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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: iamreader

Nope The syndrome is not fictional. It is a real psychiatric illness. a bit like malingering. Though the Saku had taken creative liberty to exaggerate a bit.

Nah dear I dint mean its a fictional disease. I know about Manchausen syndrome, studied about it actually😳. I just meant that I'm guessing that kavi telling Swara that she had that syndrome instead of an actual grave disease is fictional. Jus my guess.

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

BTW Saku, in case my guess is correct evn a lil, jus PM me, don't reply here. 😉I don't want it to be a spoiler to such a fab story. 😳

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

I have posted the third and final chapter to the ss. Because of the ungodly hour I won't be able to pm, my eyelids are almost dropping. Forgive me about that. Enjoy the chapter.

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Nah dear I dint mean its a fictional disease. I know about Manchausen syndrome, studied about it actually😳. I just meant that I'm guessing that kavi telling Swara that she had that syndrome instead of an actual grave disease is fictional. Jus my guess.

It's a yes to both questions. The illness is real although I exaggerated it big time. But I did get Niki didn't mean it that way...so as you'do see in chapter 3 Kavita was really lying there. so me exaggerating didn't hurt real facts much I hope...

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Sanya17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Wow this was beautiful finally got all the answers

This was brilliant really brilliant this explained everything swara having dual personality that shekhar gadodia he gave such pain to swara that she had slipped into being ragini and started imagining herself as ragini I hate shekhar wish there was some punishment in law for emotional torture

But I must say one line for this story when the illusion goes away reality seeks in but the reality is much much more beautiful than the illusion

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Sakura24
I have posted the third and final chapter to the ss. Because of the ungodly hour I won't be able to pm, my eyelids are almost dropping. Forgive me about that. Enjoy the chapter.
Love,
Sakura

hmm looks like im nt the only owl here ...😛

But wat is shocking is that u r ending this?????😲😲😲 So soon? 😭 I thought atleast 5-6 chapter more would be there...

I hvnt read the last chapter yet, but I'm alrdy missing this...😔

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Oh I'm touched...you mentioned me on your thanks note! That was sooo sweet!

Coming to the story now.. I was somehow right in my last comment. Shekhar's love for Ragini caused Swara to sink,later losing herself. Indirectly late Ragini was responsible...I knew Sunny was Laksh from the beginning ! Just couldn't not guess Swara had split personality disorder...

Swasan love story before her illness was very dreamy... It was so beautiful that Sunny couldn't compromise with Ragini's mind in Swara's body... So he sailed through Styx...He pushed her, didn't look back, became wise Orpheus... And Swara got back her life again (Well, what's the use of living if the soul is lost?)... Chased her Orpheus... Orpheus and Eurydice got their perfect, fairy tale ending!

Another exquisite tale of yours came to end... Your writing is really exceptional... mystic, veiled, lots of confusion, enchantment, passion, twist... Come on! I can't name all! 👏 ⭐️

Love,
Dyuti

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Okies wow!! I seriously did not see that coming!!! I'm still stunned and my sluggish sleepy brain still needs tym to process all those torrential facts! But again wow, it truly was very interesting! Loved the end n the novelty of the whole concept!

Kudos dearie! It's a job well done! 👏

N yeah, all the very best for ur exams!👍🏼

Wish u an advanced Merry Christmas and a Very happy new 2017!

- Luv Niki

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kojagorimalik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Wowww I now understood the whole ss OK so swara was suffering from mauchesean syndrome...(pardon if my spellings wrong)...if I m not wrong is it same or different to split personality????
All along it was swara and sanskar one who has forgotten and one who is trying to bring her back...I loved it loadzzz...

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#140

Dear Sakura,

I loved the whole story, and even though you mentioned in the end that you compressed a ten part story into three parts, I think the compression worked well - it was tight and left me breathless but made a wonderful reading.

I know I have not been regular, December has not been kind to me - huge pile of work - and I had been saving this to read over the Christmas weekend. But guess, Santa came in early.

I do want to write a detailed comment, it will not do justice to your writings, but might convey just how much I loved the unusual love story. I will do it, but I had to let you know this in the meantime.

Keep writing, Sakura, your gift is too bright to be hidden away, most of us are blinded by the brilliance and yet our hearts and souls are warmed by the sunshine in them. We need that warmth, so please keep writing and sharing.

lots of love,

Nyna

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