twinkle" he says turning to her with a smile. He look around to see her no where in sight, but stop when he saw her getting in a taxi. Determine, he quickly ran to the car. Twinkle seeing him got in quickly, she was about to close it when kunj hand was blocking it.

They stubornly kept pulling and pushing the door all while kunj tries to speak. The driver took his phone and took a picture of them. They both turn to him before attacking him. Twinkle pulling his hair while kunj trying to grab the phone. The taxi driver was holding his phone tight while screaming. He use his other hand to pull twinkle hair making her scream. Kunj seeing this told him he is trouble now. And open the car door to pull his leg, while the men kicks. This was how the police found them, he took all of them to the police station and they each wrote a statement.

The men lies saying they took their anger out on him when he told them to get out. Twinkle told the police he's lying, she told him he took their picture without their concent so he deserve to be here, the men scuff and called her a rude girl. He told the police men thats shes speaking back to him even though his old, this irratates twinkle and she starts speaking in english. The men told her this is not america but india. Twinkle ignores him and said some bad words in american.

Kunj sitting down, just watch the two. He was tiered and hungry. He wonder if he should speak to twinkle later... Yeah thats probably a good idea, he thought looking at his dirty shirt. It wasnt long before leela showed up and angrily lectures twinkle . twinkle points at the guy, the guy told the police to lock her in a cage when he saw her glaring at him. Leela sigh and grab twinkle by the ears and pull her out.

Kunj walk up to them and apologized. He told the men he should think before taking a person picture. He told the men he might actually loose his business. The man was about to speak but stop when he realize how scary kunj look. He quickly nod and turn away from him.

The next few days twinkle didnt speak to him. It rained a lot, kunj stood outside of twinkle house and scream the whole time... Saying he was sorry. Twinkle looking out the window told him to go home, but he refuses. He stood their for four hours, in the rain.leela told her to stop being stubborn, but she refuse.

It was late at night when kunj gave up. He decided he wont see her anymore. The next day kunj was depress, his mom seeing this decides to do something about it. She calls twinkle while kunj was at work. When she came she told twinkle she doesnt have to accept her son if she doesnt want to. Twinkle told her shes just not ready. Kunj mom told her its fine. She got up to go upstairs when she fell and faint. Twinkle scream and call the ambulance. They took her to the hospital and who was the doctor... None other than rheir family doctor.

He told twinkle kunj mom condition is getting worse. She needs to relax more. Twinkle feeling bad, decides to accept kunj. The doctor told her not to tell kunj about what happen. It will make him worry, twinkle agree. It wasnt long before she enter kunj office. She knock and enter, she looks at kunj and told him she accept. Kunj confuse at first smile and walk to her before hugging her. Everyone clapped for them, twinkle now realizing people were around hides her face in embarrassment.

To be conribued...
Edited by angelk1 - 9 years ago

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