Sail Through Styx A SwaSan SS complete pg 1 (12/20) - Page 16

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Saku dearest.. I am so behind in catching up with this SS.. While I love to read your SS together still I wish my network allowed me to read it soon.. Gonna try reading them tonight.. Hopefully my network allows me too and will comment once I get to read it..

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi Dyuti ,

This is a very efficient way of unres by the way.

There is no reason why we should discuss about the mystery of miss Gadodia anymore. But I have to tell you I enjoyed your theories even the wild as amazon ones. Thank you so much for being a constant throughout the sail.

Love,

Sakura

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Wow, okies I had a guess when I started reading chapter 2 B and by the end of it I'm pretty sure my guess is right, but then again, the author knows it best,right?

But anyways I can't sleep until I let my niggling doubt out of my mind bag, so to say, hehe. So here goes, Ragini is Shekar and Shomi's daughter and she is Sanky's tall beautiful love? And she passed away and Swara got her heart during the surgery. So now Sanky hates her because she has his love's heat and loves her at the same time because she has his love's heart?

I dunno where laksh fits in here but anyways here goes my guess! BTW Manchausen syndrome touch was a really cool one, even though according to my guess the syndrome here as fictional as it really is!

Hehe I guess I'm guessing too much! 😆

Anyway, I love stories which compel me to guess, so there goes...❤️

-Niki

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Wow this was beautiful finally got all the answers

This was brilliant really brilliant this explained everything swara having dual personality that shekhar gadodia he gave such pain to swara that she had slipped into being ragini and started imagining herself as ragini I hate shekhar wish there was some punishment in law for emotional torture

But I must say one line for this story when the illusion goes away reality seeks in but the reality is much much more beautiful than the illusion

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

hmm looks like im nt the only owl here ...😛

But wat is shocking is that u r ending this?????😲😲😲 So soon? 😭 I thought atleast 5-6 chapter more would be there...

I hvnt read the last chapter yet, but I'm alrdy missing this...😔

Originally posted by: iamreader

Oh I'm touched...you mentioned me on your thanks note! That was sooo sweet!

Coming to the story now.. I was somehow right in my last comment. Shekhar's love for Ragini caused Swara to sink,later losing herself. Indirectly late Ragini was responsible...I knew Sunny was Laksh from the beginning ! Just couldn't not guess Swara had split personality disorder...

Swasan love story before her illness was very dreamy... It was so beautiful that Sunny couldn't compromise with Ragini's mind in Swara's body... So he sailed through Styx...He pushed her, didn't look back, became wise Orpheus... And Swara got back her life again (Well, what's the use of living if the soul is lost?)... Chased her Orpheus... Orpheus and Eurydice got their perfect, fairy tale ending!

Another exquisite tale of yours came to end... Your writing is really exceptional... mystic, veiled, lots of confusion, enchantment, passion, twist... Come on! I can't name all! 👏 ⭐️

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Okies wow!! I seriously did not see that coming!!! I'm still stunned and my sluggish sleepy brain still needs tym to process all those torrential facts! But again wow, it truly was very interesting! Loved the end n the novelty of the whole concept!

Kudos dearie! It's a job well done! 👏

N yeah, all the very best for ur exams!👍🏼

Wish u an advanced Merry Christmas and a Very happy new 2017!

- Luv Niki

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik

Wowww I now understood the whole ss OK so swara was suffering from mauchesean syndrome...(pardon if my spellings wrong)...if I m not wrong is it same or different to split personality????
All along it was swara and sanskar one who has forgotten and one who is trying to bring her back...I loved it loadzzz...

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sakura,

I loved the whole story, and even though you mentioned in the end that you compressed a ten part story into three parts, I think the compression worked well - it was tight and left me breathless but made a wonderful reading.

I know I have not been regular, December has not been kind to me - huge pile of work - and I had been saving this to read over the Christmas weekend. But guess, Santa came in early.

I do want to write a detailed comment, it will not do justice to your writings, but might convey just how much I loved the unusual love story. I will do it, but I had to let you know this in the meantime.

Keep writing, Sakura, your gift is too bright to be hidden away, most of us are blinded by the brilliance and yet our hearts and souls are warmed by the sunshine in them. We need that warmth, so please keep writing and sharing.

lots of love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Saku

Such a brilliantly woven story, you are a genius. You should seriously start your career as an author rather than restricting it to the forums. I am sure your stories need to reach a larger number of readers.

Eventhough my guess turned right you still had a twist in the tale. So it is you who won here dear and I m happy you did. That is what distinguishes a great author from a good author. Please don't waste your talent. Seriously start pursuing a career as an author.

I wish you all the luck and love.

Veena.