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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Saku 🤗🤗🤗🤗

I am feeling completely awful that I haven't managed to catch up with my comments; last couple of weeks have been unexpectedly tight on various fronts so haven't managed to scrape together enough uninterrupted time to do justice to either STS or the latest chappies of Vajra, or Nynu's FM.

I shall be back on all these threads, am hoarding time for a proper, detailed comment as I always like to do on fics and authors whom I adore.

I haven't yet managed to read beyond 1B; in a sense perhaps I get an advantage now since I get to read all the lovely chapters at one go. Will be back soonest, sweetheart, and shall bore you with my take. But before reading anything more than 1A, I already know this will bear your unique stamp of out of the box creativity and imagination. I am desisting from reading other comments, since I want to be amazed by the plot elements. 😉

Lots of Love,

----Viji

Viji dearest,🤗

It is true that the thread was a different place without your lovely presence, but don't feel awful dear, we all have other commitments in the offline world that are much more important.

Please enjoy the sail whenever time allows you and tell me how you find it. I hope you will find it worthy if your time.

Please don't read comments, they're spoilers in the best sense.

So glad that you dropped by.

Loads of love ,

Saku

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Sushma98999
Amazing dear

Thank you so much!

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: iamreader

Unres!

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: iamreader

Oops I always mess up in quote & unres. My lack of sleep took a toll finally.. and using a touch screen! 😡

touch screens and IF is a disastrous combination. I know cause I'm doing the same these days. The number of typos per post makes me cringe.🤢

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: iamreader

Hehe I'm Dat creative! 😉 don't ever use a Colt for shooting my theories , rather an AK47 girl! 😃 But you always duck and dodge! Just like Gabriel of Nimmi! Sneaky imp! 👏 😆

I'm a Mario Brothers pro, that's why. Ducking and dodging comes naturally 😆

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Nita dearest,
I love having you on my threads no matter when.So come around whenever your network is in the mood and you have time. Will wait for your take.
Love,
Sakura

I love having you write on swasan. I finally managed to read first two then I saw your final update 😲.. I was plenty shocked I suppose.. I didn't want it to end.. Just go on and on.. So decided to comment once I read the final chapter.. Here you go long blabbering in next post if my network allows it until then I loved it..

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Hi Saku

I am here.. As always for blabbering.. Girl your works can make me confused and amazed both at the same time... I read the first two chapter right after I posted in vajra I am not confused about vajra.. Then I read the first two chapters and honestly no one can keep suspence like you do.. I literally felt like wow I need to know who is who and I really wanted to play detective and solve it using my brain.. So thought let reread it tomorrow and once and if i get an idea then comment on it.. Because believe me I was as always completely clueless but shocked and surprised by the chapters..

Then the next day I woke up to the fact you updated I did mini happy dance in my mind at that but the word final chapter did not go well with me.. Here I was trying to catch and understand this tale like vajra and you ended it.. Well for all my plans to reread twice before reading the final chapter went for an toss in my curiosity to read the final chapter.. So I did read chapter 3 as well and now I am no longer confused.. For all the suspence you build you do clear it in an way everyone would understand including clueless one like me.. So enough of me being clueless.. Coming to the SS.. It was such an amazing and interesting idea.. I heard about the disease as well but not really know much then what I heard.. But the way you penned it down was splendid just like the way all your works are Saku dearest..

I loved it.. Though I was clueless in the beginning as always I loved it.. Just like how I love vajra and love getting lost in the mystery in vajra.. I am sad it ended soon but I know you are busy so I understand.. Thanks for the December project of your.. Once you exams ends.. Can I get an new year project.. Pretty please.. I would be waiting.. Until then I could just go back to vajra thread and wait patiently for an update..

Love

Nita

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi Niki ,
It makes me proud as an author that the story compelled you to guess. It's a wonderful idea and reminded me of a Salman Khan movie I watched as a kid, if my memory is accurate it was called Dil Ne Jisse Apna Kaha.
However my plot line was different from this, as the third chapter shows. This would also make a very romantic tale.
Love ,
Saku

Oh yeah! Dil ne jisse apna kaha! I remember it, it had lovely Preity Zinta n awsm songs by ARR! N well dats the only thng I ever liked abt it! But nw I'm glad that u hd a lovely twist n not dat, I really cudnt digest the hero falling for the gal, jus bcz she had his lover's heart... was kind of wierd in the the old Saajan movie kinda way... I mean you either fall in love with the new gal or still be loyal to the ol' gal, or in Saajan's case 'the guy'. Bcz u dont ditch the new guy u hv loved so long wen u come to knw he isnt the one u thought he was wen u started loving! Ugh!🥱😆

Okies looks like I have not only gone off track but hv gone over to totally another rally sliding away! Sry abt dat!

Anyways hun, keep it coming!

-Luv Niki

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Oh yeah! Dil ne jisse apna kaha! I remember it, it had lovely Preity Zinta n awsm songs by ARR! N well dats the only thng I ever liked abt it! But nw I'm glad that u hd a lovely twist n not dat, I really cudnt digest the hero falling for the gal, jus bcz she had his lover's heart... was kind of wierd in the the old Saajan movie kinda way... I mean you either fall in love with the new gal or still be loyal to the ol' gal, or in Saajan's case 'the guy'. Bcz u dont ditch the new guy u hv loved so long wen u come to knw he isnt the one u thought he was wen u started loving! Ugh!🥱😆

Okies looks like I have not only gone off track but hv gone over to totally another rally sliding away! Sry abt dat!

Anyways hun, keep it coming!

-Luv Niki

I personally didn't like either of those movies. Saajan for the same reason as you said...It simply felt unrealistic. DNJAK cause it sounds funny from logical point of view, a donated heart is just an organ it won't make you fall for your donor's spouse...that's horrible!

I enjoyed reading your guess anyway. It was fun!

Love,

Saku

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Saku🤗

I called you Wicked .I take back my words ..Let me find something else ..Super Wicked😈😈 who would be laughing like buwha ha ha at plight of your readers going wild with guesses only to realize it was never what is seemed to be.

😆🤣 In last comment I was like ..Finally I figured out ..How couldn't I notice and in next update which you shocked saying completed ,before I could even think of some theories with such a twist in tale😲😲 .. What was that .. can I say Jahapana tussi gr8 ho⭐️ 👏 and then I was rofling on my state, of my theory going terribly wrong of Narrator being Ragini ..Aww God ...Lucky and Ragini are Swargvaasi's and we have Swara and Sanskaar all along ..hmm ..😲😲

Kavita ...I never thought I would say this to cavity, but yeah she was nice .That's best I can say for her and Sekhar ..He is disgusting.😡.😡That should do and now about pleasant things .. all those Swasan moments ..ahh.. that light teasing banter with breezy love in air ..my dil goes hmm.❤️❤️ Did you have more of their scenes which you chopped off to end ...If Yes ..please post them when you get free .

I loved your December project 👏⭐️.👍🏼..all happies ..A simple yet a moving tale with a superb twist .. that's what makes this stand out .It will stay for long with me.

Love

Lucky

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