TRYST WITH LOVE -SOUL SIS COLLAB FF {chp 8,9:pg 24 update} - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
eagerly waiting for next parts...
thank you for pm vrinda
keep writing soul sisters
with love
RIDDHIMA
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: RIDDSI

eagerly waiting for next parts...

thank you for pm vrinda
keep writing soul sisters
with love
RIDDHIMA


Thnx riddhima

Vil pm u surely
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
KINDLY ALLOW ME TO KILL U DII?????😡
Dont ask me d reason...u knw it well
M srsly pissed off
BYE
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: -MysticAura-

KINDLY ALLOW ME TO KILL U DII?????😡

Dont ask me d reason...u knw it well
M srsly pissed off
BYE


Y????
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ikshu

nice continue soon


Wil for sure😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Coz u introduced THE soulsisters without even telling me!!
And wht abt my plot??
Or r u planning to chuck me out of soulsis??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sumthing like this...
See I changed my siggy...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: -MysticAura-

Coz u introduced THE soulsisters without even telling me!!
And wht abt my plot??
Or r u planning to chuck me out of soulsis??


We can nvr chuck u out of soul-sis...
We didnt use ur plot as u werent dere...

So dis plot is of me n cherry n hence we jst introducd us n not u...

We can work on ur plot later in future...

N we too love u alot so now jst close dis chappy...

U qrent writing this one hence no introduction for u... n teko infrm kaise krte???? Were u online...??????😡

So now jst cut-off the topic

N m very serious about it...
I dont want to here anything of dis sort frm u agn,not atleast overhere... if u want to discuss jst cum on scrap or pm me or cherru...

N for dis one we r gonna use Soul-Sisters which include jst me n cherru...
D odr collab of ours were we three vil be writing togthr vil hv u...



N thnx for ur siggy...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39



In a decorated room of a wrecked building

An old lady was busy consoling a 15 year old girl,"Y are u taking tension everything will be great."
G-"ma'am u won't understand the pressure... I don't know k what will happen this time" said bitting her nails.
O.lady-"nothing bad will happen coz my child is a topper. U always top in ur class child then why are u taking tensions this time."
G-"ma'am this time it is different...it is THE BOARDS RESULTS. School mei I had to just compete with my classmates but here this time there are toppers,brilliance all round the country to compete with. Mere jaise na jaane kitne toppers ne exam diya h. Aise mei how can I be assured that will score good?" She sqid twitching her lips.
O.lady-"arre but m sure my sweetie will score great." She said kissing her head. Their lively moment was broken by a loud shout... "JEET GYI BHI MAIN JEET GYI,MERI SANYU JEET GYI...OYE KUTTE I SAID U MY SANYU WILL WIN"
G-"kanu...kanu..." she ran outside her dorm,"kanu kya hua h result bata na"
K-"sanyu meri jaan main jeet gyi,tu jeet gyi,hum jeet gye...u scored 97.78%...wah meri jaan kya kamal kiya h tune uss bunty ka toh muh hi todh diya...bechara chala tha meri friend ko challange karne sirf 78% hi laa paya"

N the two girls danced their heart out celebrating their victory.

"K.A.N.U..." and with the shout woke up a poor soul in an isolated room.

O.LADY-"SANYU MY CHILD"
S-"MA'AM I..I...vo...v...ooo.
...k...ka...kanu"
O.lady-"ssshhh... kuch nhi hua hai bacha... everything is fine."
She was consoling the poor angel when a mattren entered the room.
M-"ma'am vo the results are out our sanyu has scored 92% in her plus-two level. Congrats girl" Smiled the lady at sanyu
O.lady-"congo God bless u my child"
S-"thnx ma'am wish kanu yaha hoti toh..." n with this she broke into sobs.

IN ANOTHER PART OF CITY

In a bunglow

A boy of near about 18 was was busy playing.

A lady entered shouting,"rd ye kya kar rha hai jab dekho ye hi sab. I m puzzled of u n I swear I'm gonna throw all this out"

Rd-"no mom plz don't do this. It will hurt u when u pick these" teased the boy.

Renuka(re)-"ufff m fade-up of this guy. U n ur witty remarks. Do u hv any idea that u hv ur results today?"

Rd kept mum n was busy in what he was doing.

A man in mid 40s entered.

Man-"offo renu why are u taking so much tension? Our son is a champ look at that rack full of the trophies,medals our son won. He is a champ whether it is studies or basketball or swimming he is the best."

His speech was broken by a beep in his cell.

Man-"rd,my son,now leave this machine n come here n hug me"

Yes u heard it right he was busy working or should i say playing on a machine. Ofcourse afterall RSS is no a kid. He has spent his childhood with screwdriver n screws n grease. A born genius he was.

Man-"come fast champ u owe it. U scored a grt 99.99% in ur plus-two." He said hugging him.

"Arre harsh sirf apne bete ki hi tariff karta rahega ya will u appreciate my child too?" Commented a man entering the house.

H-"aree jai beta apka bhi results tha na? Kitna percent secure kiya?"

J-"uncle 87%" said the boy.

H-"grt."

J. Dad-"te toh bolna padega harsh we really have talented children. Rd basketball n swimming mei champion."

H-"aur jai swimming n weight-lifting"

What game life plays in the same city,in different parts, two souls had their results,both scoring well-enough but one had tears in eyes n other had happy smile. I guess this is called fate.

~~SCENE SHIFTS TO A FLAT~~


"Rewa beta where are u????"

A girl was sitting infront of her desktop,refreashing the page again and again.

Re-"mom m in my room."

Rewa mom(RM)-"beta aise baar baar page reload karne se u won't get results before the alloted time."

Re-"mom u... how can u be so casual. I mean dusre parents toh hyper ho jaate hai results k time par, howcome u r so chilled out?"

RM-"coz I know my daughter is a great girl n will surely score good-enough"

This mother-daughter moment was interrupted by a 'ting' sound from desktop.

RM-"go girl enter ur U.I.D."

She typed her U.I.D. n waited for a moment before her result cropped-up.

Re-"yup mom!!!! I got 84%"

RM-"congo my love. See I told u that u will score good marks. Love you." She kisses her daughter's forhead.

This is the love of a great mother-daughter duo who lives for each other and love each other like the most precious thing in world.



Signing-off till next time

#Soul-Sisters(vrinda n cherry)





Edited by vrinda65 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Nice update
Loved it

Introductory part
Poor sanyu having nightmares
Why she's so scared and upset
She's missing her kannu

Rd the genius he's so happy
Thank God here rd has normal life with loving parents


I liked rewa and her mom bond


Wtng for next
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

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