Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71)

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Dear Dyuti,

Nice update, at last both make peace with each other and with themselves, almost admitting that they do care for each other.

Sanskaar must have a plan, right, because he decides to "ask" agni to be released. Looking forward for the updated.

Have a safe travel and happy holidays.

Best,

Nyna

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Wohooo dyuti...

You are on roll..great update...i had soo much enjoyed this chappy..specially swasan part...finally they cleared their misunderstanding..n that stupid fight is over...it was cute..loved their nokh jhoks...now they are planning to escape...as chief is fine n healing...but it is not possible as black wolves will not allow it ever...but then comes twist..never imagine that...i m sure sanky n his gang is involved inthis attack...now curious for next part...update soon

Talia

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Dyuti,
Nice update, at last both make peace with each other and with themselves, almost admitting that they do care for each other.
Sanskaar must have a plan, right, because he decides to "ask" agni to be released. Looking forward for the updated.

Have a safe travel and happy holidays.

Best,
Nyna

Thanks for your wish Nita!but the trip got cancelled this morning 😭 😭 ! Soo sad right now. Will try to lift my mood by working on new update. And will listen "Sunn raha hai" ... I fell in love with it again... I like your replies. Your constant support will keep me writing this FF.

Dyuti

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice update..

Short n sweet, that's you!

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Wohooo dyuti...
You are on roll..great update...i had soo much enjoyed this chappy..specially swasan part...finally they cleared their misunderstanding..n that stupid fight is over...it was cute..loved their nokh jhoks...now they are planning to escape...as chief is fine n healing...but it is not possible as black wolves will not allow it ever...but then comes twist..never imagine that...i m sure sanky n his gang is involved inthis attack...now curious for next part...update soon

Talia

I'm relieved too! Finally that fight is over... It's twist time!

Dyuti

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kojagorimalik

@kojagorimalik

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Dyuti dear u just nailed it...I loved ur chapter..ur song selection was the best ...I love this song from the bottom of your heart sanskar dialogue 'kan pakdu uthak baithak karun' was hilarious just imagine sanskar actually doing it...

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
Dyuti dear u just nailed it...I loved ur chapter..ur song selection was the best ...I love this song from the bottom of your heart sanskar dialogue 'kan pakdu uthak baithak karun' was hilarious just imagine sanskar actually doing it...

Moumita baby!

Where were you ?I missed u a lot! Hmm... the song.. I thought no other Song could describe Swaragini's mental situation. Specially the lyrics. I was so tempted to give the English translation here! But it's India-forums, why should I translate hindi? 😆 . Well, Sanskar would look really cute if he take that punishment! 😳

Dyuti

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Sorry for being late and not replying on previous updates..

That maun vrat was way too much to handle for sanskar..
Thank God they are at peace now..

Loved it

Thanks

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Sorry for being late and not replying on previous updates..

That maun vrat was way too much to handle for sanskar..
Thank God they are at peace now..

Loved it

Thanks

Veena dear,

Better late than never. 😊 Hope to see you regularly. Don't forget to visit the forum after the show is over.

Loads of love,
Dyuti

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Hi Dyuti

Caught up with all Chapters ..and Its very very engrossing each update..and the way the story is moving ..Its intriguing as well👍🏼

Sanskaar turning out be agent..Swara agreeing to support him and the concern of Sanskaar which came out as anger ..then the silent treatment and then reconciling..very well done ..I am loving their equation😳

and a special mention to the ace members of Black Hawk - reminded me of hounds in ANGEL..which is my all time fav..very well thought of names and the research went behind this and your efforts are clearly evident..Kudos👏

Sorry I am late ..but I enjoyed all the parts ..

Lucky

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