TwiNj OS | 17th September 2015

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"Kunj Sarna! Tujh mein itni bhi manners nahi hai ki kisi ladki ke room mein aane se pehle knock karna chahiye." Twinkle scolded Kunj who stopped at the door. He then snuck his head in and began to look here and there around the room. "Ab aise shaturmurg ki tarah apna sar kya hila raha hai?" Kunj looked at Twinkle. "Shatur...what! Ye kaisa murg hota hai?" Twinkle palm smacked her forehead. "Kunj Sarna, ostrich ko Hindi mein shaturmurg kehte hain." Twinkle explained and waited for it to register in Kunj's mind that she called him an ostrich. "Oh I see." He smiled but it faded as he realized that Twinkle called him an ostrich. "Oye animal planet tune mujhe ostrich kaha!" "Haan, kaha toh! Kya kar lega?"

They glared at each other ready for tashan number... Uff even they had lost count. "Waise ek baat bata tu dhoondh kya raha tha?" Twinkle asked. "Ladki!" Kunj entered the room and locked it. "Ladki? Kya matlab ladki dhoondh rahe the? Itni khoobsoorat ladki dikhayi nahi deti." Twinkle stood with her hands on the waist. "Ladki? Tu kis angle se ladki hai? Wo bhi khoobsoorat! Mujhe toh tujh mein bandariya dikhti hai. Waise tu ye kyun bhool jaati hai ki ye room mera bhi hai Twinkle Sarna." Kunj smirked. "Mera naam Twinkle Taneja hai." "Haan but tu meri wife hai toh Kunj Sarna ki biwi hone ke naate Twinkle Sarna hai tu." "Lekin sirf 2 mahino ke liye. Ye mat bhooliyo ki humaare beech deal hui hai." "Deal nahi deal version 2. Version 1 toh tune flop kar di shadi se inkaar na karke." "Haan haan jaise tune toh Amritsar ki sabse oonchi building par chadke inkaar kiya na!" Once again they were at logger heads.

"Main kaise inkaar karta mere dad ki reputation ka sawal tha." "Haan toh maine bhi mummyji ki izzat ka sochkar hi inkaar nahi kiya." Twinkle and Kunj both looked away from each other while saying this. Every time they argued about not backing off from the marriage they gave the same explanation looking away from each other. Twinkle saw that Kunj was a bit sad. "Kya hua Kunj tu sad kyun hai?" Kunj was sitting on the bed. "Alisha ne mere liye Karwa Chauth ka vrat nahi rakha. Tujhe pata hai mera accident hote hote reh gaya. Ye toh accha hai ki ma mere liye pray karti hai nahi toh aaj toh main nikal liya tha." Twinkle put her hand on his mouth. "Babaji na kare ki tujhe kabhi kuch ho. Tujhe sharam nahi aati aaj ke din aisi manhoos baat karte hue wo bhi mere saamne. Haan haan kaise sharam aayegi. Jo aadmi chahta hai ki koi doosri aurat uske liye Karwa Chauth ka vrat rakhe use kaisi sharam. Alisha ne vrat nahi rakha iss baat ka bura lag raha hai aur teri biwi jo yahan subah se bhooki pyasi baithi hai uski koi khushi nahi hai tujhe." Twinkle was angry at Kunj.

"Doosri aurat? Ye Alisha mere liye doosri aurat kab se ban gayi?" Kunj scratched his head. "Jab se teri aur meri shaadi hui hai tabse. Jis din tune mujhe ye mangalsutra pehenaya, meri maang bhari aur phere liye mere saath uss din se teri life mein har parayi aurat doosri aurat hai, including Alisha. Dekh Kunj 3 months ke liye hi sahi par hum dono husband wife hain. So tab tak no Alisha. Main teri life ki number 1 ladki hoon and only ladki hoon. Biwi ka number husband ki life mein humesha number 1 hota hai." Twinkle sat with her hands crossed at her chest.

"Aur ma?" Kunj asked like an innocent little baby. "Kunj, ma ka darja toh sabse upar hota hai, biwi se bhi." Twinkle smiled. Kunj was admiring her beauty. She looked gorgeous in a red lehenga just like she did on their wedding day. "Twinkle tu khush toh hai na?" Kunj wanted to know if she was happy with him. "Haan main toh bahut khush hoon. Dekh na mummyji ne mujhe kitna khoobsoorat lehenga diya hai. Aur ye choodiyaan ye jewelry sab mummyji ne mujhe sargi mein diya hai. Pata hai mujhe kai baar aisa laga ki wo mujhe tere liye fit nahi samajhti, wo mujhse khush nahi hai but aaj unhone mujhe itne pyar se ye sab diya. Aaj mujhe pheli baar unka pyar mila hai. Main bahut khush hoon." Kunj was happy seeing Twinkle happy even if it was because of her receiving love from her MIL.

Suddenly he jumped off the bed as he saw something. "Kya hua? Current laga kya?" Twinkle was also miffed at him as they were having a good moment even if it was while talking about her MIL and Kunj had to spoil it with his weirdo act. Kunj avoided looking at Twinkle. "Wo Twinkle tere peeche..." Twinkle turned and saw that her choli dories were still undone. She was trying to tie them Kunj had walked in. She saw Kunj blush and decided to have more fun with him. "Kyun ab kya hua? Main ladki nahi bandariya hoon na toh dekhna dekhne mein kyun sharma raha hai?" She turned her back to face him and moved towards him. She was very close to him. Kunj moved her hair to cover her exposed back. "Main kisi ko bula ke laata hoon."

Kunj was trying to escape the situation but Twinkle caught his hand. "Ruk! Kise bualyega?" "Mami, masi, chachi, bua, ma, bhabhi... Kisi ko bhi bula loonga. Waise bhi aaj toh ghar par aurton ka mela laga hua hai." "Aur kahega kya? Ji wo kya hai na ki humaari shaadi ko 1 month ho gaya hai but meri wife ko uske choli ki dori baandhne mein help chahiye aap kar dengi." Kunj was still avoiding looking at her which irritated Twinkle. "Dekh Kunj mein humaari bedroom ki private life ko public nahi karna chahti." "Toh ab kya kare?" "Tu baandh de." A baffled Kunj looked at Twinkle. "Main? Main kaise baandh sakta hoon?" Twinkle scanned Kunj from top to bottom. "Haw! Mujhe nahi pata tha ki itna taad jitna lamba hone par bhi tujhe shoe laces nahi baandhni aati." "Shoe laces? Ab ye shoe laces kahan se beech mein aa gayi?"

"Tujhe meri choli ki dori baandhne mine problem ho rahi hai na? Toh ek kaam kar ye mat soch ki tu apni khoobsoorat biwi ki backless choli ki dori baandh raha hai. Tu ye soch ki kisi chote bacche ki shoe ki laces baandh raha hai. Tab toh baandh lega na? Toh chal ab jaldi kar mujhe der ho rahi hai. Main nahi chahti ki main late ho jaaoon aur meri acchi bahu ki impression kharab ho." Kunj took Twinkle and stood before the mirror. He moved her hair to the front. His touch sent a chill down her spine. Her breathing was getting heavy. She looked into the mirror and her eyes met his. Kunj tied her dori without breaking the eye contact. His every touch was awakening a woman in her, a woman who had desires and wished for her husband to fulfill them.

"Ho gaya." Kunj moved her hair back as to covering it. He also took her dupatta and covered her head. "Perfect." He whispered in her ear. He heard a sniffle and saw tears in her eyes. "Kya hua? Tu ro kyun rahi hai? Main kuch galat kiya kya? I am sorry." Kunj could not see her tears. He cupped her face and asked her once again if he had wronged her in any way. "2 mahine baad tujhe Alisha mil jaayegi toh tu mujhe bhool jaayega na? Tu mujhe kabhi kabhi yaad karega ki nahi?" Kunj had never seen Twinkle this side at least not for him. She was always emotional like now for Yuvi never him. He wiped her tears. "Yaad use kiye jaata hai Twinkle jise hum bhool sake. Main toh tujhe kabhi bhool hi nahi paaoonga kyunki..." Kunj stopped as he realized what he was about to say next and it was not right. She was not his. She belonged with Yuvi. She loved Yuvi and not him. He could not lose Twinkle as a friend by telling his feelings to her. He was moving away from her when she caught his hand.

"Kyunki...? Kyun tu mujhe bhool nahi paayega? Bol na Kunj? Bol na wo jo tere dil mein hai. Wo jo tune kabhi nahi kaha par maine teri aankhon mein padha hai. Wo jo maine teri khamoshi mein suna hai. Wo baat jiski wajah se maine humaari deal ko tod diya aur tujhse shadi kar li. Bol na Kunj. Dekh Karwa Chauth ke liye tu mere liye koi bahut expensive gift laya hoga na? Mujhe wo nahi chahiye mujhe tere pyar ka tofha de de. Wo mere liye anmol tohfa hoga. Dekh kunj bol de nahi toh main kabhi tujhse baat nahi..." "I love you." Before Twinkle could complete her threat Kunj confessed his love to her. He pulled her towards him. "Main nahi jaanta kab, kaise par Twinkle mujhe tujhse, teri non-stop bak bak se, tere gusse se, teri har baat se, teri har aadat se, tere har nakhre se, pyar ho gaya. Maine bhi deal ka maan nahi rakha aur tujhse shadi kar li. Main Kunj Sarna Twinkle Sarna se bahut bahut bahut pyar karta hon, dewaano ki tarah pyar karta hoon. I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!! I LOVE YOU Twinkle Sarna." Kunj lifted her in his arms and began to twirl in his spot.

"I love you too Kunj Sarna." Twinkle whispered in his ear. "Ye kya? Itna dheere se?" Kunj pouted. "Kunj tu iss ghar ka beta hai. Tera Elaan-e-Ishq sunkar koi tujhse kuch nahi kahega. Main iss ghar ki bahu hoon sab mujhe behsharam kahenge agar main chilla chillakar I love you Kunj kahoongi toh." Twinkle put her fingers on the corners of his lips and turned his pout into a smile. A naughty thought came to Kunj. "Accha theek hai pyar ke baare mein chilla chillakar bata nahi sakti but apna pyar dikha toh sakti hai na?" Kunj pouted his lips and moved towards hers. She put her hand in between before the lips could meet. "Kunj aaj mere saath tera bhi vrat hai." "Tujhe kaise pata maine Karwa Chauth ka vrat rakha hai tere liye."

Twinkle pulled his cheeks. "Aww mera coochie poochie tu kitna loving and caring hai. Mere saath tune bhi vrat rakha but main iss vrat ki nahi uss vrat ki baat kar rahi hoon." "Aaj kaunsa vrat hai other than Karwa Chauth?" Twinkle was feeling shy but she explained to him what Usha had told her about maintaining physical distance from the husband during the vrat days. "Tujhe idea hai India mein ladkiyaan kitne vrat rakhti hain!" Kunj was not in agreement about vrat ke din vrat. "Kunj main thodi na saare vrat rakhoongi. Sirf kuch jo teri life, humaare rishtey aur humaari khushi ke liye honge." She hugged Kunj but he did not hug her back. "Hug allowed hai Kunj." He smiled and hugged her back.

"Chaand nikal aaya!" They heard some girls shout. Twinkle broke the hug. "Chal Kunj chaand nikal aaya." "Mera chaand toh kab ka nikal aaya." He whispered in her ear. "Tu kitni cheezy liney maarta hai." Kunj pouted again. Twinkle rested her chin on his chest and snaked her arms around his neck. "Ek baat boloon?" "Kya hai?" "Tu jab bhi aisi cheezy line maarta hai na mera dil tch makkhan ki tarah pighal jaata hai." "Sacchi?" "Muah...cchi." She smiled and winked at him. She was at the door when she turned and blew a kiss at him. "Muah!" "Twinkle mujhe ched mat." "Accha kya kar lega?" She blew one more kiss just to tease him a little more and ran. "Twinkle Sarna, tu toh gayi!" Kunj followed her.

On this night with moon as their witness Kunj and Twinkle celebrated their 1st Karwa Chauth and confessed their love to each other vowing to be together forever and ever after.

The next night they celebrated their love by turning into one body, one soul again and again.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW!! Cvs read this!! I want this in the show!!
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wow this one was awesome
loved it
thnx
pls write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!! Wow!! Wow!! Outstanding!! Amazing!! Beautifull!! Fantastic!! I just cant explain in words how much i loved this and how good it is. Seriously loved each and every sentence. You've got so much talent. Please write moree:):)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SnigdhaGautam

WOW!! Cvs read this!! I want this in the show!!

Thank you for reading and commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Outstanding.
It was an awesome OS and very well written.
Liked the entire concept.
The sudden Confession was just lovely!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow wat an awesome and beautiful piece. i loved it totally do write more OS on twinj u wrote this one with so much emotions and humour. i loved it. the confession was so cute and supersweet.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really awesome os...if u have written more on twinj plz pm me.
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Originally posted by: KhushiLovesZaya

Wow!! Wow!! Wow!! Outstanding!! Amazing!! Beautifull!! Fantastic!! I just cant explain in words how much i loved this and how good it is. Seriously loved each and every sentence. You've got so much talent. Please write moree:):)


Thank you so much

Will write when a new idea comes 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome
I love Karva chauth's os and this was just perfect
loved it

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