SwaSan OS - Punishment - Page 2

Hi ani, first of all welcome to the forum & swasan land... 😳

Amazing OS Ani dear.. I loved it.. And Swara realizing her mistakes makes me happy and Sanskaar forgiving her is given as I know how much he loves her.. So I was kind of thinking how can Swara regret her actions once she is forgiven just like that in the show but your OS kind of made me happy because of her decision..

Hey Ani..

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Hey Ani, First of all welcome to the forum.
I am sure you will have a great time here.

Coming to the os, its amazing.
Loved it. You are saying you have bad Hindi, but dialogues are awesome dear.

Love
- Harshada

Hey Harshada,
Thank you so much for the welcome dear.

Thanks once again. I have read some of your shots and like literally I am crazy for them now. You write just AMAZING! Coming from a great writer like you, means a lot dear.

Glad you like dialogues too.
Thanks !

- Ani

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Hi Ani

The OS was beautiful! I absolutely loved it. Loved Swara's self realisation, and Sanskaar's love for her. Beautiful work. Can I hope for a part two please?

Love,
Sakshi

Hey Sakshi,
Thank you so much dear.
Really glad you liked it so much.
Can I apologise? I am sorry but I wont be writing a next part Sakshi. But I am writing an another one, completely different from show.

- Ani

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Hi ani, first of all welcome to the forum & swasan land...😳

The os was amazing dear. Loved it. Specially liked swara's confession. But i'm not happy with her decision.

And dear can i expect more stories from u?😉

Love u

Kavi

Hey Kavi,
Thanks a lot dear.
Glad to know you liked my very first os .
Yup, you can!

- Ani

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Amazing OS Ani dear.. I loved it.. And Swara realizing her mistakes makes me happy and Sanskaar forgiving her is given as I know how much he loves her.. So I was kind of thinking how can Swara regret her actions once she is forgiven just like that in the show but your OS kind of made me happy because of her decision..

This is your first work in the forum and I am sure you were nervous about it.. But I can assure you this was really amazing and do write more.. Plus as Nyna said not everyone is really happy with Swara right now so don't worry about it..

Also welcome to the forum Ani dear

Love

Nita

Hey Nita, Thank you so much!
Glad you liked this shot!
I know, she shouldnt be getting forgiveness that easily, neither from Sanskar nor from her own.
Glad this was a kind of relief for you!

Indeed! Who wont be? 😆 But thats natural also. Being my first work here, I atleast wanted it to be fine enough! Thanks for the encouragement I surely will write more.

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb.. 👏

Thank you!

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Hey Ani..

Welcome to swaragini forums...

Your OS was terrific...a good read...swara dialogues were soo touching...she realised her mistake n gave herself punishment...it was painful as swasan fan...but still i enjoyed...

Keep entertaining...hoping, u enjoy here..

Talia

Hey Talia,
Thank you so much dear.
Glad you liked the os.
Knowing how bad I am at hindi, if you liked the dialogues then it means a lot.
Hoping the same dear

- Ani

Hi Ani,.