Twinj SS || The Sweetest Suffering

Kunj frowned. His idea of making Twinkle 'suffer' wasn't coming very easily. Back there Twinkle was also wondering about the same thing, but gladly. She didn't really want to have to retaliate and make Kunj suffer, but she was not one to stand down. In the meantime a lightbulb went off in Kunj's head.

Kunj and his family had to got to Twinkle's house due to some wedding arrangements. Kunj seized this window of opportunity and quickly grabbed Twinkle's hand and led her to another room where they could talk without being disturbed.
Twinkle, annoyed at herself for going with him so easily, grumbled," What is it Kunj?"
Kunj, looked at her in all seriousness, and said," I decided it would make more sense to make you suffer before we got married rather than after. Well, actually, it depends on you really."
"Wha...?" Twinkle thought she might have actually succeeded this time in making Kunj lose all clarity of mind.
"I'm going to make you suffer the sweetest suffering." Kunj informed
Twinkle looked at him with a raised brow.
"I'm going to make you fall in love with me." Kunj explained, looking quite pleased with himself.
"What will that do, you idiot? And how do you think you'll make me fall in love with the likes of you?" Twinkle rolled her eyes at the obvious flaws in his plan.
"Simple. You'll be torn. You won't want to fall in love with me, but you will anyway, and you'll be constantly wondering whether I love you back. Its the sweetest suffering." Said Kunj.
"Yeah, right," Twinkle scoffed, "You plan on doing that, how, exactly?"
"By doing the sweetest things for you. Making you feel special. Looking at you like I am now as if you're the most important thing to me, and it'll be so easy for you to get lost in my eyes."
With the most effort she could muster, Twinkle broke her eyes from the lock they were entranced in and, as she knew she would have to, retaliated.
"Hah. Just you wait, Kunj Sarna, and you won't know what hit you. After all, our lives have been as unpredictable as say, an Indian drama, and in those the male lead ALWAYS falls first. My love will sweep you away." She said triumphantly.
"We'll see," said Kunj with utmost confidence, tucking a stand of hair behind her ear before he left to join his family.

"Wait a second," thought Twinkle," Isn't he supposed to be wound up about Alisha?"
"Hey," wondered Kunj," Isn't she supposed to be heartbroken after Yuvraj? I guess it's for the best anyway."

Little did they know how easy it would be to make the other succumb to 'the sweetest suffering.'

^^i know this one is a bit strange, but I hope you like it anyway! :)^^

I like it, sweet suffering. Would love to see that in the show.😆

Originally posted by: enhance

I like it, sweet suffering. Would love to see that in the show.😆

Thankyou:) I'd like to see it too, especially since all at the moment Kunj can manage is being heart-wrenchingly sweet 😆

Would it be possible for you to continue this? I absolutely love the concept of it and right now it's all I can think of. I want to see how Kunj will try to make her fall in love and see if he ends up falling instead. And Twinkle constantly questioning the motive behind Kunj's actions; are they for basic humanity or specifically tailored for her?

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Would it be possible for you to continue this? I absolutely lovethe concept of it and right now it's all I can think of. I want to see how Kunj will try to make her fall in love and see if he ends up falling instead. And Twinkle constantly questioning the motive behind Kunj's actions; are they for basic humanity or specifically tailored for her?

Please, please, pleaseee continue it if possible!

Gah! When I was writing this I thought it was more prologue type rather than like a one shot :Pbut all I've ever done is a one shot based around a simple idea but I feel like this would need loads of ideas to be generated I don't know how I'd do that unless I had someone to help me or co-write with me, but otherwise I don't know.

Oh wait, here's an idea: if you guys put down your suggestions I could incorporate them into the story and it would make it a million times easier! 😃

Originally posted by: LightingHope

Gah! When I was writing this I thought it was more prologue type rather than like a one shot :Pbut all I've ever done is a one shot based around a simple idea but I feel like this would need loads of ideas to be generated I don't know how I'd do that unless I had someone to help me or co-write with me, but otherwise I don't know.

Oh wait, here's an idea: if you guys put down your suggestions I could incorporate them into the story and it would make it a million times easier! 😃

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

That will be a great idea! 😃

How long do you want the story to be? I mean do you want it as a legit Fan-Fic, Short Story, Three-Shot or what?

Also do you want to stop at the wedding day or go beyond that?

Uhh, Idk, I don't want it to be a fanfic and If it's going to be long I'd say like 5 more chapters so it'll be like a short story.

I don't know if we'll get up to the wedding or not:P I'll only be able to really plan it out in the morning when more people give ideas (here it's 00:35)

Originally posted by: Propinquity.

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#666666">Oh gosh.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#666666">This is so cute.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#666666">Kunj and his genius plans.😆</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#666666">I agree, you totally need to continue this!</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#666666">Waiting to read more :)</font>

Thanks, I'll try my best 😊

But I also need you guys to help me out, so if you get any idea,
Please say it 😆