Fallen Phoenix (Swasan): Chapter 4; P-09 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
yeahhh!!!!!

i yam in lub already.
what a killer title.

and Air force story. and you are writing.
gonna be kick ass.

all the very best Dyuti for new beginnings. may the journey be memorable. and beautiful.
cheers!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
The prologue is tantalising and I'm already excited for the further story. Two head strong people with their ego and insecurities falling in love is such an amazing concept. And set in a deserted terrain, what more does a reader like me want! Update soon.
I know I have disappeared from the forum since a very long time. I'm yet to catch up with yours and others' fabulous stories. Heard you were in the top ten 1st set of alpha writers. Congratulations for that. Completely deserving for a story like Zephyr vs Tempest.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Wow Interesting love to read
Tnx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dyuti 😃
That's intriguing!! Indeed a splendid startšŸ‘
Edited by sandhiya_1195 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: raaz19

Awesome story and lovely start hooked already



Dear Raazia,

Thanks for your encouragement. Though it's too early to give those extremely nice compliments. 😃

Loads of love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">yeahhh!!!!!

i yam in lub already.
what a killer title.

and Air force story. and you are writing.
gonna be kick ass.

all the very best Dyuti for new beginnings. may the journey be memorable. and beautiful.
cheers!
</font>



Mwwah! Loads of flying kisses... šŸ˜† 😃 ā¤ļø Air Force special you know! 😳
The title is almost like Fallen angel, right? That reminds me of something again...you know... šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜†

Anyways It's always great to be wished by my dear girl, and I know with you the journey will be memorable .

Love,
Dyuti
Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Nivijo

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">The prologue is tantalising and I'm already excited for the further story. Two head strong people with their ego and insecurities falling in love is such an amazing concept. And set in a deserted terrain, what more does a reader like me want! Update soon.</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">I know I have disappeared from the forum since a very long time. I'm yet to catch up with yours and others' fabulous stories. Heard you were in the top ten 1st set of alpha writers. Congratulations for that. Completely deserving for a story like Zephyr vs Tempest.</font>
<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Love,</font>
<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Nivi</font>



Dear Nivi,
First of all, welcome back! I hope you people visit the forum sometimes as I really wish to complete my stories here.

Coming to the story, more than the love story, the place and Swasan's background inspired me to write these story . Yes unfolding their complex personalities is gonna be fun for me. And I always loved to write about forests and deserts. So I'm writing for myself too!

Thanks... for your lovely wishes . I'm still astonished about that list... Zephyr vs Tempest had most shaky start, still that's my favourite because it got me love and recognition. And few very close friends and Lil sisters including you!

Love,
Dyuti


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Wow Interesting love to read

Tnx for pm



It's my pleasure dear... and thanks to you to! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Wow dyuti.
Amazing start I must say...I seriously enjoyed the setting of this story..desert n two partners stranded..story seems promising..swasan nokh jhok are always treat to read...excited for this really..update soon...ZvT too also...

Love
Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: iamreader



Dear Raazia,

Thanks for your encouragement. Though it's too early to give those extremely nice compliments. 😃

Loads of love,
Dyuti


Not at all dear pleasure is mine šŸ˜› knowing from your past stories there will a percent balance of action suspense and romance and information one am looking forward to this journey already...

Trust me you will do a great job like always...

Take care dyuti šŸ˜›

See you soon

Razia

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