Twinj Threeshot: Bedroom Dynamics || Part 3 Up!

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Iansomer1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

amazingly fantastic.

welcome to the forum so glad u r a twinj shipper too.

I loved how u described their gradual progress of friendship and relationship. loved the 2nd chaptr too both feeling attraction and love for eachother but think its unrequited was so cute. please continue soon. awesome story

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countingstarz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Omg you are an excellent writer , I'm a fan of your writing style tbh 😳 The slow buildup to them falling in love and the subsequent frustration is very realistic and I hope the show portrays it like this. Looking forward to part 3 ! x

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pkaur92

@pkaur92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

This is awesome. Tbh I havent seen Tashan-e-ishq in two weeks now because I'm just not liking the current track. But this OS is how I want their life to be :)

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greenbutterfly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

love part 2 😊eagerly waiting for part 3😊😊😊

Edited by greenbutterfly - 9 years ago

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Gunjhun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Part 3 up! its in two sections because it was too big 😳

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

This was a superb story and I absolutely loved it! If only the show had something like this...

I am eagerly looking forward to your next story. Please post it soon.

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Sherni_Jerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

brilliant finish.
excited to read new story.
visit more often and write more

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Iansomer1

@Iansomer1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

It was brilliant. loved it to the end.

U have written twinj as every fan wanted to see in the show i so hope this is how its shown.

From the head massage to breakfast support i loved it.

Please do consider on continuing this and showing manohar's reaction when kunj excels at his project.

That small line abt usha accepting twinkle was so nice to read.

over all it was a perfect 3 shot. wish it could be longer. u r gifted write plz dont stop writing on twinj. looking forward to ur next story

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ayezarahmat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

will definitely wait for ur another stories well written and amazing one i think so all of u want to see twinkle in red saree bcoz i have read one or two more stories where she was described in red saree so now i desperately want her to wear dat in d show ...