Swasan FF:'A Trip to the past'(Ch 13&14 on pg 18[26/7/17

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jess_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

yayy.. new story.. would love to read this one too nita..:-D

thanks for the PM.. and do send PM for future updates.. :-)

yet to read the 1st chapter..

will read soon..

love

Jessica

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Nita u become superwoman dear 😆
you are on roll new story great but
first I must complete ur others updates that may be 8 to 10 updates in 4 stories to cover than I start it.
& Ramadan starting Sunday so if reply late or Missing some days don't sad I will surely catch all.
Take care buddy
Bye
with loads of love

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Beautiful just love it.

Just can't explain how much I love it I have no words for describe such a great chapter

👏 👏 👏

⭐️ ⭐️

Update soon

Due to Ramadan I may miss it few
But will comments as soon as possible
Once read it

😉

Edited by Swasain - 8 years ago

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kritz4ever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Very interesting update

Tnx for pm

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: jess_27

yayy.. new story.. would love to read this one too nita..:-D
thanks for the PM.. and do send PM for future updates.. :-)
yet to read the 1st chapter..
will read soon..

love
Jessica

Thanks Jess dear.. Take your time.. .. Will send PM when I update..

Love

Nita

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Dear nita...

Awesome start to a unique concept and I see it had to do with time travel hooked already...

Thank u so much for the pm and sorry for the late reply :)

Back to the update and all I will say is "a broken heart is like a broken soul...One seeks to forget and the he other seeks to destroy...If only the mind could agree with the heart...that some events in the past are better forgotten..."

Like the way you showed sk wanting to forget and correct his mistakes but will he be able too..? That the real question sometimes we seek answers for events we xanthine control but like every story told before one can only learn from the actions it seeks...

Let'ssee whom wins his mind or heart...

Dear a beautifully scripted start full if suspense and thanks for sharing...

Loved it loads...

Take care

Razia

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: showrav24
Nita u become superwoman dear 😆
you are on roll new story great but
first I must complete ur others updates that may be 8 to 10 updates in 4 stories to cover than I start it.
& Ramadan starting Sunday so if reply late or Missing some days don't sad I will surely catch all.
Take care buddy
Bye
with loads of love

Superwoman 😆.. Kind of indeed.. I am like write and write.. I totally understand showrav.. Take your time.. I honestly can wait.. And I have saw your comments on the other updates.. I will try to reply them back soon.. But you know me I might take longer than I intend

Take care

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Swasain
Beautiful just love it.

Just can't explain how much I love it I have no words for describe such a great chapter

👏 👏 👏

⭐️ ⭐️

Update soon

Due to Ramadan I may miss it few
But will comments as soon as possible
Once read it

😉

Thanks Yasmin dear.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃.. You say you like it.. That all I need to hear to make me happy..

Will update as soon as I reply back to the lovely comments..

Love

Nita