Fallen Phoenix (Swasan): Chapter 4; P-09

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

RES - will unres soon, pinky promise😳

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kojagorimalik

@kojagorimalik

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Okk hot ending and sensuous talk and at last i closed my eyes at last as usual too *sanskari*

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Dyuti darling...

Wohooo such a brilliant update...subtitle is quite catchy...☺️ n update did live up to it...

Well i liked the maya demuto final rescue..but how the hell they put them there???😲

Swara did some stripping in the line of duty to rescue maya n others..sanky played saint for sure...protecting swara from prying eyes...their fight while stripping was so sweet..he was being possesive and protective...the whole rescue mission went well...most credit goes to swara..she did get some bruises, risked her life..which made sanky little anxious..n he did not wait for her to come n met her halfway through harness down the pit..that was thoughtful of him..she needed that...afterr that mishap..swara clung to sanky n then it was just strong attractive pull between them...both so close...words of seduction were uttered..it made me blush...aww i loved it so much...😳

Excited for next now..😉

Love u

Talia

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res, quite a bit under weather, will unres as soon as possible.

Chapter 3 was brilliant - I am in awe with the descriptions you have given and for once this rambling self has run out of words. In short, it was a edge of the seat, handle gripping update. And kudos for the descriptions, it was so beautifully blended I could simply visualise.

What I liked best - Swara Fangrirling as certain Sanskaar (how could I not like it), his unnatural concern brushed off her, his admission that she reminded of who he had been in his younger days and finally his confidence that she could indeed rescue him.

On an aside, those little details of the stew, the diamond merchant knowing how well money can make people dance - perfectly set the ambience. One small query - Swara's analysis of love - based on her parents' history one that could effect her future with Sanskaar.

Once again, a bow of appreciation, for giving a story set in an unusual geography and profession and making it so natural and real.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
RES - will unres soon, pinky promise😳

Firstly, I have to say that I read your response to Talia and have a slightly different take, yes it is the SwaSan fans who might read it initially, but subsequently it is the story that takes it over. And here it is the story which is the hero, do not undersell yourself.

Please Sanskaar, do tell, how do you feel about Swara Sigh, I can understand the african rainfall turning to a firestorm, all the more as it seems to have set both on fire.

Believe me this was such a pick me up update (I do not care if it was supposed to be adrenaline inducing, it simply set a different hormonal rush😉 But still, brilliant. I loved everything, especially Sanskaar's saint versus Swara's siren😉 And as usual, your other characters, adding the necessary sprinkle and sparkle.

And now I cannot wait.

Love,

Nyna